- BDSM
- Am I a Cougar?
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All Comments on 'Am I a Cougar?'
by chloehunt
- 18 Comments
Hi.. My name is Bob.. I've just been introduced into the world of BDSM so I'm obviously a beginner but I LOVED this story and hope there more. Thank you..xo
I loved the idea of this, the plot was good but you rushed it along too fast, it should have happened over at least a week a bit more of a buildup nice characters and well described, I hope you do a follow up with this I will go look now.
A quick moving tale of suppressed desire brought out in the voice of a female protaganist. Friggin' Hot!!! Instant Favorite.
Very well written.. It took a long time for the scenes to culminate, but it was worth the wait
Enjoyable story. The evolution and development was delicious. I will read more of your works. Awesome
Author here, thanks for the kinds words everyone! I just ran out of time to write on this. That's why this story seems rushed. It was going to be heavier on romance and probably twice as long, but I was trying to get it submitted for the Summer Lovin Contest. I made the deadline, but the story isn't showing up in the contest list. The moderators posted my contest declaration comment at the beginning of the story, but they didn't add the story to the list. I don't know if the story didn't meet the contest requirements or if someone just forgot to add it. I submitted an EDIT request to remove the comment about the contest since it isn't in it, but an EDIT request can take up to a month to be seen. Has anyone else had this problem before? Despite the weirdness, I'm really glad you guys are enjoying the story. This was my first ever BDSM submission. I will have to write more since folks like it. Thanks again for the encouragement!
Sadly I am very far away from being the object of a cougar but if this was, oh, say, 50 years ago I would have felt I had died and gone to heaven to meet you. Wonderful story despite your protestations of being rushed.
Rushed or not, it was a nice hot burn with good imagery. A deadline can be a blessing or a curse and in this case it was a blessing.
I was drawn in by your excellent buildup and introduced me to bdsm in a way that didn't offend me or scare me. As a big fan as well as a big pickle , I find your prose to be fitting a true erotic master. It is a shame that the moderators seem to shy away from your sheer genius for others that have not mastered the written word as you have.
Chloehunt, thanks for this marvellous story! I don’t think it was particularly rushed but delivered a great deal of detail at a good pace.
I was a little surprised that Natalie went from a sexless woman with little experience of pleasure to a fully blown BDSM sub over the course of a day. However it was gratifying to read that they did fall in love and made a go of it in the longer term.
Now that I’ve found you as an author, I’ll be reading more of your works.