All Comments on 'Ashley Alone'

ohboy. MORE, please :)

Good start. don't stop! :)

Please, do go on. Slow & sensual with all the right build up. We have a contender here.

Though I must question how her step parents & doctors are ignorant of the quirks of her biology. She has a sick between her legs in addition to a pussy. That's something hard to miss.

Oh MAN. There's no way this isn't turning into a series, with an ending like that. And with a first chapter like this, I can't wait to read more.

This immediately strikes me as very high quality writing, and my only complaints are as shallow as "There wasn't enough". I'm definitely left wanting more, and all I can say is that I hope you write more. Actually, I'll give one piece of constructive criticism, which is that I might like to see a greater density of sex scenes in future chapters. (And, a suggestion, though you might be planning to take this route anyway. With the strong focus on oral sex in the opening paragraphs, maybe we might see some autofellatio later on? Though it seems like Ashley is no longer alone...)

You need to continue this story

This one is so hot and good. I loved it.

definitely need to followup