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Click here"You too." Allie sat up, sitting and facing me, reaching out to take both of my hands in hers. "Wanted to... so long."
My heart swelled. "Same," I said stupidly, trying to sort everything swirling around in my head into words. The desire and the love and the lust and the amazement. Words were not forthcoming. So instead, I took the hem of Allie's shirt in my hands. "Can I?"
"Of course." With that, she reached for my own shirt, and in a few seconds of fumbling, we both had them off. And once more, I couldn't take my eyes off her. Like I said, I'd seen Allie in a bikini before. I knew the sight of the soft curve of her waist and hips, and how her breasts couldn't have looked more perfect behind cloth. But seeing her at the swimming pool was nothing like seeing her sitting in front of me wearing a pale blue bra, barely veiled desire in her eyes as she gazed down at me. I blushed, remembering that I wasn't wearing a great bra that day, that my stomach wasn't anything like as flat as hers. I stopped caring as soon as she kissed me.
Allie flattened me to my bed, just like how she had done in the backyard earlier. This time, though, instead of cold grass beneath us, there was a soft mattress. And there was skin contact. I moaned into the kiss, running my hands up and down Allie's bare back. Wanting to touch all of her.
When I slid a hand underneath the back of her bra, she arched, pushing her breasts into me. -Oh, fuck-. It took a second's fumbling, but I got it undone, and she shrugged it off her shoulders, rolling me onto my side for just long enough to unfasten mine and let it drop to the floor.
My best friend was lying on my bed, entangled in my arms, naked from the waist up. The girl I was in love with was kissing me, her fingers tracing up my stomach and my rib cage. The girl I had spent so many hours fantasising about was here, and real.
Allie began placing kisses down my chin, and onto my neck, leaving a trail of heat and tingling in the wake of her lips. My head lolling back, I found her breast with my hand. "Oh god, Leah..." whispered Allie, in a voice I'd never heard from her before. I needed to hear more.
I ran my fingertip slowly around her hardening nipple, never quite making contact, and smirked at the way she writhed. Her back arched, pushing her breasts into my hand, and when I shifted my gaze to her face, her eyes were closed. I could see her teeth digging into her lip. I missed the feeling of her kisses on my skin, but there was so much time ahead of us. Right now, what I needed was to hear her moan my name again.
The circles of my finger grew smaller, and Allie's breathing grew faster, until I slowly traced my finger across her nipple. My reward was to see her hips jerk. I let my fingers play all over her breast, finding the places that made her gasp and writhe, until she threw her arms around me and pressed the hardest, deepest kiss I've ever felt onto my lips. My hand, trapped between our bodies, kept working, and when the kiss finally broke, I met her eyes. I didn't look away as I lowered my head to catch her other nipple between my lips.
Allie made a sound I'd never heard before, but one I knew I'd be hearing in my dreams for a long time to come. Her hand came up to cradle the back of my head, guiding my movements with my lips and my tongue. The salty-sweet of her skin, her softness and warmth, flooded my senses, and I couldn't hold back a moan as I ran my tongue around her taut nipple once more.
She pulled my head gently up, and I made a little noise of protest. I could have stayed there, listening to the noises of her pleasure, forever. But she lowered her own head, picked up where she'd left off trailing kisses down my chest, and I was flooded again by my own need. Allie's mouth moved down my chest, onto my breast -- fuck, as her teeth scraped the soft skin. "Mine," she said, in a voice somewhere between a purr and a growl. A second later I felt a warm, wet tongue on my own rock-hard nipple, and all of my senses went into overload.
"Ffff... fuck..." I gasped, my hips pushing up against nothing, but the seam of my jeans tight enough to turn my gasp into a whimper. Allie opened her eyes and looked up at me, slowly and deliberately wrapping her lips around my breast, and I could tell I was wetter than I had ever been in my life. Her tongue was moving perfectly, and the look in her eyes, oh god...
When her lips left my breast, I couldn't stop myself from whimpering at the loss. Her hands, though, were heading towards the button of my jeans, and I immediately moved to return the favour. As I fumbled with the zip of her skirt, I pressed my lips to her earlobe. I let my tongue touch it, then pulled it between my teeth, and her response was the exact same moan I've been hearing in my head for so long.
Once my jeans and her skirt were discarded, I pulled her close to me, wrapping my body around her. Big spoon. I could feel her body against mine, completely bare except for our underwear, and I wanted to touch every inch of her. My lips returned to her earlobe, her neck, the spot just behind her ear -- leaving kisses and bites on every area that had evoked a response from her. And as she gasped and moaned, I let my hand drift down her stomach.
When my fingers slid beneath the waistband of her underwear, her hips pushed forward, grinding into my hand, and she made a high-pitched noise made louder by the bite I placed just over her pulse point. I let my hand move further down, separating my fingers to slide either side of her clit, and fuck, she was wet. I could feel the damp fabric of her underwear against the back of my hand, and my fingers were already slick.
"Oh my god, fuck," panted Allie, her hips rocking. I had almost never heard her swear, in three years of friendship, and that word in her voice lit a fire in my mind. I slid a finger over her clit, and was rewarded with another hissing moan. Pressing my lips and my teeth into her neck and shoulder, I let my finger make tiny circles around her clit. "Mine," I echoed, as I left a mark on her shoulder that I knew would last for days. The sounds Allie was making were spurring me on, and I shifted us so she was lying on her back, and I was half on top of her. Letting my thumb slowly stroke her clit, I sank a finger inside her.
Allie's body went rigid. "Fuck... Leah, oh my god..." she whimpered as I worked my finger in and out of her. Her pussy clung tight to my finger, to the second finger that I eased into her, alongside the first. Her fingernails left tiny crescents on my back. "You're... oh fuck, Leah... I'm..."
"You feel so good," I murmured into her ear, before placing one more kiss on it and pulling away. My body was on fire, and I needed to taste her.
I kissed my way down Allie's stomach, running my tongue inside her navel for a moment. Her little squeal made my heart leap. More kisses on her thighs, and I finally slid her underwear down and off. I was between my best friend's legs. She was completely naked, moaning my name, and I could smell her arousal. Curling my fingers inside her, and keeping my eyes locked on hers, I ran my tongue around her clit for the first time.
Allie's hips bucked, her slick pussy clenching around my fingers. "I'm... oh fuck, Leah, I'm gonna..."
Acting on an evil impulse, I looked up, moving my mouth away, and keeping my fingers still. "What do you want, Allie?"
Allie's eyes were almost glazed over with desire. "Don't stop!"
"Tell me what you want," I repeated softly, letting my breath ghost across her clit. A surge of desire swept through me, and I felt my clit give a throb. Allie's moans were intoxicating. I needed to hear more.
"Please keep doing that... licking me..." she gasped. "Please let me come!"
"Good girl," I whispered, letting my head drop again, taking her clit between my lips. Working my fingers in and out once more. And it pushed Allie over the edge.
The sounds she made in orgasm intoxicated me far more than the alcohol had. Her hips were bucking and rocking, and she was crying out, moans and whimpers that turned into my name. "Leah!" After an impossibly long time, her body went limp. She flopped back against my pillows, and I shifted myself to lie beside her.
Allie flung her arms around me, pressing the deepest kiss I had ever known onto my lips. My tongue met hers, explored her mouth, letting her taste herself. When she drew away, it was barely a centimetre, her breath hot on my lips. "I love you."
We've told each other that we love each other before. I've told Allie how much I love her as she's cried on my shoulder, she's told me she loves me when I've been on top of the world and joyous that she's been sharing it with me. But none of those were on the level of that moment. There was nothing in the world like Allie coming so hard around my fingers, kissing me more passionately than I could even have imagined, looking into my eyes, and saying those three words to me.
"I love you too." Almost as soon as the words were past my lips, Allie laid claim to my mouth once more, lightly pushing me back by my shoulders. She lay me down, on my back, pulling her lips from mine to continue where she'd left off before, and I entwined my fingers through her hair, watching her with half-closed eyes. My body was tight and hot, my desire for this girl unmistakeable; the kisses she was trailing down my body left my skin tingling. It took all the willpower I had to not reach down and draw my own fingers between my legs, relieving the pent-up lust that had been building all night. Her tongue swept across my nipple, and I clapped a hand over my mouth to muffle my cry of pleasure.
"Don't do that," whispered Allie, looking up at me with a devilish grin. "I like hearing you." Sucking, licking at my nipple; kissing her way slowly to my other breast to give it the same treatment. "Just lie back, baby. Just enjoy it."
If there's any sound as hot as Allie desperately asking me to make her come, it's Allie telling me to lie back and enjoy as she brings me to the same edge.
She started trailing kisses down my stomach, and I moaned at the loss of her mouth on my breasts, but knowing where she was going now, I could just about handle the wait. She kissed a line down my stomach, and finally slid her fingers into the waistband of my underwear, pulling it down.
"Holy fuck, you're so wet," she said in a voice that can only be described as a purr.
"You think?" I gasped. "Cause of you."
"Good." I felt a light kiss on one of my outer lips, and moaned urgently, pushing my hips towards her. "You're impatient." "I've been patient for three years!" I moaned, tightening the hold my hand had in her hair. There was a second's silence as I realised the implications of what I'd just said, and Allie clearly did too. A grin spread across her face, before she returned her focus to the task at hand. Her tongue slid between my pussy lips and found my clit.
I never knew it could feel like this. I'd had sex with a couple of people before. Guys and girls. And it was fine, good even. But with just the tip of Allie's tongue on my clit, I was seeing stars behind my eyelids. Her lips and tongue moved and I felt the tip of her tongue nudge my entrance, slip inside me. My hips were rocking, silently pleading for more, and Allie answered with a finger, and then two, plunging inside me as her hot mouth returned to my throbbing clit. Fuuuuck...
I was done for.
A jumble of ecstatic words and sounds came from somewhere deep inside me as the tension that had built up all night shattered. My body couldn't contain it any more. Allie's arm held me in place, but my hips still tried to buck, and her tongue kept on licking, kept me gasping and moaning.
As my body finally relaxed, Allie gave one long, slow, final lick, sending another shiver through my body, before pulling herself back up the bed. I kissed her, less fiercely than before, holding her close to me. Our kisses all night had been passion, excitement, desire. Through this one, I did all I could to convey love. And Allie kissed me back with all she had.
"I love you," I whispered as her lips left mine. Her eyes were bright, and as soon as I spoke, her smile -- her glorious smile -- spread across her face.
"I love you too."
Leaving our clothes where they'd scattered on the floor, I pulled a blanket over us, and switched off my lamp. It must have been well past three in the morning, and I was beyond worn out. There was so much I wanted to talk to her about, but I knew how much time there was ahead of us. Time that we would spend together.
***
I'm awake, and if Allie wasn't here beside me, I'm not sure if I'd have believed that last night wasn't a dream. But here she is, curled up by my side; dark marks in the shape of my mouth dot her neck and her shoulders. When her eyelids start to flutter, I'm watching her; the first thing she sees when she lifts her head is me. Her eyes, groggy for a moment, become clear as they're looking into mine.
"Good morning."
"Morning," she laughs softly, reaching up to place a soft kiss on my lips. "Wow."
"Wow," I agree. My eyes are still locked onto hers, and for some reason, we dissolve into laughter. I fall back into a lying position, Allie promptly settling down beside me. There is so much to talk about, so much that I want to say. But this moment says it all.
I truly adore this story, especially the way that you've ended it. the girls don't rush things, nothing seems forced or awkward or uncomfortable for either
A good story!
Is there morebto their story please?
Thank you for sharing!
This is the most erotic thing I have ever read! My heart was pounding throughout! Ain't love grand.
This story was phenomenal! I'm lying here having fantasies about one of my close friends, remembering how many times I have wanted to kiss her naked breasts, and how I have longed to taste her. This story was so perfect!
So sorry to hear about your hard drive but wanted to let you know I've read this roughly 10 times and it never gets old. Beautiful writing. Seriously hope you are able to continue it. Thank you!
What happened next was that my hard drive basically spontaneously combusted and I lost the half-written sequel. :(
SPONTANEOUS COMBUSTION... 🌋 My only regret is there isn't any following chapters. Good job with the editing. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses. 5🌟's
This was my third or fourth time reading this story, and it just gets better each time. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us!
I really loved this story, just long enough to ensnare the reader, but not so long as to become a bore. You should write more like this one!
This story was outstanding!!!! Please let us know if you will ever come back to it. Thanks.
Reminds me of when my first lez love and I finally, after months of anticipation, smelled and tasted each other. In our 69 we were the only creatures, doing what all creatures want to do, living into the life force.
If this is the first 'smut' youve written, what were you writing before? And can I read it? My only complaint is that its too short!
For your first attempt at this genre it was bloody good. And it was not smut, love, it was erotic. Don't stop now, Dancing Girl, because you've got talent---this short tale was just perfect.
An appreciative Irish/Pommie bastard.
This? This is your first attempt at erotica?
DON'T EVER STOP. This stuff is amazing!
one of the best story here in literotica.with only 2 chapters..u definitely keep the interest of your readers and I definitely want a sequel..please?thank you..
-kath:)
Excited for the sequel! This is by far one of the most beautiful and well written stories I've read on here. Sensual but Sweet at the same time.
this is one of the best short stories i've ever read and seriously you have real talent if this is really your first erotica. please bring more
Hardly smut! Beautiful tender and erotic writing. I will be looking for more. Please write again!
...great! Your first effort at writing 'smut'? If this is 'smut', love, we could do with a lot more 'smut' like it. But it wasn't 'smut'. It was a well-written erotic romance with two sweet and likeable protagonists. Keep writing---you have a talent worth nurturing.
Brian
Your writing is excellent! Way, way up with the top writers. It is always amazing to me how excellent writers can put so much emotion in what seems to be so few words. I look forward to more!
The same goes for your story as well. Easy to read, and a enjoyabl image.please expand your story to include more of your friends into the story
Thanks well done
This is the first smut I've ever written. I hope it's okay.
The introduction had one word in it that most of us would accept okay. It was more than that it was real and expressed what many are looking for and only a few do find.
Love Janice
Thank you for an absolutely spectacular story. You held me in suspense from beginning to end. Your command of a writer's techniques are clearly exceptional. I look forward to reading many more of your stories. You're like a great chef proper combination of ingredients in all the proper proportions and you cooked it to perfection!! Please keep writing and give us another story sooner rather than later. Happy St. Patrick's Day And Happy Vernal Equinox. (I believe it's the beginning of fall for you) ChristieP
I really enjoyed your writing style....effortless! Great story exactly as it written, definitely left me wating more =)
Keep up the great work!
This was a enticing story. I was anxious to see what was going to happen next. It kept my attention. Great job!
I want to add my voice to those encouraging you to write more.
And while it doesn't cry out for a sequel, I'd be interested in how Allie's parents deal with the relationship, not to mention Leah's.
i just loved your story. i would have liked a little more at the end. it had all the elements of a good story and conveyed them all to the fullest. the best part, for me anyway, is that your writing style expressed the fullness of passion and emotion without the need to use expletives.
I've had this story on my bookmarks list for a few days, I will be keeping it there a bit longer. For your first story like this you have done wonders. Keep writing.
As a first story in the erotica genre you did fabulous.
I really enjoyed it... I wish we would have gotten a bit more at the end. I love to see the aftermath so to speak. The conversation that followed the beautiful understanding they they both felt the same way.
Thank you for sharing with us.
a newbie, huh? you don't write like one. this story captured my heart. it had everything friendship, love, emotion and passion. a nice slow build and no rushing.
beautiful lovemaking and tenderness.
so very well written. i can't wait to see what else you have coming. i look forward to it.
this is not smut in any way. such an amazing first story. there must be more.
thank you for sharing you wonderful gift.
Well done. Believable characters,situation and events. Looking forward to reading more from this talented author soon.
Bravo !
Lovable characters, a well written and believable story, sweet and tender emotions and hot sex - what more could I ask fo?
Absolutely loved it from start to finish
Very beautiful, well written story! You held my attention from start to finish. I hope you will be writing more in the future.
My head is full of this story, my skin is tingly and my heart is beating fast. Thank you! Beautifully written and paced: glad you didn't rush - you kept us hanging on for that final scene
Someone once said the best advice for new writers was to write about what they knew. If thatcis true, your girlfriend is a lucky woman, indeed. Your thoughtful, moving portrayal of these women was beautiful and engaging. You made us want to know these women as people, not just as sexual objects. Keep writing; you have a gift.
wow wow!! I could say a gazillion things, but your story left me speechless, hot, inlove...a movie before my eyes, I'm beyond words...
YES!
I thought I'd browse a few stories to see what other writers were up to. This stopped me in my tracks. I've never really fantasized about a Literotica story...until now. And it was warm, romantic and... well, I thought I was going to pass out. This is an amazingly beautiful and hot story. God. I need more.... Please. More...
You are talented, that is for sure! :) I love the way to you write stories. It certainly made me feel pleasant. Just don't keep us waiting too long on your next story! ;)
Thanks for the great reviews, everyone! I'm honoured you like it.
I don't have plans at the moment to write a sequel, but you never know. I have a few more ideas to write first. (I have way too much love for the "close friends falling in love" trope, but I'll try not to be repetitive.)
I had my own ideas of what Allie and Leah look like, but I didn't end up writing them into the story as I find it can kind of break up the flow. For reference, though, Allie is Chinese-Filipina, short and small with straight dark hair and an easy smile. Leah is white, a little taller with an average build, light brown wavy hair, blue eyes, freckles and a round face. But hey, they can be exactly as you picture them :)
And in case anyone was interested, this is one of the songs that inspired me - />
Wow..this story is so amazing and erotic..i want to read more about their relationship and how it grow..and more of your stories..
One of the best slow, tension building love and lust realizations I've ever read. It had my heat quickening with every paragraph.
Really well written. Wonderful description of emotional build up. Detailed and hot description sex. Welcome to Lit! Looking forward to reading more. (Don't worry about a sequel if that's not right for the story though.)
Excellent story. Very Hot! Hopefully you'll write more stories for these characters exploring their new relationship!
Beautiful in it's simplicity..... it is indeed "Hotter than Hell"
Well Done!!
The rookie hits a home run, first time at bat, first swing. Out of the park!
Don't change a thing - the lead-up was great for the story, I drew my own pictures of the characters… and the ending? Perfect spot for it. Some would ask for a sequel, but while there's certain to be some stress and hardship (real life ain't pretty - and no story is good without it, either) I'm happy leaving these two in their wonderful afterglow :)
Oh My God! That was an amazing story. Very real characters and plot line and VERY HOT Lovemaking. I don't even want to call it sex; that was lovemaking pure and simple. Just wonderful!
I agree with the others. Smut has nothing to do with this story. This was a lovely love story and I'm so glad you shared it with us. Thank You!
Please, on hands and knees, grace us with more.
Doc
This was simply an amazing story all around. I loved the slow build up, and the naughty bits were blazing. As for the one comment about a longer version of this particular piece, or the comment about being more descriptive, I don't agree. Sometimes less is more, and I think that's definitely the case here.
I'd like to see more of this story, as think there's more there given Allie's home situation. I look forward to reading more of your work, and thank you for sharing your words.