All Comments on 'Au Pair'

It was long but I understand why. There weren't any natural break points to create two or more chapters out of it. That said it was a wonderful read, and I felt his frustrations. Excellent work as always.

An enjoyable story, thanks for sharing it.

Minor typos I noticed.

carrier - should be career

exorcise - should be exercise

isle - should be aisle

That was a wonderful story and your insight into the inter workings of an autistic mind were very illuminating and gave me a better understanding in what they deal with everyday. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Good story..not as good as your chapter stories. This felt like you forced some of the details in. Still a great read

Tooooo damn long

Thanks for another well put together story. 5* Potential for unlimited chapters as the characters explore the situations from Rick’s books. I hope you do write bedroom window and storm shelter, but can’t wait to see how things go with two pregnant wives.

Thanks for the read

Sorry, could only make it through the first and last pages. The MC was a bit of a Walter Mitty type, fortunate to live in a society run and protectd by real men, who tolerate him living in his dream world.

This was very well written. Generally, I have no patience with plots like this. There was enough ambiguity in the blurb that I decided to try it with the intent of closing it out if it turned into the story I thought it may be, but the writing was good enough to keep me until the end. Nice job.

I had a really good time reading your story, I hope you continue to write and add more to your collection here

That being said I am checking out the rest of your works now.

I hope you’re considering a follow up. Having both girls pregnant and see how he incorporates that into one of his books. Having all three in bed together with the girls sharing. Maybe even bringing one of the neighbor ladies when the pregnancies affects their needs. Great story, easily 5 stars.

Great story. It was a neat twist on an all too often problem (autism) and was dealt with in a loving manner. I would love to see a sequel where both wives end up pregnant.....Keep up the fine writing!

Too slow.

a good piece of writing

i fucking loved the story, you should have made it into a series :)

I’m just enamored by stories like this that are overflowing with love between the characters. Poor Rick’s confusion was entertaining. I’ve love to see more of this family in the future.