All Comments on 'Becoming His Perfect Wife'

I can’t wait for more

omg more please! love your writing style and the way you've set things up!

Nicely done!!!

Please more!!!

Keep going please...

Please write many more chapters!

Aww, it ended too soon!

it's great, i can't wait for the next instalment

great start...time to get writing in earnest Mia!

Like the start, slow relaxed but, with the hint that there going to be major changes for the young lad to accept and perform. Looking forward to next chapter to see how the man brakes down the boi and becomes a part time Gurl.

Good start introduce, the young lad to isolation by staying on his ass with progressive orientation of tutorials teaching the wimp to female make up, now that he's in bra and panties.

Heels and hose, teaching the boi how to walk in spike heels.

This is going well. Please continue..

Keep writing boi, I want to see how deep and far you take this lad in sexual distraction and disorientation. You got a good intro but, lets see how steady, isolation, forced feminizing, stressing cross dressing, tutorials on make, hair, walking in hose and heels combine to lead this lad to a new realization of who he is and who he is becoming.

More please

The little guy saves to buy a house and then invites his neighbor to his apartment, other than that good start.

Great start, can't wait for more!

Nice start. From the title one can tell you have more in mind. I await the next chapter.

Not much to it yet. I think I would be wondering why and starting to put two and two together on why my workout plan left me looking much different than him. I would also be in a panic over any special milkshakes or special "vitamin" injections he offered.

Really liked where its going lookinh foward to more

Great start of a great story……can’t wait to see what happens next

this store has alot of potential, Give me more please

good start. like to see how its gets to the title

Short, but nice start!

Great start. Definitely want to see where this goes.

Same overused retold theme as per most of the stories here

Definitely would like to see more of this. I'd love to see where it goes. Or, well, we all know where it goes, but we want to watch it go tyere.

The “boys” look about to embark on an adventure…

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Keep writing!

Enjoyed :)

hot turned me on want to read more

Most definitely write out more to this story.

Please add part 2

It’s okay. Kind os short hard to say much about.

lovely, now im looking around the neighborhood for an in shape mature man.....

write more please.

Definitely a great beginning. The stage is set, so to speak. My "interest" was peaked! 🙂

God so hot…spinning it around and pulling on the straps… that always makes me instantly hard…

Delicate but tight little feminine straps..

More please..

JT

Great start, well written. Looking forward to more from you 5 Stars

Where is the rest?

You stopped way too early ;-)

Whoa, you’re very talented. Great job walking us through each of the pivotal moments in this story.

This is good! I am thirsty for more

Wonderful start!!!

greatvvstart, I think that the feelings you feel prior could have been expressed a little more. Its hard to think that any guy would give in to a dare such as that so easily. \\the panties probably, the bra not verry sure . great story though please be very detailed about femme clothes as us cds love them as much as anything. Dashing on to the next episode with my little clitty beginning to twitch

Jeez, don't leave us hanging! Great start, now please write more, lots more.