- Incest/Taboo
- Bitch Mother's Karma
- Comments
All Comments on 'Bitch Mother's Karma'
by KIMCANCER3040
- 7 Comments
great shit! the repetition of "bitch mother" felt a little overkill but it didn't keep me from reading it. you've got great diction and great vocabulary. loved the ending, too
... this woman needed more humiliation to atone for her treatment of nearly everyone in her life. I think that 'Bitch Mother' got off way too easy. Just saying...
The bitch deserved what she received. Payback is a dick in the mouth. I tossed off to the oral sex portion. I agree she should have received more torture and humiliation. Hopefully that would be in a second chapter. This exceptional tale should be continued. Thanks!
Wham! That's a story! I LOVE realistic, provocative writes such as these.
To each their own, but I think the mother got what she deserved. Any more in the extreme direction would have been too much for my taste.
The son got to live out a fantasy probably EVERY reader of these stories here would like to.
The ending was tender and thoughtful. It fit the scenario perfectly. This should be kept as a one-off. Anything further would be overkill, IMHO.
5 STARS! I hope to see you write more in this style. ;)