by mydeepsix
This isn’t normal behavior. How can you be blindsided by something so far out of left field that you would think your wife was hit with the ubiquitous Martian Slut Ray.
There was no legitimate reason for her actions, so either we’re missing a part of the story or this wasn’t a chance encounter.
Especially since 24 hours earlier she was declaring her love for you in a passionate embrace.
So how did she go for loving wife and partner and best friend to unbridled adulterer in one day? And without even the slightest of regret or remorse? And to accuse him of molesting their children?
Sorry but imma have to call bullshit on this as a “true story”.
You need to quit smoking dope while you write.............. aggghhhhhhhhhhhh How is this in the erotic story catagory??? How about the dumb fucker catagory.
I'm trying to figure out why this train wreck was put into Erotic Couplings. Nothing about it was even close to erotic. If this was based on a true story, I'm truly shocked, as it was way over the line of believable.
This was a load of crap. I wasn’t expecting ridiculous. I should have given it 2 stars, but, ended up being generous because the first part was good. The twist was stupid. No way the wife would be given custody living with drug addicts, pimps, and dealers. The kids were not fed or cared for properly. Yet the husband just accepted it.
I rarely agree with Whackdoodle, BUT, if this is a 'true story' I'm George Washington!!
The story had potential to be a good drama, but you failed to deliver and instead it was an uninspired mess.
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Also, if you start out by saying the story "is non-erotic", you probably shouldn't post it in Erotic Couplings. You back yourself into a corner where you are either wrong or you are wrong...
Actually, I did select "Non-erotic", but evidently the publisher changed it. Not believing it could happen in real life? Two words: "Prince Harry".
So she went from a loving wife in a a happy home to not caring about her kids and living in filth just like that? Hard to believe this is true.
This is possibly the most unrealistic story I have read on Literotica, with absolutely no explanation for the 180 degree change in her character.
Find a new wife and move on, the ex wife is scum whos easy to replace the bitch is a joke.
If you think this is crazy, you need to watch more Dr. Phil. I'm not saying I believe it, but it's not beyond the imagination. People do some crazy shit.
Too crazy to not have some factual basis. You could have written more about her time getting her degree, beyond ‘we didn’t have much time together’. Was she living away, on campus? I’m wondering about post-divorce custody. How could Howie’s apartment and their living habits -not- be cause to give custody to the father? Mike’s big mistake was that he didn’t just leave her at the campsite the following morning. Take some pics and leave.
oof, I did not enjoy that. I did until the husband was written to be so weak. The change in behavior and one-side scenarios felt too manufactured. came off nonsensical.
Now had the axe been used properly or had he left the wife at the camp with the cretons and risky propane tank I might have loved it.
Hoping she will wake up? Really no woman changes that much short of serious brain injury
I can relate to this story. My ex did something along those lines. She left me for a man that was 9 years younger Older and balding. After the divorce she left him and ended up with someone that controlled her. Lost all her teeth from the drugs, and wasn’t allowed to go to the dentist. I lucked out on my kid though, I controlled her education and had her 50% of the time. 7 years of hell til she turned 18. Within a week she moved in with me permanently. The court system isn’t for the man. Video, audio and witnesses that are neutral is the only way to get justice.
Stupid story. I mean really, no explanation of what happened to her and why she changed so dramatically, so quickly. Doesn't make ANY sense.
Stupid, manipulative people don't "wakeup". She was a complete bitch and he should have done everything possible to put her in jail and gain full custody of his kids. It's amazing what the children's testimony to a Judge will do for your case. Poor story telling.
My condolences here. Don’t ANY of you assholes out there know what homicide is for?
As a family law attorney of 23 years, even my brand new paralegal could win primary custody with what you stated about her and Howie's behavior, living situation and circumstances. First, who took care of the children when she was working her two jobs? Howie? If he had "low-level run-ins with the law," that would work against the mother. Also, unsubstantiated CPS complaints are considered by the court, even some of the batshit crazy democrat feminist (a triple redundancy) judges can see through these so-called "university divorces."