All Comments on 'Breanna'

Nice try. Ending seemed so abrupt.

Could do additional chapters elsewhere(or not) character devolopment is off to a good start for the intensity of the storyline

Liked how it started....seemed like there could have been many spin-off's my imagination took this many places it didn't go. In the end it was a good wholesome view into a vanilla life even with the Big Bang that it started off with.