- Erotic Horror
- CarousHell
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Click hereHe pulled back to the tip, just letting her abused pussy lips close around it like a kiss. He pushed forward, only an inch. She murmured something, he slid back again, teasing her. As he moved forward, deeper this time, she exhaled deeply. He pushed, she sighed, and tried to move him deeper. He pulled back, she made a sound of disappointment.
Bit by bit he moved into her. She panted in tiny breaths, begging for more. He knew she was ready. He started slowly, eventually giving her his full length.
The last of Jolene slipped away as the black's huge cock slid in and out of her now dripping cunt. She was no more than a fuck toy, and wanted it that way. She felt a climax build and pass. He picked up the tempo. Another took her. He went faster. She met him thrust for thrust. Another. She slammed his length into herself, her hands gripping the pole for support. She grimaced, her body tensed. His cock pounded her. She threw back her head, a torrent of sounds raged from her. He thrust harder, faster. She froze, a long guttural sound welled up from deep within her, peaking to a scream of pure primal release. Her body rocked as she came, impaling herself on his hardness. It rolled on and on. His powerful thrusts resumed, drawing it out.
Her noises were now unintelligble, animalistic. She moved from one blinding climax to the next. His cock swelled, he was getting ready to join her. Her hips were a blur as she tried to meet his pounding. Her pussy was swollen almost inside out, and still she wanted more. He snorted loudly, growing closer, fucking her even harder. He froze, and unloaded inside her. Moments later the overflow spilled from her overworked cunt. She kept moving, screaming as she came one more time.
The Carousel was slowing. The lights faded, the sounds and music stopped. The horses were returning to normal. She was in a sticky pool of drying sex. Her pussy was raw.
The Carousel stopped The crowd was gone. Daylight was beginning to show on the horizon.
She went to step off the ride, but the pole through her back held her in place. She watched in horror as her arms turned to forelegs, her body stiffening, becoming immobile. She felt a playful nip on her ass just before it too, turned into painted plaster. Her mind stayed aware, knowing night would come again. And again, and again.
- COMMENTS
Wow!! Amazingly hot story. I could only make it as far as the point Jolene finally reached her first, cataclysmic orgasm. I was edging along with her as she was being edged and when she exploded, I exploded. My body let go so intensely that I came more convulsively than I have ever have in my life. I was asleep almost before my climax finished and slept for several hours afterward. The visual that your wonderful story painted was the most erotic image my mind's eye has ever seen. No question, this story will join my must-reads for those times when I'm desiring to self-pleasure. Thanks so much for the wonderful tale!
You used excellent imagery in describing the carousel--I could visualize it as I read.
The images of Jolene's physical and emotional collapse seemed realistic.
BelleJ2009
I don't think Jolene deserved anything she got, but there is something about this story that keeps me coming back, again and again. My favorite literotica story. Thank you.
I came twice... what better compliment could there be to a piece of erotica delectably written xD
Is that even a word. I know for really good music, you say it has infinite replay value. What about a story that you can go back to year after year after year and still get a huge charge from it? Re-readability? I don't know what you call it, but this story has it. Great. I've been dumpster diving for great erotic horror stories, but time and time again I have to go back to the great ones because they are so few and far in between.
I loved it, very different and reminiscent of a twilight zone story.
This along with 'hunted' are the two best stories on this site.
This would be a great submission for Year's Best Fantasy and Horror. Very well written, I was thoroughly drawn in and had goosebumps throughout. I don't think they take stories with this much sex but it is a thought and definitely meant as a compliment to your writing and the story.
This may be the best erotic story I have ever read! (and I read a LOT!)
Impressive... just the right amount of scary and hot, mixed up into one. Fantastic! Thank you :)
That was, as titled in this comment, surreal and beautiful. I'm going to get shivers the next time I go to a carnival, methinks...
pretty new to this fantasy horror stuff, but wow this is GREAT. i'm revving like a mofo ;)
fabulous imagination shown here, and oh, so fucking sexy. Been a favourite of mine for some time x
Wow, this is so different from the usual norm you get on here. Bizarre, sexy and scary and spookily enough i was listening to a song called carousel whilst reading this. Five stars!
~Miss Deviant~ x
this story was so good. made me cum twice! good job.
I adored this story. Congratulations to the author for making this the most exiting peice of writing I have seen in a very long time. I was rivetted. I have two fears now: that of being a prick tease, of which I know I rank highly; and secondly I will not ever go near a Carousel! Second thoughts, I may just walk by on a moonlit night!! Again, well done to the author. I will be reading this over and over again!
Absolutely LOVED this story. It was very sexual and oh so arrousing.. But beyond that, it was amazing. Such a creative story line, very unique in so many ways. ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL. KUDOS.
thank you so much, i thougrally njoyed it... with my hand rubbing against my clit, i came like never before, thanks.
That is such a wonderful, yummy tale of entrapment, torture, and helpnessness. The details were equisite, the sensations and even the movements. This story is, without a doubt, one of the ones destined to be near the top of my favorites list. t'Sade.
Your story has been mentioned in the Author's Hangout SPOOKY BLAST FROM THE PAST Review Thread!
From a fellow-bohunk.....Most excellent - I thoroughly enjoyed your work. Look forward to more
an erotic horror story that is actually worthy of the genre, thank you so much. Way hot!
I must say, that is one of the best erotic horror stories I have read for quite some time. The way the tale drew me in, taking me deeper into its nuances was thrilling in itself. I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.
I can only echo the comments before mine - excellent job, and my favourite element (even more than the obvious) is the creepiness :) Kudos.
Not even I can find fault here. Technically adequate, but in terms of content...breathtaking.
I relished it and appreciate it.
Make it so it hurts your face,
-D-
of the most inventive imaginations I've ever seen. That story was hot and scary, creepy. I'll never look at another carousel the same way again...
Really! I let the pot boil dry while I read this story- burned the handle right off it...
This is true erotic horror, scary and compelling.
This story is excellent. The idea is brilliant and like great horror writers such as Lovecraft it works on the futality and seeming banality of the situation. All she wanted to do was tease a circus hand and now she's an unwilling but responsive sex slave forever.
Very haunting story, beautifully written. An excellent read, Ex Bo!
Fantastic story,gripping to the conclusion. Hope you writ and submit many more
What can I say? What a hauntingly scary story with an erotic twist. Well done Daddio!