All Comments on 'Consequences, Sandy Ch. 03'

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If you're like me you'll want to review before finishing the tale.

The technical stuff is excelent it is a pleasure to read an author who can actually comunicate in English, who understands how to use a dictionary, the structure and flow of a well crafted tale. *grin * ok my small rant over.

As always your writing is thought provoking and the love the characters display for others is inspiring.

But good read. Just me but they have held the high ground so well I feel Jenn and Martha should wait till after their divorces are final not just the hearings to fully integrate into the family. Really glad I reread the first two chapters, I had forgotten how good they were.

I went back to re-read and as before liked it great deal - this is true to the original and to you I am glad you are picking up old threads to keep making new cloth -

Nice work as always and thanks for sharing -

I think that you should have posted the first parts on this log in as well.

Anyway, about this part, still good, so many names I do get lost sometimes, it's easy to see you have problems with "The Church " in one way and another, plenty of good arguments in this to get a real fight going in some places, but well put down on here