- Incest/Taboo
- Coupons Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Coupons Ch. 02'
by iWriter4U
- 5 Comments
It might not be exactly the same but I've definitely read this story before. Your first chapter is almost one for one. Wish I could remember the original story.
The stuff with him fucking his mom ruins the story for me. That's a crying shame considering that you wrote something really fantastic for the sister scene:
"I've waited so long, Simon. I begged Mom and Dad to have you sooner, but they made me wait. I have built this moment up in my mind for so long and I'm about to become one with you for the first time. I love you so much!" she said, a single tear streaming down her face."
That paragraph combined with Courtney going on the emotional roller coaster ride causing her to bawl her eyes out was some of the best stuff ever. 3/5
- You have seen this story before. It was taken down for some editing and re-posted along with many other stories. Take a look at my bio for more information on me and what I'm doing. This series was posted in three parts and after reading them myself, I knew my late husband intended to write more. Instead of additional chapters, I extended chapter three to be a better and hopefully more fulfilling end. When I say I edited it, I did not adjust his approach to character development as many pointed out in the comments of chapter one.