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Click here"I wanna fuck," she mumbled. I didn't think she was talking to the camera anymore. "Just fuck me. Please. Oh, god. I need it. Feels so fucking good."
My thrusts were getting longer, moving farther back as I pushed up along her slit. She was panting.
"I'm gonna cum. Oh, I'm cumming. Uhhh! Ohh!"
She began trashing, moaning out loud. Her pussy spasmed and juices flowed down her thighs, spitting on my cock. She grabbed her phone, bringing it up her face, looking into it.
"I'm Heather and I'm fucked."
She turned it off and set it aside, moaning as she looked down, watching as my cock stroked across her pussy.
"Mmm, okay, you can stop now, Daddy."
But I didn't want to stop. I pulled my cock back, and when I thrust forward, her labia caught the head of my cock. She screamed as three inches ripped into her. I froze in place, looking down. Her legs curled up to her chest and she began whimpering.
"Ow, ow, ow! Take it out, Daddy! Take it out! Ow, fuck! Ow. Daddy, please, take it out."
I slowly withdrew, pulling out of her pussy. The head of my cock was covered in blood. Fuck. Her hand came down, gripping her pussy lips.
"Ow. Oh, no. Daddy, you popped my cherry."
"I'm sorry, baby, it was an accident."
"Ow," she whined. "It hurts so much."
Her legs clenched closed as she rolled on her side, curling up as she gripped her pussy. I could see blood on her fingers. But the damage had been done, and my cock was steel. I grabbed her ankles, turning her back over and spreading her open.
"Daddy?"
"Baby, it's too late."
I moved closer.
"No, Daddy. No."
"Baby, I need it."
She shook her head. "Please, no, Daddy. Your cock is too big. It doesn't fit inside me."
"I'll go slow."
"No, daddy, stop!"
I brought the head of my cock to her pussy lips and pushed. She cried out, reaching down, grabbing my shaft, squeezing to stop it, but it was so slick with lube and pussy juice it moved through her hand effortlessly. Whatever was left of her hymen gave way to me. She screamed, her hands flying up to push my chest back.
"Ow! Daddy, please! My pussy's too little for you! Fuck! You're hurting me!"
"Almost there, cupcake," I said, shoving my cock into her again.
She yelped as three more inches disappeared inside. I was more than halfway in, six inches resting deep in her pussy. I stopped my descent as she whimpered, grabbing at me. She took her hands away, sniffling and crying, covering her face. Her knees came up to her chest, her legs trying to close.
"Daddy, your big cock hurts. Take it out."
I reached down, stroking her clit. "Just relax, cupcake. I'm almost done."
She whimpered. "You took my virginity."
"It was an accident."
She opened her legs and looked down, seeing my cock sticking out of her. "It was not. You shoved that big, mean, fat cock in me even when I asked you to stop."
"I'm sorry, baby. Do you want me to take it out now?"
She nodded, sniffling. "Take your cock out of me. It's not supposed to be in there."
I slowly withdrew. She was still whimpering, but as the head caught at the end, I pushed back in, forcing my cock in deep.
She groaned loudly, reaching down, grabbing my cock, squeezing it, her nails digging into my shaft.
"Nnoooo! Fuck. Daddy, stop! It's too big for my pussy. Why do you keep on pushing it back in?"
"I'm sorry," I said. "I'll take it out now, okay?"
She nodded sadly at me. I pulled back. She was still holding the shaft, and then I drove forward. Her head fell back as she whimpered and moaned.
"Daddy, stop!" she said. "We're not even recording anymore! You don't have to fuck me! Stop pushing it in." She looked down between her legs. I was deep in her now, her hand grasping the root. She took it away. "It hurts. It doesn't fit right, see? Take it out. If you need to cum, I'll suck your cock like before. Please, just stop fucking me. It doesn't feel good."
"Okay, I'll take it out."
"Promise? Or are you just gonna pull it out and shove it back into me again?"
"I'm gonna take it out," I said.
I started to pull back. She watched inch after inch appear.
"You're going to shove your big cock back in me again, aren't you? I know you are."
"Baby, I wouldn't do that," I said, and then I shoved it back into her. Her body tensed up, her legs curling up to her chest. She whimpered with her eyes closed.
"Stop it, Daddy. Stop. I knew you were going to shove that giant cock back into me. Stop it, please."
She pushed against my chest, urging me to pull out. I withdrew and she gave me her sad eyes.
"Not again. Please? Not again. You don't even care about my movie. You just wanna fuck me."
I rammed it forward, making her cry out as I hit her cervix. She whimpered and a fear tears rolled down her cheek.
"Stop fucking me. You're being mean, Daddy."
"It slipped again, baby. I'll pull it out quicker this time."
"You will not. You're just going to keep fucking me until you cum. I know you are."
"No, I'll take it out."
I pushed in harder, giving her another inch. I felt the bottom of pussy. There was no room left.
"Ow! It's too deep, Daddy! Stop it! You're not listening!"
I kept it buried in her, leaning my weight down, my cock bending inside of her. She cried out, whimpering, her lower lip trembling.
"Daddy, please, take it out. If you don't, you're going to cum in my pussy."
"Do you want me to cum?" I asked, slowly drawing back before pushing forward.
She groaned, shaking her head. "You can't cum. You'll make me pregnant. I'm not on anything. We weren't supposed to start fucking. You were just supposed to pretend to put your big cock me." She looked down, seeing her labia wrapped around me, a white film of jelly and pussy juice coating my shaft, helping me in and out of her. "See how much you're stretching my pussy? It's not supposed to stretch like that."
"You really want me to take it out, baby?"
She nodded, biting her lower lip. "Take it out. It doesn't fit right inside me."
I pulled back again, just until the head was ready. I looked up at her.
"Take it out, Daddy, please," she whispered. "No more fucking me tonight. You can't keep shoving that big cock of yours into me. You're not supposed to do that. I'm your daughter."
I finally pulled out, the head of my cock feeling the cool air outside of her burning hot cunt. Her hand came to rest over her pussy lips, rubbing them as she whimpered. They were red and inflamed, with specks of blood on her inner thighs. I was still rock hard and needed to cum, but she was crying now. She rolled over onto her tummy, keeping her legs parted as she rubbed her pussy.
"Ow. Daddy, you're so mean. You fucked me so hard. I can't believe you did that. You just used my pussy."
"I'm sorry, Baby," I said. "I couldn't help myself. You asked a grown man who hasn't had sex in years to put his cock in you."
"You were supposed to pretend to fuck me, not really fuck me. I just wanted to make a stupid video. I didn't want you shove that whole big cock into my pussy. I told you it wasn't going to fit. Why didn't you listen?"
I was staring at her pussy as she massaged it, her legs open. I crawled forward. I couldn't help myself. I needed more. I let the head of my cock come knocking on her fingers.
"Daddy? No, stop."
"Let me in."
"No, Daddy, no. You've fucked me enough. I told you, my pussy's not made for a big cock. I'm all red and sore. Don't put it back in."
"Move your hand."
"Daddy, stop it. You said you didn't want to fuck me, remember? You shouldn't be trying to shove that big thing into my tiny pussy."
"Let me fuck your pussy till I cum."
"But I'll get pregnant."
"I'll pull out. Just move your hand."
"But my pussy hurts."
I tapped her hand with my cock. "Let your father finish. You owe me for everything I've done for you. Now, I need to fuck. Move."
She pulled her hand away from her pussy. "Please, be gentle with me, Daddy. I'm not used to fucking. It's my first time, you know? You can't just shove---ow!"
I shoved into her, burying eight out of eleven inches. She reached back behind her, grabbing my shaft again to stop it. She lifted up on her knees, spreading her legs, giving me more room. I was done being gentle. I pulled back and then pounded forward. She cried out, her whole body moving forward. She reached for her headboard to brace herself. I began fucking her with abandon. She was whimpering and sniveling.
"Slow down! Please! You're splitting me apart. It hurts. It hurts so much. Daddddy!"
I was shoving hard into her now, so hard her knees were lifting off the bed.
"Gentle!" she begged. "My pussy! You're hurting it. Daddy, slow down, please! You're too big! Please! I'm not used to it!"
I was going to cum. Her pussy was so tight, she was strangling me. I don't think I could have pulled out even if I wanted to. I slammed into her one last time and my cum exploded from my balls. She screamed as my entire length disappeared inside of her. Her hands reached back, grabbing my stomach to push me away, but I wasn't moving.
"No, no, no!" she whimpered. "You came in my pussy, Daddy."
"Fuck! Feels good," I said, grabbing her thighs, holding her in place. I slowly began sliding my sensitive cock in and out. She kept up her whimpering, but I was done now, softening. I slowly pulled out. She fell on her side, rolling over, looking down between her legs. Cum was running out.
"Oh, no. Oh, fuck." She looked up with sad eyes. "Daddy, you came all over inside my pussy!"
"Sorry, cupcake."
"What if I get pregnant?" she said.
I crawled up the bed, my half hard cock bobbing. She pulled her neck back, but I reached out, taking her head, pulling her in. Blood and cum smeared across her chin.
"No, Daddy, no. It's all dirty."
"Open."
"Daddy, stop," she said, but as she opened her mouth to speak, I slipped the head of my cock in.
"Suck it."
She mumbled, whimpering but obeying, nursing on my cock, her throat contracting as she swallowed. I fed her a few more inches, reaching her throat. Her tongue was working overtime, moving my soft cock around.
I groaned. "Fuck. That's good. I'm so proud of you, baby."
She whimpered as I pulled my cock out of her mouth. She licked her lips to get the messy cum off her lips.
"Daddy, why'd you make me clean it off?"
"Because I'm a bad father."
"You came in pussy, Daddy. I'm going to get pregnant because of you. You've ruined my life."
"You'll be okay. That's what morning after pills are for." I stood up from the bed. "I'll leave you some money in the morning. Go there after school and take a pill."
She sniffled as she watched me dress, still massaging her inflamed, red pussy. "But what about my pussy? When I'm ready to have sex with a boy, he's going to know I'm not a virgin."
"I know, baby. But you're the one who wanted this."
She had a pouty frown. "I didn't want you to fuck me. I wanted you to pretend. I can't believe you shoved that big thing into me, Daddy. You used me like a whore."
"It was an accident. It slipped in."
"But you wouldn't take your cock out when I asked and you kept pushing it back in."
I kissed her forehead. "I think that's enough videos, don't you?"
"You're mean. That wasn't right, Daddy."
"I told you this was going to happen," I said, shaking my head.
I left her alone in her room and took a shower, cleaning my shaft off. I went to bed early that night. The next morning, Heather wasn't speaking to me. She didn't even leave me breakfast. I went to work, and when I came home, I found a pizza box on the table. I opened it and saw two slices were missing. I guess this was dinner.
A month passed with Heather barely speaking to me, just "Hi," "Bye," and "Dinner's on the stove." I knew I had ruined our relationship. I actually blamed her. I may have lost control and started fucking her, but she's the one who put herself in that position. She had begged me to rub my cock up against her cunt. What's a father to do?
It was another Sunday when she came to me. I was eating Chinese takeout, reading a magazine. She sat down at the table, giving me those big, sad, blue eyes.
"Daddy?"
"Yes?"
"I need to talk to you about something."
I put down my chopsticks. "Baby, I can't keep apologizing."
She shook her head. "It's not that. I want to tell you I forgive you, that I'm not mad at you anymore."
"Well, that's a relief. Maybe things can get to normal around here. I love you a lot, Heather."
"I know, Daddy. I love you too. But I have a favor to ask."
"Okay?"
"I need your help to make another video."
My jaw dropped. "Another one?"
She nodded. "This time, the dare was anal."
I sighed. There was no point arguing with her. "I'll get the lube."
- COMMENTS
So...I disagree with other commenters and really...loved this story. There are few well written here, this is a well written one. It had some twisted humor, and yes, was rape...but also what I'm into (as fantasy). I am hot and bothered and excited to read more.
Rape is rape!!! You owe ME 25 *. This should be taken down from this site. Shame on you.
This was not “reluctance”, this was flat-out non-consent. And, yes, I agree with other commenters that you need to add “rape” as a tag. Did you somehow forget that someone can say no AT ANY TIME, even if it is during a consensual act? The story was okay up to that point. Then it hit the disgust button.
Oh and the end… way too over the top. If he was too damn big for her pussy, he’s gonna annihilate her with anal. Especially since he doesn’t seem to understand how to go slow for the sake of accommodation. Or listen to his daughter’s pain. Or do anything besides blame it all on her… gross.
The writing is pretty bad, no one talks like this. I know it’s porn so I’m not expecting Shakespeare, but you made this 18 year old sound like a 10 year old.
Plus, right at the beginning, she says “my eighteen year old friend”. Nobody says that.
Would’ve been a fun story if the writing wasn’t so…fake.
I was really enjoying the first few chapters, the buildup, the leading into it. But when he suddenly flipped from "oh no how can I do this" to "I don't care if I choke her/hurt her, in raping her now" it was way too abrupt, jarring, and off-putting. And frankly unnecessary, the story was great before that.
I rarely rate story as “disliked,” but this was just stupid. The rape, the set up, but most of all the basic ignorance of female anatomy made it ridiculous. Learn where and what a hymen is before you foolishly describe the whole process inaccurately, because most of this made no sense.
The perfect combination of rape fantasy/daddy daughter incest.....that was hot. I just wish he'd been more forceful in the last chapter....
The category your reading is non consent reluctance. If you don't agree with it or like it, get out of this category. This story was great, the fantasy is amazing.
Story was good. It did seem like rape but it made it exciting. The ending could have been better
oh. it would have been so much hotter if she got lost in the moment and decided she did want him inside of her, rather than him raping her while she cries and begs him to stop. disappointing.
The father's sudden turn from caring about his daughter to flat out raping her was jarring for me. Normally with these stories there's at least a turn where the other party gets into and loses themselves in the pleasure of it but not here. She was in pain the entire time and begged him to stop. I think this might be the first story I've read on here where it really was just straight up rape.
unnecessary abuse - if the man loved the woman he would help her to relax first - let her set the pace by lying back - and make the video when he was really fucking instead of faking. She has to earn her name as an big cock slut she wants to be seen as. Same with the cock sucking - let her try and practise first, help and explain and then make an stupid contest-video. Because everyone today wants to be an pornstar in school. Further - they already did so much, then he could at least make it up by teaching her how it will be good for her and some tricks for her - not for himself. But this would require to be not an total asshole.
Abrupt ending with the father not caring at all about his daughter's pleas. That's rape.
This story has it all... loved the top notch writing, the quips, the "realness" between the father and daughter in terms of a friend + father/daughter relationship. Really quite impressive!! Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Are such crazy dares really common in high school in western countries?? I am shocked. Discussing sexual life among friends is okay but this was too much and how was she so proud of her video getting circulated in the school. Wasn't such video too personal stuff?
That´s the difference in a story written by a man or a woman. In stories written by women there is more love and less to none insane violance. It could have been a real love story, or a fun story, but the rape ruined it. That was unnecessary.
Second reading. Hoo boy. It just got better than I remembered. One observation though: Curious as to why so many who post on Literotica seem to favor redheads . . . . 👍
All I can say is “WOW” great story. I can’t tell you how many times I have wanted to do that to one of my daughters.
Very well written, both plot-wise and in terms of language, and unexpectedly funny. I would reduce the number of times she falls for "I'm pulling out" or make it more explicit she is fooling herself to avoid accepting the truth. Fantastic ending.
Awesome story! I love the bare feet details. I am going to read all of your stories. Thank you for sharing them!!!
Well a girls vagina is very adaptable it will stretch out to fit. Heather will need to learn to use her Daddy’s Cock and the more she uses it she will start to Love it .😻😍. IF he is bumping her Cerxex her Uterus will extend and provide more room. Very good Story Hot FIVE STARS⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️💘🧨🧨🧨🧨🧨😻
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Yes, non-con. But the author led us down one consensual path (very hot), then turned dad into a rapist. One can still make the point that we shouldn’t criticize as the category is reluctance/ non-con but the author could have kept the story on the same ‘fatherly reluctance’ track as before and still have a great story. Overall, very good and I’d like to see more by this writer.
I love how you post something in NONconsent and somebody always has to chime in with "it was rape!"
5 Stars man. Loved it.
Hmmm. It ended up being outright rape. That was a bit much.
And, even without the rape part, it was pure sexual abuse.
It seemed like it should have been a really HOT turn-on, but ended up being pretty harsh.
There were at least a few spelling errors. Those were disappointing.
Ya.... noncon is a slippery slop from fantasy that works for all involved to straight on sexual assault. If I met this man I would shoot him in the nuts.
Great story! All these people whining about the 11" dick.....hate to tell you folks, there are guys out there that have 11" though rare they do exist. Just because yours is only 3" doesn't mean other guys have bigger ones. Ya'll really need to get over it.
Fucking crazy. I was thinking rape but it was more crazy than serious depiction. Perhaps you should stick with the comedy.
It was going along fairly well, but that anal line at the end totally ruined it.
unless she's 7'1" herself, no way she can take 11" without some serious pain, if at all. I get the 'doesn't fit' thing, but jesus..
I'm not sure if this is in the right section? 🤷♀️ Seems more incest than noncon.
Not my usual kind of read, so I'm not going to rate.
And 11" does exist in the real world. I have found several of them. Are they really that rare?
So glad this was brought back. This is one of my favorite stories on this site! Hot as fuck.
It was a really good story. Being a male, I can see how things could get out of hand in that situation. I am glad I didn’t have to experience anything like this. I had sons and one came to me crying he got his girl friend pregnant. They have been married now for over 25 years.
Hello and hooray! Welcome back, Daddy it Doesn't Fit! Thank you, Literotica editors 💖, for restoring the story back to the site. Lit briefly had to remove it over some confusion about the characters ages, so I have made a few edits to ensure everyone knows, of course, the characters are over 18.🔞 100% understand & agree!
Thank you all for reading and your numerous comments over the years (I read them all!). I'm humbled this story has reached 2m views. If it reaches 4m, maybe I'll edit it again and change MC's dick size, since ya'll are always leaving comments about how it's too big and there need to be smaller penis sizes in a fantasy story called 'Daddy, It Doesn't Fit.' 🤣
'Daddy, I Guess It Fits' just doesn't have the same ring to it😂
It was going to be good until you got to "eleven inches." That belongs in a comic book. I can't read something that fucking stupid.
Great story - Finally someone wrote a fairly accurate description of what it's really like to rupture a hymen - None of this crap where two seconds later she has a screaming orgasm - nicely done . . . .
Was hot and kinda sexy up until he raped her. If the story was headed that direction it would have been better if it was welcomed and enjoyed by the daughter
Your approach to a very delicate situation was thoughtful, realistic with a touch of humor. Very well done!
I only wish my Dad was the one that took my cherry. Just like in your hot fucking storyline.
And you sure this was your first time ?? 😜😜
This was very hot. Things happened at a steady pace not loosing excitement and progressing just fast enough to be a great masturbation tale. 5 stars.
Bill S.
Be careful what you ask for. I have to take the father's side in that he did try to warn her what might happen, knowing his years of lack of sexual contact. Also if she was so worried about her virginity and all why was she so excited about becoming a 'celebrity' at school and 'everybody' seeing her video. Peer pressure sure is a demon sometimes as is a man thinking with his 'little head'!
I always finish a story even when it’s terrible. The 11 inches is completely ridiculous and there’s no way she would forgive him for raping her or let him do anal afterwards. The hymen part is also stupid like someone else said.
Very HOT story...good writing. It kept me leaking throughout the story. Keep the stories cumming!
Ohhh come on, you complain about 11 inches (and some of do have 11 inches it is not a picnic) but be honest 8 or 9 inches would have been to big for her virgin pusssy. And do not play the rape BS card...... if she did not want to get fucked she should know have taken the dare. Thuth is she love the attention of being an easy target for recognition of showing herself as a sex object. She knew she was going to show a video of a cock in her pussy. She is going to show her pussy with a cock in it to the whole school. Videos never go away, just wait to be re-discovered. What do want to bet that her future husband and probably later in life someone in her place of employment will see them. So Do Not try the BS of playing the rape card. I have no problem with Daddy fucking her. I really have a problem with her taking 2 then 3 inches having an orgam and some form of passion not taking her over..Keep in mind the plan was for Daddy but she would have let her neighbor fuck her. Good story with some exceptions to the logic.
come on 11 inches, never seen one that size in porn, just too crazy, the story line was ok though
Started out decent, then it turns to a messed up rape fantasy from a sexist father. Not worth the read
Crazy awful rape, but it is hot. Most men would do it. Any port in a storm. Very beautifully written.
Perfect. She needed to be fucked like that. She wanted it and daddy took it. I cum every time I read this!!!
I want to give you fair credit for the quality of the writing. The quick, snappy dialogue, the perfect pauses between, the initial characterizations of the MCs, the easy setup of such an insane premise. Honestly, I spent the first half of your story doubled over with laughter and couldn't wait to finish it. You have a real gift for humour and I hope you'll be exploring this side of you more with future stories.
Where you unfortunately lost me was in the second half as some others have mentioned. I know, I know. It's NON CON. When I first started reading it, it was the humour that really grabbed my attention. I felt instead that I was reading a hilarious screwball comedy where the clueless but earnest teenager makes an outrageous demand of the harried and mortified parent. I was hooked.
Then the pendulum swung and the previously caring Daddy Jeckyll turned into the sociopath rapist Mr. Hyde. Again, I know it's NC. But the change in tone and direction was so sudden and jarring I got whiplash. It wasn't just disturbing to read, it didn't follow any logical progression in the story. Fantasy or not, it didn't make sense. Dad starts off being a concerned, loving and openly emotional father only to switch personality and disassociate himself entirely from the awful abuse he was perpetrating on his own daughter whom he loved, even to the point of blaming her for it.
I think your writing skills are certainly good enough that you could write either a deeply compelling NC or an entertaining comedy/farce with equal aplomb. Just not in the same story.
Lastly, a sincere thank you to a previous ANONYMOUS reviewer for sharing the ACCURATE location and description of the hymen. Writers and people in general: PLEASE TAKE NOTE. Our bodies are indeed fascinating. Please take some time to learn just how much. :)
Loved the story. The non consensual part made it hotter. Loved how he kept ramming into her and came inside her. Waiting for a sequel.
Hot and everything but the stuff about the hymen was 💀💀 Please google female anatomy to avoid spreading/propagating misinformation about virginity and hymens etc. It isn't some barrier you can feel a few inches in, it's a thin stretchy membrane right at the entrance and it doesn't obscure it unless there is a medical issue (perforated hymen) - it stretches the first time you have sex and can tear slightly if it's put under lots of stress, which is worsened if the woman isn't wet enough or if the dick is very girthy. Bleeding isn't super common. The idea that it's this barrier the dad felt with his dick a few inches in is ridiculous.
Hated the way the father turned out to be....first he was loving and caring and he easily turned into a rapist and a child abuser. was a good story until the real dad showed his ugly head.
Hey Anon a day ago. Anal is fir her not him you fucking dumbass. Each video was of her. Why the fuck would it now be of her recording him taking it? The confused one is you. Lmao. Can read, but not too bright in the head are you? Loser
anal ruins the entire 3-part series, unfortunately, even though it's just a couple lines in this one, it proves he's some closeted, confused dude, not a straight man.
Love that little girl she just horny glad she got stretched good the first time
I always wanted to fuck my daddy he too had a huge bulge he wanted it too but neither of us had the nerve to approach the other
Guy. NON. CON. it means not consensual. Basically rape. Don’t read a story that is non con and then complain that you didn’t want to read that.
...for the sake of discussing reality just for a moment, any father who finds themselves in initial scenario has badly failed as an adult and a parent.
It's the parent's job to set a framework of rules that their child learns to operate under so as to avoid pitfalls and how to operate without falling afoul of social and moral condemnation by their peers.
"Normal" is another word for "stable" behavior. Unstable behavior gets people hurt and - at extremes - killed. Well, more people. It's not a zero sum game - it's a constantly fluctuating number.
In short - if your child or the youth you are responsible for raising feel it's appropriate to ask you this question, seek help.
You should have it continue into anal and we’re the dad notices the daughter has a slight baby bump but she says it’s not and they go to the doctor and find out that she pregnant and she starts crying but he says he love her and they move away get married and raise there sons or daughters and then they keep making videos
I LOVE how he went from reluctant participation to getting exactly what he wanted. Mmmmmm
Best story I’ve read on literotica! Loved the dialogue. Loved their dynamic. Perfect!!
Why would y’all read a story that is specifically in the non con category and then call the author sick for making it a non con story 💀 like first of all it’s fiction, second of all if you’re not into that then maybe don’t go around reading stuff that’s in the non con category
I agree with anon about this story being related to rape in real life. That being said, 5/5
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A pussy doesn't need to be trained but her ass will need to! Hope she loves her dad's and his big cock and begs him to breed her.
Prime example how men set themselves up to be accused of rape. Before his full on assault, she begged him for these sexual acts no matter how many times he said no and then complained when he gave in and did exactly as she asked (not talking about the assault). On the first complaint put it back in your pants, say it's o.k. you're not ready and leave the room, don't fuss. No matter how much they begged for it, if they begin to complain, that means for whatever reason the person is no longer sure of what they want or has changed their mind. Leave the room or risk ending up in court.
But the story itself was well written and a good story.
This may be the 30th time I'm reading this story in 5 years. It's still great ❤
Dad needs to go to prison followed directly by going to hell. What a piece of shit. I admit the story was well written and creative. My wife was raped by her uncle decades ago, when I met him I put him in the hospital and the family knew I tried putting him in the morgue.
She couldnt help it, she was triple dog dared.
You can't back down from a triple dog dare.
Incest is soooo wrong. I feel guilty about almost splooging in my pants reading this one. I would have loved the guilty pleasure of daddy dropping a load up his daughters ass.
I absolutely hate people who read stories in n/c then complain that there is rape. You chose to read a story in noncon category.
Started out sexy. But rape is rape, and I didn’t want to read a story about rape. Should have been less forcing.
just a bit of a turn on, after all it is just fiction and she did ask........................
Started out great but I absolutely hated the rape play (or was it actual rape?) at the end.
I loved it. It was unique and exciting. Good job. I appreciate you. Keep writing.
The first tow times I bought she was dared, when she came home for anal, I think she was doing the daring!
You're a sick bastard................
Forget the father part.....deliberately hurting a woman like that is inexcusable....
Are we sure the Daughter hadn't set the entire Dare thing up from the beginning as a way to get Daddy to give her his big cock she had spied on in his shorts and around the house as almost Every family member has at one time gotten a glimpse of the other people in the house
first of all, when you came onto this, you didn't have to finish reading. if u dont like it, don't read it. there's no need to be losers and post hate. some people like this stuff some don't. if u dont like it, then fucking leave
I;\my tired of seeing pathetic rants against these authors. You people knowingly come to this site, and willingly read the material. First, let me suggest you start reading Dr Suess. Second, if you want to ridicule someone for their efforts, have the fucking balls to post it under your name. Third, go slap both of your parents for dad not pulling out.
Let me start by saying; hey grandpa, get a fucking clue. The fucking girl begged her father for help. The father begged her to stop, and warned her of the potential, and obviously described outcome. The girl even manipulated the father, threatening and even attempting to use the neighbors cock instead. Then the girl comes back for anal. So shut the fuck up asshole. You obviously read the whole story. Sounds more like the raving of a guilty conscience. Pretty sure you enjoyed it as much as everyone else. What a fucking hypocrite. It isn’t rape when it’s requested moron. Great story Vanilla.
I fucking loved this!!! The dialogue!! I wish I could read this for the first time more than once!!
At least my dad didn't force himself on me when he started being sexual with me in my teens. I considered his 8-inch thick penis pretty huge. He taught me how to make him aroused by certain play techniques on his penis. I know how bad he wanted to fuck me, but he refrained when I told him his dick was just too huge for my young pussy.
I can’t stop laughing. I know it was suppose to be sexual. But this was like a comedy instead. I love it. I’m still laughing....😂😂 Daddy just gave up and said “let me get the lube”. 🤷🏽 I guess these kids never learn😂😂 This is hilarious 🤣
i love the rape part well maybe it was disturbing to the others but i love reading stories like this
Well this was really fucked up.. i would've understood if it was a rape fantasy and not actual rape
Wow very much hot sexy story.please bring her friends to worship her dad's big cock.I came whil reading it with my wife.
Started off so well. Went so downhill after the neighbour incident. Too unrealistic! Could well have been a brilliant story if it had concentrated on the loving relationship between them.
its disturbing and retarded.. as for ero its hot sure, but the daughter is just a cheap slut and clearly imbecile when it comes to reality but acts like everything is opposite. dad's nothing better. 3/5 just for good ero.
11" cock bullshit when 8" would have been too big for a virgin pussy, also not stopping when she asks and he was hurting her turned into rape
well written and a different way to get Daddys cock. Hope you write the next section of Daddy fucking her ass. Maybe have them work her up to that big dick.
...and so hot, and pretty good English (always a bonus in this site). Sincere thanks.
Haven't cummed that hard in ages. I love reading this kinda thing and imaging my daddy Dom doing it to me. Please write more stuff!!!
I couldn't read it because the names were so 70's/80's.
I know it's a silly reason to stop reading but typical names and typical fake as fuck sex stories and dialogue just doesn't do it for me
No daughter in her right mind would fuck her father or show him poem, or even a "dare" challenge. Just like sane kids don't eat tide pods.
And, as a father, he would be disgusted with himself if he got a hard on and he'd go get therapy if he really cared about her or himself.
Scenarios like this are more plausible in 17th and 18th thousands ( I don't call them "centuries" because that doesn't make sense to me. Calling the 1900 the 20th century confuses my brain. Like, shouldn't the 2000's be the 20th century? I don't fucking know. Right or wrong, it's just stupid and confusing. But anyways, back to the story.)
If this was dated back to when having incest was legal and normal, that'd be one thing.
If this was a syfy fantasy and their alien customs allowed incest, or d&d fantasy or some shit - that'd be one thing.
But they're humans, in a modern day age - fucking eachother.
No sane girl would be like this and no sane father would.
Maybe if the father had a split personality or voices in his head telling him to act this way, while he - the main vessel, tries to fight himself off but the evil side wins.
I dunno man, but the relationship between father and daughter is sacred.
Probably moreso than a mother and daughter because the father becomes the defender and protector while the mother becomes the attacker.
(Until the patriarchy said otherwise.)
There wasn't enough build up for me.
It felt rushed and forced out there.
But that's just my two cents.
You'll find dey wey, whatever your direction is.
For a first time, it was alright on the grammar and sentence structure.
Oh my fucking god uuuuggghhhh fuck me fuck that story was amazing fuck me all of you
Nice background and theme, was very hot until the part of the non-consensual sex, that was a literally a rape scene. That part could had been easily written as a more erotic and enjoyable for both dad & daughter. Too bad it was such a miss. All in all, hope to read more from you
First, what a shitty father. What kind of dad won't even answer honest questions about sex to his kid? She asks him and he basically tells her to go and find out for herself, instead of just telling her, because he's uncomfortable? That and spoiling your kid like that is dumb. Then how exactly was she planning on making a "fake" video where it doesn't actually show him penetrating her, but also doesn't show his face or anything? What would you end up with then? A shot of two torsos rubbing on each other? Last, I don't really care if you want to write a rape story, but I'd prefer it if he wasn't totally ignoring her pain and even playing with her while she begs him to stop. It'd be much better if she asked him to stop but then started enjoying it. Her begging him to stop while he destroys all her trust by repeatedly saying he would stop only to start hurting her again isn't the action of someone who can't help themselves, it's the action of a sadist (and it doesn't really match his character the rest of the time). For all the people who say it's "her fault", you're just sick. She trusted him to do what they agreed on, to pretend to have sex. All this teaches her is that you cannot trust any man, not even your own "loving' father. No matter what he says, if he gets near your vagina he will 'loose control" and rape you even as you cry and beg him to stop. Only a sicko would do that. I get it, some people are turned on my rape and pain, but it doesn't seem like it fits his character as described. A normal person has more self control than that, no matter how horny they get. She offered to please him some other way, and even if he refused to stop, the whole "pulling it back out then violently ramming it home" part is just sadistic and cruel. He could have got off without hurting her so much. In fact, I think to a normal person that would be a real turnoff (although to a real normal person, the fact that he's her father would have been a turnoff way before that). And then to blame her afterwards...he doesn't even feel guilty for "loosing control", he blames her for "making him do it"? He doesn't love her if he feels that way. Assuming any kind of reality here, she's supposed to be a naive 18yo girl, how is she supposed to "know better"?
To all of you that can't stand this story...FUCK OFF. You know you read the entire thing, and probably busted a nut over it. It's fucking fiction. Get over yourselves. Oh, he had 11 inches, that's bullshit!!!. Fuck you. Oh, it was non consent. You still fapped to it. So STFU!!
Great fucking story. On to the next!!!!!!
FUCK THIS STORY IS AWESOME! I'm playing with my tits just reading it. I need to get fucked like this.
I don't read rape stories...
yeah it was incest, but also non-consent
I started to read this story until I got to your stupid line about 11 inches. I get so fucking tired of this kind of bullshit I'm tempted to give you one star for it. I won't, because it probably makes some needle dicks happy to imagine that they're hung like this, but guys who are normal don't need to read about it.
I wish he was my Daddy.. and I could be 12 yrs old again.
Would love to read a chapter 4
You know you're wrong. Daddy knew he was wrong. Daughter knew she was wrong. And I know I'm wrong for laughing so hard XD.
For the most part I really enjoyed this story. In order to explain this I will tell you a little about me. I am a polyamoirus female and very into kink/taboo topics. My sexuality is awesome and I love it. It also kind of works in sections. With one of my partners we're into heavy kink: rape play, lots of humiliation all the goodies. With another of my partners I am in a DD/lg relationship full of all the nurturing perfectness there is there. Both partners are into incest play (yay for me) yet, they not handle it very differently. As I said one partner is my daddy very rough takes the darker side the other is my daddy whom I would do anything for who would never ever hurt me even if I begged because daddy knows best.
I guess my confusion stems from the fact that the daddy in your story is much like my two daddies we're fused and it was supper jarring. I don't have any big issues with the story. It was super well written and was really sexy. It so happens that I found this story when I was in my little space (age regressed) and was supper enjoying it. When the rape started, which while hot when I'm a big girl (not regressing). When I'm little subjects like the rape in this story can be problematic, almost traumatizing. You might think that weird as I already said I actively participate in rape play. I won't go into the why as that's too long a story but basically that my sexuality is almost like it's own split personality. The two don't share content.
I guess what I'm trying to say is that one side of me loves this story. When I found this story I wasn't in the mindset for it. The fist part of your story the daddy is so nice even when he gets a little overzealous with the throat fucking. The second half is a rape: a very nice rape but a rape. Which made me have to stop right in the middle of the story and call for daddy because it scared me.
I want to repeat there was NOTHING wrong with your story it was fantastic. Though your anatomy and how things work could use a little more research. I really enjoyed it and give it a 4.5/5.
I'd suggest that maybe in the future putting a trigger warning in the beginning, or something that gives warning to rape content as it can be an extreamly hard topic for some.
Well done until he sadistically rapes her.
This story is totally insane, literally tried to stop myself from reading on! Made me wetter than I have ever been. Blown away.
well first of all, to the last comment, i sure bled that much when my virginity was taken! i liked most of this story, until the end where suddenly it seemed to turned into rape. then it just disturbed me.
Good overall story, but 11" penis is too much.
I think his daughter may have noticed the father struggling to keep that hidden beneath his clothes.
Wouldn't one that long choke most people if pushed all the way down their throat and do damage to the vaginal area if fully inserted?
Perhaps a reduction to one comfortably larger than average would make it a more "believable" piece of fiction while retaining the essence of the story.
Authors can do what they want, even stretch reality.
This is the second time I've read it and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Sequel, please.
Were you busy jacking off while you wrote this? I went back to my high school reunion and met Mister Jackson, the gruff, no-nonsense English professor who gave me my lifelong love of smoking jackets and broom closet molestation; we went over this final page with a red marker and there was more blood on the sheets than her cherry once we finished. I suggest you download Word 2003 and ask Clippy for help formatting next time.
Well it is a good story, but i dont know about other readers but there isnt such thing as "popping" a cherry, and women certainly dont bleed that much when their virginity gets taken.
i don't care what anyone says that was hot please make more my daddy hasn't fucked me in days
OK, She threatened her dad with fucking someone else if he didn't, then when the dad fucked her hard, she regretted it and gave him the cold shoulder and then just coz of a dare, she reconciled with him just to get 11 inches of meat in an even tighter hole. That's just fucked up.
RAPE is RAPE I don't care who started it when she said STOP and he didn't its RAPE.
The lol applies to both the third act and the dipshits who expected the amateur incest smut story to follow the rules of consent.
I loved the story, I kept trying to guess if the girl was really this naive or if she had a plan, if daddy would endure or fall in love.
I loved the fact that he lost control during the BJ, but I didnt guess what he woulld do in the end. I know this is as realistic as "time travel hot tub" but the girls dialog is PURE GOLD!
Amazing job.
For all the assholes that are leaving negative and rude comments for the story- FUCK OFF!! This is obviously a fantasy and if you don't like the plot or characteristics of characters then don't read the story! Just stop reading and find another story! Don't criticize another's fantasy writing because you can't find realistic porn stories to jack off to! By the way, love your story! Wish there was a sequel!
This ranks right down there as one of the worst stories on Lit. 11 inches - give me a break. "Daddy" is an asshole.
A completely unbelievable rape story. A father rapes his daughter. Lousy story. one star
oh oh oh julie oh god jules im im im cumming julie oh YES YES YESSSSSS oh julie ohhhh god julie your so tight oh god jules i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes, it's fiction, and we know that when we come to this page. I often suspect that even the "true" stories are made up and not factually true. But even fiction---even fantasy, at some level---has to have believability. And this story does not have it. An eleven-inch cock is so unbelievable that a high-school boy might brag about it, but never allow it to be actually measured. Medically, the average erect penis is a bit less than six inches; 8 in. is rare, but 11 in. qualifies you for the donkey exhibition at the zoo.
Their dialogue was hot and so funny! That little girl is a slut in the making. Such a naive, spoiled little brat in heat. I wonder how far she's willing to go. If her friends dared her to do a threesome, would she do that, too? Would she invite her uncle... Or the next door neighbor? Please tell me there's a sequel!
Guess she determined 11 inches up the butt will be the payoff. Great five star fuck story. Can't wait to read when he does his granddaughter and his and daughter's daughter.
A very well written story, although I was turned off by the part when it got rough. Adding a “rough" or “rape" tag would be helpfull, not everyone likes that.
If you didn't want him to fucking FUCK you then why tease him and ask him to do all these things with you and she's a slut after saying that he's a mean daddy the bitch doesn't talk to him until she needs to have sex with him again fucking slut
When it gets forceful, it doesn't turn me on at all. The beginning is not bad. But when she says Stop, he should stop. It would be far more interesting and erotic to see her change her mind...
It takes a number of things that make a story good, the most important of which,that the characters stay true to who the readers were told they were.This is what makes the story "real". And the "real" is what makes the reader care. For me, I think the worst comment a writer could hear about his story is, "I didn't care".
In this story, the father character, was presented as having such a "caring" love for his daughter.
In a 'good' story, that same guy could have never hurt the daughter character the way described by this writer....just sayin.
This is a well written and hot story. May I also say, FICTIONAL. People are going off about it being too rough, that's the point of stories. They are stories that let people imagine what they want. It doesn't necessarily mean that they would consider it in the real world. Yes "no means no", but but this story could also be categorized into non-consent/reluctance and people are having trouble about it being her dad? The people who selected the INCEST/TABOO category? It's a story. Get over it.
What if she was just faking about the dares and just really wanted to fuck her daddy.
This story is super hot. It's just fiction people. When he gets forceful it turned me on even more. You have made a very happy lady cum three times tonight!
The story was great up until you became forceful...this is supposed to be your daughter, whom you state that you love...I don't see how anyone would ever want to try any sexual ever again if they can't trust you, the parent, to be gentle and to teach them with love and understanding...not the old "a stiff dick has no conscience" routine. With the way you treated her thus far I don't buy the "she's took a dare for anal after what the total lack of regard with her mouth, and then her virginity...just don't buy it at all. If you are that inconsiderate and forceful in real life then you should seek professional help.
The story was freaking hot as far as the anon that says you crossed the line they need to stop and remember its fictional story and the anon that was going on about the chars in these stories needing to be in prison and people liking these thing being mentally I'll they had to actively enter the section named incest taboo to find these stories
Ah sayed you write well, you do but you cross the line on more than one occasion. No means no. Sometimes you need rules.
Come on, what is she mentally impaired? She doesn't know what incest is? And she is a senior in high school and doesn't know what a blow job entails? Bullshit. She didn't think it would bother her dad? Bullshit.
That a big fat 11 inch cock will fuck me senseless one day!! If anyone wants to fuck a bitch from Africa my legs are open lol i get wet just thinking about a big man with a big cock <3 <3
Needs more chapters I wanna see what happens when they do anal sex and if I were heather I wouldn't be want to be with her friends because if there daring each other to do this that means there sluts
I want that fucking ass hole in prison PERIOD. I cannot do daddy daughter shit. and any whore mom who promotes it. she needs to be in prison too and does happen! You gotta be really mentally ill to like this shit.
Please, pretty please let someone with an 11 inch cock fuck me. I have not had sex with a partner since 1989. I am really horny. Fuck me fuck me in whichever hole you wish.
Usually when a story has a character with an 11 inch cock I stop reading, but in this case it was an integral part of the story line.
I loved the dialogue and build up that lead dad to letting her suck his cock. The desire and conflict was palatable.
I didn't care for the "rapiness" of the second act, but she did ask for it, and I can't imagine how great that tight virgin pussy felt, so who could blame him!
Where were these girls when I was in high school??!!
I was laughing the whole time. This story is a dark comedy that I could see in my minds eye. You painted your story out so well. I loved it so very much. As far a I am concearned you brought together the movies Clueless with Alicia Silverstone as Pixie..
Of the thousands of stories I've read on this site, I can honestly say THIS is the best one. I was laughing out loud at the daughter begging for her "favors" and was cheering the dad on as he took her virginity. When he kept sticking her I was out loud cheering him "Stick her again Daddy!" OMG I have to read it again. Good Job!
The hymen is NOT inside the vagina. The hymen is over the opening of the vagina.
The hymen is NOT a seal, the hymen is residual skin from the opening being formed via skin "melting away" in the foetus.
The hymen (skin) may be thick, or paper thin. The more fragile the easier to rip by just normal movements such as exercise. Compare to the webbing between fingers: those with thin extra skin can rip it easily.
The hymen (skin) may cover most of the opening, or be almost non-existent thanks to foetal development. The skin may have one hole or many, the edge may be naturally jagged without any rips or tears. As the period blood has to come out, the few babies or young girls whose hymen has not formed holes will get their hymen (their skin covering the vagina) cut into by a doctor so their bodies can drain normally, and not have their unnaturally closed off vaginas become an increasingly filled container of dead blood that can't escape their bodies.
Hymen is not magic or some freshness seal. It's just skin. After ripping (which does not always happen during first vaginal intercourse as skin can stretch, which you can see on any obese person's limbs/torso or any pregnant lady's belly) it does not disappear. It's just not gonna be suspended over the hole the same way as before, since you ripped into it. The skin will still remain around the opening, just bunched up.
The hymen is NOT some sort of seal inside the vagina before the cervix. The cervix normally has, and needs, for a clear path to outside the body, so that the uterus can dump its monthly shedding internal lining to the outside. There are rare abnormalities such as dual uteruses/vaginas that will result in there being two vaginal canals inside, the wall between them being comparable to the wall between a normal vagina and colon, that can get ripped during not careful penetration. But that is a vertical wall, not a horizontal wall/seal.
Seriously, what the fuck? This fic was hilarious and sexy, and then bam, major sex anatomy fail. Might as well have mentioned cumming so much into her vagina that she threw the overflow up (the vagina and the food reproduction system are not connected, nor could you put a hose of infinite semen up her ass slowly filling her up inside and expect the overflow to come out her mouth, her intestines would pop like overfilled water balloons long before that). Still rating it 5/5, but FFS don't do this sort of thing again. Unless you explicitly set up a fantasy world where hymens are some magical barriers inside, this stuff is just painfully ignorant of basic human form, on the same level as claiming humans have bones inside their penises, or (like that weird song) that gorillas have huge dicks (gorillas have tiiny dicks, humans have the biggest dicks out of all the apes).
The story setting is indeed quite unrealistic and better for it, but there is an important difference between lack of realism in behavior, and suddenly out of the blue mentioning something that's the equivalent of "and then they pressed their cloacas together".
this is the hottest story I have ever read in my entire life. Thank you for writting it.
I have never been so fucking turned on by a story in my life. I don't care if you (author) are male/female/whatever I just want you inside me NOW. Holy fuck I need you now. You may be sick but #damn
CHAPTER 4 WAS HOT TO THE 99 !!! I can't wait for chapter 5. I jerked off 3 times. I still want to but can't right now. lol Definitely tomorrow. lol Thanks for sharing this great chapter.
The father DID rape her she told him before the fact not to go all the way but it's her fault to for not learning from prior experience with the 1st video and what the hell made her think any man in his right mind would not try to fuck her after allowing him to stick it in? I am a woman and I can't help but sympathize, rape is horrible but despite multiple warnings she asked for it. Does anyone else think she comes off as a bit of an airhead?
-ICan'tEven
even in fiction. He really is a sick fuck, and whether his daughter was conditioned by him or somehow got it from her slut mother, she's sick too. Consensual incest, or incest driven by the girl is one thing, this is something else. And the comment from 10/14 is the kind of thing I would expect from a rapist justifying himself.
Its pretty blatantly clear that she wanted everything she got by the way she acted and the way she talked with him while it was happening, she just maintained the tease and the plausable denyability, 'I want him to do it but I want to be able to say I didn't want to do it.' How do you do that? Daddy put your big ole hard cock that hadnt touched a pussy in years up inside my tight lil' ole wet, shaved tiny beaver, just don't DO anything after its in there. Not that she had ANY doubts after he fucked her throat.
The point is, the author WROTE this FICTION that way.
Hope the author writes some more good stuff!
I loved this ... surprised when he started being more dominate instead of just letting the girl get what she wants. Not so surprised the second time it took a turn. But i must say i enjoyed it all !
More Dominate daddy please !
It doesn't matter, they were both as wrong headed as they could possibly be. She had no business even doing the dare. She had no business showing the videos to anyone much less her father. She had no business asking him the first dare. He is an idiot and has no business trying to be the father of a teenage girl. Should have sent her to boarding school if he knew he was a weakling. He was so wrong to give in the first time and she should have learned he had no self control once started. She had to know what the result would be with the second dare and he should know it will never stop. Neither of them feeling totally at peace with what they've done. But so easily avoided, all that is needed is one of them to say, 'I'm not doing this'. Everybody is wrong here, and neither is doing anything right. Both rape, and mind games are going on here.
Pretty obvious you sick fucks will say anything to make an excuse to cover what you know is wrong.
I wish I had a cock like that to fuck my tight puss. I loved the story but I think she made her bed and she had to lie in it. To much no daddy. but good story will continue ready your works thank for cumming..
All of these "rape" comments surprise me. I think it's pretty obvious that Heather is playing games with her father, in a couple of ways: saying "don't do X" as a way to telegraph "do X", and "losing her virginity" to her father - didn't she lose it in part 1?
Great story, though!
Sooooooo sexy I love how huge they made his dick and how he ACCIDENTLY popped her cherry
I love daddy-daughter stories I get so wet just reading about having daddy's cock slowly enter his daughter and having her moan with desire. Ten having daddy getting ready to shoot his cum into his daughter's pussy that was waiting for his hot cum.
So glad he fucked her. She needed to be filled with daddy's cock. My pussy is soaked and ever so empty at the moment. I miss my daddy's cock.
Why did you stop and not do the anal part? Too bad, it would have been exciting.
Very fuckable story! The rape added to the illusion. I mean this wouldn't happen in real life! It was rape though! I liked the story! Thank you for sharing it! ;)
He has an 11 inch cock? What is he? A horse?
But I have to admit, it did make me wet. Didn't like the past where it turned into rape though.
was this a real story or all made up? if all made up I loved it, but if it was not made up then I didn't like the end!
He has an 11 inch cock? What is he? A horse?
But I have to admit, it did mae me wet. Didn't like the past where it turned into rape though.
You wrote..."the cameraman's blue jeans, unzipping them, pulling out a young, rock-hard cock. It was nothing impressive, five and a half inches"
What man talks like this about another man much less quoting his size like he measured it with a ruler? You should have just left it with "he was an average sized guy" or some shit like that.
i would love to read what happens next between heather and her daddy
Yeah, he lost control. i can honestly say, i'd be on his side. (i am ready for your rage) Ladies, do not tempt the male sex drive. it is a violently explosive thing.
the story itself however was great in my opinion. couple of darker points but it ended with a joke.
I liked the beginning. But the dad was just being mean! She was a virgin and she cried. But he treated her like a sex toy! His own daughter! Itd be funny if she snipped the 11inches off in the morning.
Yeah, it's just a story, but still. Next story should be he goes to sleep and she puts a bullet in his head. Or he goes to sleep and she cuts eight inches off in the morning before shooting him. Or maybe she wakes him up and shoots herself in his bedroom.
But from the looks of it, a lot of people really got off on this. Might be time for some of them to reflect on what that means.
Liking the realism between the characters and how your descriptive detailing goes beyond their emotions and details, you gave them personallity and characteristics. That was a 4 stars for sure but the fact you gave it life is why i will rate it 5.
I quite enjoyed reading this story. Dad had every right to keep going, until he came. That was the least the daughter could so for him, because she did start it after all. She should have let him finished based on that fact that he was her dad alone. I am one of those that feel like dad should be the one to pop the cherry and teach her all about sex. Nobody loves her more than daddy.
This is DEFINITELY rape. It's really horrifying that so many people don't actually know what rape is. It's also horrifying that people that write sex stories don't know anything about female anatomy. The hymen isn't a wall across the entire inside of the vagina and its definitely not 3 inches inside the vaginal canal. If it was than women wouldn't be able to menstruate until their hymen was broken. Have some common sense. Also an 11 inch cock? That's so unrealistic and so big it would be bordering on comical considering the average penis is 6 inches and a vagina is usually around 5 inches deep.
More eleven inch cock b.s. That was good for a lost star, Then came the rape. Should have killed it entirely, but the writing was basically very good. It also was a very true depiction of how hard it is for a guy to stop once he starts, and his partner wants him to quit. If he really loves her, though, he will honor her wishes. This guy didn't really love his daughter very much. - and now I guess he'll tear up her asshole, but I won't read it. Two stars for the good depiction and one for good writing.
Lol, now THIS story, is my favorite! I love it. I thought some parts of it were funny. The daughter-- she was totally asking for it. She could have whined all she wanted before her dad started doing anything, but the fact that she went back to him just proved she was into it. This is probably the story that I go back to reread the most.
Sometimes I get annoyed with the half-assed stories some people post. Some of them are just meant to set you off quickly, and they have no build. I feel like this one can do that, but you have more of it. I still wish it was longer, like some of the other stories you have.... but four pages is good enough. If you ever plan to add a second part to any of the single stories you have in your page, I really want it to be this one. I love love love this one. It's hot, it's funny (not sure if I'm just psychotic or if some parts really are humorous-- could be both), your pacing is good, great grammar, and it's written by you-- so I always know it will be good.
I'm going to apologize again for my fellow readers who either don't know how to read rosa-blanca.ru or have to much time in their day, they felt the URGE to leave stupid, useless comments. The were probably too busy rubbing one off to your story, they came really hard, and felt ashamed for having naughty fantasies.
I'm sorry for all the hard time any of these knuckleheads give you. I love yours stories, and from some of the nicer comments, I can see I'm not the only one. Some of the people who like it also don't take the time to comment (like I used to do) or were too embarrassed because they fear their sexuality. (Come on guys, FANTASIES ARE NORMAL. We all have them.) Keep writing, and don't go soft on us (no pun intended) to please anyone. I'm really happy with all the stories you've written thus far, and I am desperately waiting for the next one. Adieu!
Would love for you to include anal in your stories and not just the allusion to it.
Okay we've been patient enough, time for daughter shares daddy with girlfriends!
The story that keeps on giving, so I can keep on cumming! Merry Christmas, Vanilla! :) xoxo, Courtney
Well written, good character development, not over the top descriptives, sensual interaction, some glorious non-con, it's why I'm here. Fuck. My second read. Thank you.sly
If u are really asking that question you're too young to be on this site or for any of us to answer kid. But I dare you to ask your parents that question.
honestly, its whenever the male lead disregards all sign of respect for the girl and just haves her that turns me on. ive read all of your stories already, some even more than twice. keep up the good work!
I just LOVE all your stories, they make me cum so hard. I think the force/nonconsent parts are particularly hot!! Keep them coming!!!
Scream out in orgasmic bliss as I cum so hard my ears ring... So fucking hot! :-) literally going to fuck myself into oblivian!
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Well-written, a very dirty premise, and hot sex, all with a humorous background and a surprisingly light-hearted mood. What more could you want?
A+++, would read again.
You should do a follow up chapter were they do get pregnant. And I want to see how the anal went.
Up until the last bit of dialogue, I kind of agreed with you... But the last bit of talking just really says what kind of person his daughter is.
Great story. The forcing in the middle was intense and traumatic, and well written. And the last dare tells the reader that while he most certainly is a bad man, she's a bad girl too.
Thanks, you fucking ruined it with the rape; I thought he loved his daughter, it didn't stopping him raping her did it? Take it away, no stars...
Fabulous story as usual, VanillaExtract. This story is so fucking hot I can't believe it was your first attempt. Keep up the good work!
Love it, love it, a million times, I love it! I think this is the perfect story. Xoxo, Courtney
This story was amazing, a blend of hot and humorous, something that i find lacking because of all the stories now with sad or strange and confusing endings lately, this one left me laughing at the end... not crying.
VanillaExtract, Finally, a story from a man's perspective. You are brilliant and I can't say that enough. I loved that you lost control and forced youself down her throat and later into that tight pussy. I fantasize about scenarios like that all the time, they are my favorite. Daddy/daughter role playing gets me wetter faster than anything. Thanks for writing your story. PLEASE WRITE MORE. I will be reading when you do.
Ten stars if it were possible!!!
...to read anything else on here anymore. You're the best! Xoxo, Courtney
Thank you! :)
What do I need to do to get you to write another one?
Xoxo, Courtney
Jesus Christ! I wanna fuck you just for writing this! Thanks again! Xoxo, Courtney
This has become my go-to story when I want to get off - which has been a dozen times already this week! So fucking hot! I wish I had a Daddy of my very own. :( Xoxo, Courtney
That was the sexiest, funniest, story ever! I never read stories that are mire than two pages but that was some good shit! I am so wet right now and I'm going to go jump my dad's bones as soon as my mom and brother leaves. Please write a sequel!
This was absolute genius. Erotic and very well written. Ignore the negativity. In fact, I thought page 2 was going to get ugly, but it was kind of funny. I rarely comment on stories because I so often see negative comments from readers that forget this is fiction and the element of surprise is ruined if you outline everything that is going to be in it before it is read. The daughter asked for it, kept coming back for more despite her father's warnings, yet some still do not get it. Well done. I look forward to more.
Thanks so much. I'm not sure how many times I've gotten off to this last chapter.
Well lets just say I want expecting this for a first story... But wholy fuck! This was hot! I loved it all but my favorite was the ending "I`ll get the lube" loved it:)
Excellent story! I LOVE Daddy force stories and the fact that he had a huge cock made it al the more better. Keep writing! Xoxo, Courtney
Your story became an instant joke when it became clear to me that you, like far too many, don't have a clue where the hymen is located. It's not a secret--it has been in the same place all along... look it up and see just how wrong you are.
now you need her girlfriends to join in with her and her dad the next time out you know that dad has been thinking of her girlfriends now maybe she can get them to jon in with them
I loved it, though I should feel guilty for enjoying such a strong rape story. I feel bad for the poor thing, but I don't understand still how she couldn't end up enjoying it. I don't enjoy rape stories, but this one was really well written, and can't really blame the father, though when a woman says no to sex, the man should stop in my own opinion. Fortunately for me I'm not a man to know.
Keep up the good work. Daughter seemed to enjoy it after all if she wants anal.
i thought the part of him doing it even after she said stop made it more real, the poor guy hadnt had sex in yrs just bc he didnt want her seeing other women in the house i think he deserved it spec. after doing the vids for her, would love to read how the hell he fits it in her ass :)
Don't listen to the detractors, keep it up. This story was so fucking hot, I had to read it in parts because I couldn't get through it without cumming.
One constructive critique: I would have preferred a 9 inch cock. At least that is possible. Once you hit double digits it just starts sounding ridiculous.
Please continue writing, you have a gift, and I expect you will only get better!
Keep up the good work! That's one hell of a story. My ASS is on the edge for part two.
I liked the story the force the loving caring and just giving end awesome hoping for the part 2
It's like this story was written and the put aside for months and months and finally finished. You changed style. The father went from reluctant and caring to sociopathic indifference. He even blamed her for him raping her. The father in the beginning woudl not have blamed her if he lost control, he would have taken blame himself. He also would have stopped the moment he had time to think and he had plenty of moments that came about. Excellent writing, but it felt like 2 different stories melded together.
You definitely have loads of talent! Whatever the controversy your writing shows great style. You have a unique voice.
I enjoyed your story right up until the rape and then I stopped reading. Great potential ruined with an unnecessary evil.
Hot up until the nonconsensual bit, then stomach-turning. (And yes, that is rape. She withdrew consent, he continued despite her continued protests. Whether she forgave him later or not, that's real, honest-to-goodness, even-Republicans-would-agree rape-rape.)
It's well written. Definitely not rape. I'd probably run if I get to see such a huge cock so I don't blame him. A lil reluctance added the heat.
well written story, it has potential of a great incest series. More please
A different and enjoyable twist on an old theme. Can't wait to read more of your stories.
This is a rape story. Disgusting. Put a damn warning in the description.