All Comments on 'Dads fucking daughters Ch. 01'

....It reads like an ai wrote it....

You need to work on your writing and punctuation. Please get an editor

Do continue with future chapters on this series , excited to read them

The premise of the story was promising. I was unfortunately unable to enjoy reading this story due to a very poor writing style. The majority of your sentences were either dangling participles, run-on-sentences, or just improperly structured with unneeded complexity. You even had one sentence that had FIVE commas in it. This is just bad writing. Please put less energy into trying to "sound smart" and just write the sentences normally.

First, there is no pussy hair (2 rating) second, it needs edited. Third, there is no third its a 3 rating!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It reads like an AI was trained on about 1000 other stories, almost exactly like this one, then picked the worst bits of each and shat them out.

VERY poorly written, English is maybe your 2nd or 3rd language? Take a writting class, the ideas are good, just written horribly and so wasn't "sexy" to read.

I'm sorry but your grasp of the English language is clearly tenuous at best. Maybe others enjoyed your attempt but I couldn't even finish half of it.

I loved it…

So horny

2 paragraphs was enough for me ...... about as sexy as a bus ride down town.