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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 4 years ago
Wow

Who is Peter? David has been a busy boy lately. I think Victoria needs to realise he was doing this job before they got together and she chose to accept it. I think she is being very unfair to now demand he give up his career when she is getting as much loving as she wants. It's not like she is really missing out. David should let her go and see if she comes back and that would be on his terms. He has his Mom, Sister & Aunt to love him.

chris99999chris99999over 4 years agoAuthor
OOOPS!

Just out of curiosity, if you were in the same situation as **DAVID** what would your decision be?

Pope1944Pope1944over 4 years ago
Don't open the floodgate

If you want the story to continue, and we all do, tell Victoria it was a nice ride but it's over. At 22 David can't possibly realize that agreeing with her would be opening the door to a lifetime of bullshit and demands. Don't do it David.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My Pick

I would stay with the Job .. Victoria knew what she was getting into ..

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Stick with the job

David needs to stick with the job.

There will be more Victorias.

colrbtddscolrbtddsover 4 years ago
Choices ...!!

He is providing therapeutic services and loves his work. He needs to bide his time and cultivate a relationship with a like minded partner.Time to move on - he was too good for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A great job !

He should let her drift away and look after his ideal job.

5 stars for a great story

Just_a_GentJust_a_Gentover 4 years ago
She knew...

She knew what his job was. She has no right whatsoever to ask him to leave, much less give an ultimatum. As a massage guy, myself, it can but difficult to reconcile His business is pleasure, but it is still business. She's making it personal when it isn't. The bitch will be if she causes trouble by trying to expose Hilltop. She wasn't a client, just a friend from a party.

OralLover62OralLover62over 4 years ago
Peter?

He should stick with slinging drinks at the local men's strip bar and getting girls there. As for David, I would take the job without hesitation. It's like the classic comment about a hot girl on a hot car, most everyone wants the girl. I want the car, with it I can get 20 hot girls instead of being saddled with just one.

More pussy to eat is a better life ...

feelgood2000feelgood2000over 4 years ago
What to do?

I would stay, if she loved him as much as she says why is she making him choose? Especially since she’s known from the beginning what he does.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 4 years ago
Stay. Make great amounts of money.

Don't turn his back on this fantastic job.

buzman0112buzman0112over 4 years ago
STAY!!!

Great story!!! As for should he stay or go, he should stay at hilltop until he is done with college and he has found a new job that he loves as much as he loves working at hilltop!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Mother

Twice more he has his mother there... First time he uses a dildo!!! Second time she offers her ass and he ignores it!! You spent about one paragraph on each!! It was absolute garbage!! It seems you totally lost focus on what should have been the most erotic part of the story!! Very disappointing!!

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 4 years ago
Stay

If she really loved him and knew what he was doing before they became a couple then she shouldn't have given him an ultimatum. She just trying to control him not love him.

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Keep Working

A great little series, very enjoyable but I would like you to describe the sex a little more or longer encounters.

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81over 4 years ago
love to read more

Great story love how it was building. but would have loved to read more, hopefully there will be a chapter 5 sometime. o and im at a loss with the girlfriend she sounds hot and like a great partner BUT she knew what he was doing when they started dating kinda low blow to give that ultimatum. hate to say it but bang and boot sounds needed there

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The threesome

With the sister and James was a massive turn off, in what was otherwise a good story. The sister was too demanding and treated him like a consolation prize. There should be more intimacy in the taboo act of incest, not just another fuck blending into the rest.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 4 years ago
no brainer

why trade a great job with plenty of pussy for a live in argument? no matter how good she is the sister, aunt, and mother more than make up for her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Even an unreasonable person would have already left Hillside

But, that wouldn't make for such a good story.

CroonyCroonyabout 4 years ago
Leave

But visit his relatives on a regular basis. 😁

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Telling Vicky Bye

It’s already been said, here, but Victoria knew what she was getting into. Sorry, babe, but you don’t get to change the contract after the fact. Never fall in love with someone’s potential! I agree w/the commenter who spoke of the lack of intimacy in the sister/James threesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Decision

Keep the job till you finish college. Then decide between money and love!!! Or get both!!!!!!

AdedrumAdedrumalmost 4 years ago

Keep the job. Girlfriends come and go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Definitely Should Continue Series

Wicked series, wish there was more. Also to answer the question, I would dump the GF. She knew his job.

fisheronefisheronealmost 4 years ago
Decision time

There are many factors in the decision process here. One his friend already had been fired, two Peter's alpha male syndrome will eventually cost him his when one his clients says it's to rough or he refuses to stop. The big one is with the amount of women he is having bareback sex with someone is going to get an STD. When happens it will end Job and several marriages as well. These people are all well connected and success will be hard if they put you on the list. I would quit job finish school and let Victoria know that this my decision for my future not an ultimatum from her. One final thought is it started off a well structured job but slowly all the rules of protection were being broken, sex with owners wife, sex with manager, sex off-site, sex with multiple clients at one time and finally Peter started not always listening to clients and was after his satisfaction. Too many points of failure for success, look at writing on the wall and leave

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Who

The character was called David not peter

DUBLXLDUBLXLalmost 4 years ago
More

Please continue this adventure. He has choices to make. 22 years old, still in college, all his eggs in one basket or keeping his options open.

XanalinguistXXanalinguistXover 3 years ago
Kind of a shame

I really enjoyed the first 3 parts of the series, but this one had too many pointless tangents and too much repetition. It could have ended a lot better (this chapter and the series).

nyteramblernyteramblerover 3 years ago

Have enjoyed the story but. I think with so many rules being broke that it will crash. But Victoria knew his job and she made her choice to be with him and shouldn't have tried to force him to quit.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 3 years ago
I think

this should be the end of the series. Chapter 4 was pretty disappointing and I'm

100% sure it's just going to get worse. The toys ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
I have loved ...

I have loved this story so far and hope you continue it

MediocreGingerMediocreGingerabout 3 years ago

I think he should keep working. She knew beforehand what his job was and that he loved it. However, I think he should let her know that he has plans not to do that forever.

I feel this story isn't quite over. He should at least finish college. I think that with all the tests and such that the head honcho coming down was another test and so they offer him a higher position in the company. Whether or not he takes it I don't know. Maybe Amy wants to retire or something and thinks he will be the best replacement.

I also think that things with James aren't finished. There's no way he didn't take some of the recordings home so I see either a blackmail situation or a leak online or something.

I think this series could and should continue for a couple more chapters. I think David should end up with a girl that doesn't mind sharing and hearing about his escapades. When he leaves the job then his sister, aunt, and mom could still enjoy the benefits and such. Maybe even Mrs. Henderson since she was his biggest tipper and seemed to have a closer relationship with his family and such.

bigalinskbigalinskabout 3 years ago

" situation as Peter, what would your decision be?" who is Peter?

chris99999chris99999almost 3 years agoAuthor

Peter should be David!

It's an error. I now do more checking before I publish my stories, so hopefully my work will have fewer mistakes like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Excellent, and as a young hot dog, I would probably say “goodbye, Victoria, I will never forget you.”

SirPappySirPappyalmost 3 years ago

Family first....I think Victoria should move on and David can as well. Maybe the receptionist would be a more understanding partner. Maybe he graduates college and moves up in the company so she can pursue other goals herself while also engaging in the family fun with David? I've enjoyed what's written so far and am hoping for more. Ty

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I agree with most of the other comments made. Personally I enjoyed every chapter. I to think he should stay. eventually he well get tired of the job, and quit. Also I think that Angela is in love with him, and he should find out. She knows what he does, so that wouldn't be a problem. Then he can continue with his work until he finished collage. Get a job outside of what he's doing. He has alot of women in high places that can help him, and then marry her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WAUW !

Thanks for sharing ;-)

DomidaneDomidaneover 2 years ago

I didn’t like the gemma and james part, it was bad.(where gemma chosejames to fuck her and david a handjob. Really?) And there is no love between the family members. They are treating him like a prostitute. Worst incest story but good for a harem kind of category.

OpenWordsOpenWordsover 2 years ago

Domidane... Lol, he IS a prostitute. Wtf is wrong with him being treated like one? He's being paid to do his job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Have you forgotten to Post the next Chapter?

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

Okay, I'm going to preface this one with an assumption that you screwed up and said 'Peter' when you actually meant 'David'. But you ended the chapter with the following question:

"Just out of curiosity, if you were in the same situation as Peter, what would your decision be?"

Again, assuming that you are talking about David and Victoria, then the answer is very simple and very obvious. If he truly loves Victoria enough that he wants to spend the rest of his life with her and build a family with her then he has to quit his job as she has asked him to do. If she is just another piece of ass, then he can let her go and continue being a gigolo.

Quoting again: "I spent the next hour thinking about it, but I couldn't decide."

That clearly tells me that (1] he doesn't really love Victoria even though he claims that he does. It is an easy decision to make in seconds if you truly love someone. But it also clearly shows that (2) David has absolutely no clue about what LOVE really and truly is. He wouldn't know LOVE if it slapped him in the face. Victoria is better off without him. Hell, his first girlfriend Carol figured it out and wouldn't let him advance past copping a feel. 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Needs a bit of editing to fix the name confusion.

Not into creampies or two guys which killed this chapter for me. Would have much preferred if Gemma only was massaged by David.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep the job.

chiefhalchiefhal9 months ago

I would tell Victoria I love her, but she needs to grow up. I intend to keep my job, the choice is hers. My wife and I are ENM, it's worked for years...

rube37rube373 months ago

I would tell David that he really needs to look to the future and if he is really in love with Victoria and wants to spend the rest of his life with her than he needs to make a change to keep her. He should tell Victoria that he totally understands and that he wants her, but will need some time to try and find something else that will provide similar pay or until he is finished with his education.

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