All Comments on 'David's Dilemma'

Well!! The plot "quickens." Double snub for arrogant Andrea.

We need a part two.

Looking forward to the next installment.

There better be another chapter the story is great

2nd that need a part 2

FYI you seem to have an unclosed italics section on page 3 that's set most of the page italic.

loved the story but really need a part 2 to finish it off

Great story! Poor David / Lucky David. If there's a part #2, it should be interesting as hell. Cheers. Frankie

Delightful!

It really needs a follow up. Hint hint....

constant POV changes... the mark of someone that wants the reader constantly jarred out of immersion, or simply has no clue what 3rd person means.

More!

🤣 He's gonna get his family! Love it!