by TrampsAnThieves
Your verbiage and timing is impeccable. Though others attempts of injecting humor into erotic works, for the least part, failed miserably, the remaining were funny as hell but, couldn’t swing a fuck or oral. 5 stars my friend. Unbelievable your stamina with this series. Been reading her for 12 plus years and have yet to find your equal
One minor complaint. Dad isn't getting released or ever coming back. Bare minimum what he did is would be considered aggravated assault with the deadly weapon without intent to kill, a felony ll, that would earn him about a decade in jail.
Holy hell, this is hot stuff!! I just started reading today and can't put it down! LOVE the concept overall. Excellent writing style, 5* all around. I was slightly worried in the first chapter when the first few of the "list" were just a couple paragraphs each in fast sucession; I'm so glad on the turns that have taken so far and the expanded characters with much more depth. Maggie, Emily, and Lena are terrific and so far has been a nice diversity of the MILFs. I'm sure that isn't easy to pull off, especially for 100+ of them by the end?? lol I agree with Lee2012 that it's so rare to find a writer and long series like this which can inject a sense of fun, humor, drama, etc to go along with mind blowingly hot sex scenes. That really is the "secret naughty-sauce" of truly magical works like this is shaping up to be! Can only hope the remaining 15(+) chapters are as good these first 4 have been!
The author writes like he loves how freaky he wants the mother/daughter and any other women he can have. The idea he could cum so much is every horny guy’s desire. Maybe that is why we read these stories…