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Click hereMy eyes moved down and took in her breasts. Like Sharon's, they were about a 36C. She was very close, almost identical, in size to Sharon. Sorry, but I had no other comparisons. She later told me she was glad she had stopped me from burning Sharon's clothes, because she had already been wearing some of her lingerie. They even used to share clothes in college.
Her breasts were perfect mounds. Lying back, there was hardly any sagging. They looked perfect. Her areolas were just a little bigger than a quarter with tiny, eraser-sized nipples.
I looked further down and she had a long, slim waist with a deep, perfectly round navel. Some girls have long legs and a short waist. Not this beauty. Below that was a small landing strip above bare lips. Her beautiful pussy was just a small slit. She didn't have huge labia. The lips were just barely beginning to open. It was a beautiful sight.
With her long waist, I expected short legs. While not incredibly long, they were not short, either. I could be biased, but all I saw were perfect legs, perfect knees, pretty little feet capped with pretty little toes.
I pulled my eyes back up to hers and she was giving me a little smile. "Like what you see?" She giggled.
"Do I ever! Do you mind if I take my time exploring?"
"I've waited this long, I can wait a little longer, I guess."
I knelt down beside her. First, I kissed her again. This time, a deep, tongue-entangling kiss. It felt like hours, but probably wasn't. I then lightly kissed each perfect eyebrow, her perfect little nose, then moved to the left side of her neck, I kissed my way up to her earlobe and gently took it between my lips. That seemed to have an effect. Cindy suddenly arched her back, as I kept her earlobe between my teeth and lightly flicked the end of it with my tongue.
"What are you doing? I've never felt that before. Oh, God! Make sure you do the other one. That almost made me come!"
Sharon had never talked during sex. She would lightly moan from time to time, but never any encouragement. I was pretty sure Cindy was exaggerating, but since she asked, I gave the other ear the same treatment.
"AAAAAHH!!! OH MY GOD! I'm CUMMMMMING! OH! GOD! WHAT. WAS. THAT!?! STOP! STOP! TIME OUT!"
I let go and leaned back. I was as shocked as she was. That had never happened with Sharon. She didn't even seem to like it as much as I did, but Cindy's reaction was one I would never forget.
Note to self. Use that technique again.
"If your tongue can do that to my ears, I can't wait to see what else it can do!"
"I'm pretty sure it's your ears that are sensitive, Cin, not that I have a magical tongue."
"I'm willing to find out if you are!"
I started working my way down her neck, across her collarbone and toward her left breast. She started squirming, but that was probably anticipation. I kissed down the slope of her breast and headed straight toward her nipple. But, instead of attacking the nipple, I started a slow circle around it. This brought a moan from Cindy as she tried moving her breast to place her nipple in the path of my kisses. I wouldn't let her do that. Instead, I switched to the other breast to repeat my teasing. After the same treatment on her right breast, I switched back to the left. But this time, I went straight for her nipple with a gently sucking kiss. This brought forth a loud moan and she, again, arched her back. This time, it felt like she was trying to force more of her breast into my mouth. I started to suck and nibble on her nipple. She started getting really loud.
"Suck my nipple, baby. OH God, my nipples are sensitive like never before. I'm feeling things I never thought I could."
I gave her nipple a gentle bite and leaned backward, drawing the nipple with me.
"OHHHHH MYYY GAAAWD!!! I'm CUMMING! AAAAHH!!"
I switched to the other nipple and gave it the same treatment. And I got the same results. Wow. I'd never had an experience like this before. I loved giving pleasure almost as much as receiving. And boy, was I having fun. I made her cum twice and I hadn't even gotten to her pussy yet.
I started to go further, to my favorite place to eat out, but Cindy grabbed my head and stopped me.
"There will be time for that later, Mister. Right now, I need you inside me. I need you to be joined with me. I love you and I want that love to be consummated."
Who was I to say no to an offer like that? I was a decent size, about six-and-a-half inches. I dragged the tip of my cock through Cindy's lips to get it lubricated. Cindy was so tight, I had to work it in slowly. I worked in a little at a time until I was all the way in. Cindy was moaning and asked me to wait just a minute.
"I love this feeling! My pussy is so full! I've never had this much before."
She had her legs wrapped around me so tightly I couldn't move. She loosened her grip, and said, "Now! Make love to me!"
I had to oblige. I went quickly the first time. I knew I didn't want to stop there, so I did something I had never done before-- I ate her pussy after I came inside it. She tried to stop me, but I dove in and never looked back. The taste was different, but it wasn't going to make me gag or anything. It made her so hot, I was able to bring her off multiple times. I loved eating pussy, and after a while, I could only taste her.
I remained hard and made love to her several more times that night. We fell asleep in each other's arms, and started again in the morning.
As we were lying there the next morning, she tried to tell me I didn't have to go down on her after I came inside her. She said it kind of tentatively.
"At some point, you are going to return the favor. You are going to suck me off, after I've come in you. You will be sucking both of our cum off my cock. How can I ask you to do it, and not expect to do it for you?"
"You didn't think it was nasty?"
"I was hesitant at first, but I knew I could do it for you. Besides, apparently, my cum doesn't taste as bad as I heard some men's do."
"I'm going to have to find out for myself, then. Can I tell you something and you not think I'm kinky?"
"Anything, Cin."
"I like that nickname! When you ate me after cumming in me, that was such a huge turn-on. That you'd be willing to do that set me off."
After that, I was treated to the best blowjob I could ever remember. Sharon did give a blowjob occasionally, but she was never enthusiastic about it. Cindy attacked my cock like it was her last meal. I warned Cindy I was going to blow, and she just looked up and winked at me. She swallowed every drop. OK. She did drip a few drops, but she scooped it all up and cleaned me up good.
"Damn! No wonder you didn't mind, you taste good! I only had one other to compare it to, but yours is SOOO much better. I love you so much, Tom!"
Since we both had had at least some protein, we decided to skip breakfast for another round. Then we decided to take a shower and go out for lunch. After we got back, Cindy asked me to sit down in the living room while she got us some drinks. It was still afternoon, so I wasn't expecting my favorite single malt-- much less, two fingers of it. She handed me my glass and sat on the couch beside me.
"Tom, I meant what I said last night. And again this morning. But I have to say something that might make you doubt that. Please, don't say anything. Let me get this out. I just ask, please don't hate me. I just can't live with myself knowing I lied to you. Even if indirectly.
"I have loved you since before you ever went out with Sharon. When she decided she loved you as well, I decided to step back and see what would happen. You had not shown an interest in either of us. I always regretted that makeover. I always thought, what if I had just dressed myself up. But then, she was the one that brought you to our dorm. I had to let her try first.
"I tried to get over you. I met and married Dave. I never loved him. I tried, but I couldn't. I couldn't make love to him as much as he liked. I had to picture you in my mind to get in the mood. I don't know if he ever suspected, or if he cheated because I wasn't loving enough. But I always felt I drove him to cheat. That's why I could never hate him. I acted mad, but I was actually relieved. I had all discussions through lawyers, because I knew I could not act mad for that long and get away with it.
"Now that I have you, I want you to know that you will always have me, and always have ALL of me. I could never totally give myself to Dave. To really let go. It might sound terrible, but I'm glad Sharon has released you from your vows."
I took her trembling hands. "Cin, I love you like I have never loved another. I only want you. Always."
We went back upstairs and made love some more. Then we fucked. Later that night, we made love again, slow and soft.
The next morning, Cindy called Marie and just said a simple, "Thank you!" And hung up.
Epilogue:
Sergeant Pike had given me a business card for a really good lawyer. Actually, it was his brother. But he was really good. Three suits were filed. The first two settled for close to what we asked for. The school system, and specifically George Bullock, tried to fight it. When he found out that North Carolina still allowed alienation-of-affection lawsuits. Even against third parties not in the affair, but any third party for wrongful acts that deprived them of the love and affection of their spouse. We then countered with a higher amount and said if they didn't settle, the video of his rant admitting to helping his brother would be made public. That ended that fight really quickly.
Within six months, we were officially married. I say officially, because we went to the courthouse the next week and had a private, civil ceremony. We didn't want everyone to think we were moving too fast, but we couldn't wait. We did wait until after the official ceremony for Cindy to go off birth control. A year later, we welcomed Marie Louise Marlboro into our family. After all, that Kiss Cam was set up by Marie's friend at the Arena. Louise was Cindy's mother.
A year later, Marie was joined by William Robert Marlboro. Robert was my father. He was seven years old before the first person tried to call him Billy Bob. I groaned because that had never occurred to me.
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Cindy and I are getting ready to celebrate our twenty-fifth wedding anniversary. Marie was trying to put together a slideshow and found pictures I thought I had destroyed.
"Dad, who is this woman with you at the beach?"
I saw the photo of Sharon and me.
"That, Marie, is the woman that introduced me to your mother. I thought at one time that I loved her. I will never talk about it again, but I am eternally grateful for the circumstances that led me away from her and into your mother's arms. I never knew what love was, until your mother went with me to a hockey game."
I didn't realize Cindy was right behind me 'til I heard, "Tom, go get the picture of the Kiss Cam. That definitely has to be included."
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- COMMENTS
Eternally grateful for Sharon's death? I don't think that's what the author really meant, but that's what was written. How about a horrible event that led to something good.
Enjoyed it.......keep on writing. I want to see how your next one turns out so I do believe I will follow you
Excellent story. I found that the stories where the spouse not only manages to get away from the troublemaker but also gets the better of all those that helped cause or allow the problem to occur even if it was a corporation. 5/5
I review and edit a ton of documents and I can assure you, no matter how many times you do it, errors can still hide. More so, when you are reviewing your own handiwork hence, why you get other authors/reviewers onsite to do it for you.
For a first timer, you popped your cherry with stars - well done!
For a first story this is really good.
Pretty good job of walking the line between LW and Rom. Only the one glaring proof reading error, so don't belabor it.
General advice, aside from the biggies, the two worst mistakes you can make are wrong names, and dates/ ages that don't add up. First rule of names is to keep them different enough to avoid confusion. Second if you decide to change one do a 'Find and Replace' for the document rather than making changes as you edit. Oh, and a third consideration is for 'ethnic' names whose pronunciation isn't obvious. Gaelic and Eastern Euro names can be particularly troubling. You can use them if the character needs them, but introduce a piece of dialogue where the character has to inform or correct another in the proper pronunciation.
Dates/ages are self explanatory. Readers do the math in their heads automatically and inconsistencies take them out of the flow.
Thanks for sharing your talent and time. I look forward to your next one.
Always read and reread and read it again.
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After I calmed down, I knew I had to call Mom and tell her the rest of the story. I called and thankfully Mom was alone. I told Mom the facts about Cindy's death.
And the read it again.
You really pulled off a cracker there, if I may say so. Almost too good for a first story. It was all very realistic and also, emotionally, very cruel. But you packaged everything very well and conveyed it well. Thank you for a really good story! 5*!
After the wife died the story is already complete I stop reading the whole thing that's the conclusion I need.
The mc's visit to the hospital was righteous. "Too bad you didn't love me today" put such a beautiful exclamation point to the relationship. I can't understand his negative reaction to her croaking upon hearing that. It just seems appropriate that after killing the marriage, she should die too.
Not bad for a first effort. The "I just have to do this" trope is tired, overplayed, and has always been fairly stupid IMO, so that always detracts from a story for me.
The dialogue is too contrived, and it feels like it's only there to drive the story line. It lacks depth and is a tad too unrealistic.
Other than that the story was fairly well written, with only a few punctuation and spelling/word usage errors. Again, it's a very solid effort for your first time. I'm merely pointing out things that IMO could be improved upon. By all means, keep writing.
A good first story. I found the main character annoying with how he reacted to events. If he loved her that much he would run to Cindy so fast, even after what she had done. Keep going.
When you write a story, don’t think that you have to completely interrupt the flow with a largely irrelevant, overly long, ridiculously detailed backstory. Also, when people have an emergency meeting, they don’t beat around the bush for 30 minutes before they discuss the really important part. The entire coffee shop scene was like circling the drain, or even worse being in a holding pattern to land at Newark when they’re using the short runways. Also, don’t feast on LW stories before you write one, unless you are willing to recognize and disavow the idiotic tropes and cliché that in fact this category. Also, the quintessential, LW male is prone to crying jags and has an emotional maturity about age 9. Feel free to write a secure, mature MAN more interested in communication then a sarcastic or clever throw down line. I know this is a first story, and it’s quite forgivable. Steady writing, study the good writers and not just a popular ones, and hone your craft. Find someone to read your story and give you feedback, because they were whole parts of the story that were fuzzy, bloated, or moved too slowly. 2/5
-TJY
Sharon betrayed Tom and deserved a divorce but she was not a bad person its a shame her character was treated harshly. Tom and Cin are a good couple and I am happy they have a good marriage and hope they speak fondly of Sharon.
That was a very well written story especially it being your first . I believe it’s worth the 5 stars I’m awarding it . Be warned though that some commentators , in this genre more so , can be quite crass and even down right hateful . Should some take to you like a pit bull on a t-bone don’t let it get to you personally and blow them off . There’s no way they know you personally and can’t judge your persona from your writings . That would be like someone claiming they know say , Stephen King because they read The Shining or one of his other novels . I say this to you because you’re a talented writer and I would like you to keep writing and not become discouraged because of comments over your work. Great first story!!!
Yawn. The old “morals clause” trope, Which, by the way — such a cause of action does not exist in any Anglo-American jurisdiction I’m aware of and I’ve been an employment lawyer for three and a half decades. No non-employee has a right to enforce such a provision. LW is littered with tropes, which once introduced, is copied by virtually every lemming author without a mind or imagination of their own. Yawn.
Started off LW cliche then morphed into a Romance story. Enjoyable read. Thanks.
For your first story post, this one was damned good. You have some real writing ability. I’m in for a *5, and keep writing.
LOL this has to be a baseball story with all the references to other landslide events! Author did not miss many unfortunately it (in my opinion left the bounds of time and space OH YES ventured into the TWILIGHT ZONE). **1/2 stars
Love the description of school administrators and their workshops. It seems it's a universal trait. I'm a retired teacher.
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In the long run he will realize he got off easy.
Why the hell would he want a relationship with his in laws???
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OK being crippled with grief for Lucy makes sense.
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Gotta' love a happy ending.
Death and loss don't go well with arousal and sexual stimulation. Its very difficult for someone who is relating to an MC who is experiencing the extreme loss of his partner both from humiliating betrayal and worse - death, to realistically want to indulge in sexual intimacy. There is a reason for mourning. Psychologically speaking its difficult for me as a reader to just so easily become aroused after I know that the life I had is destroyed and the one I shared it with is gone. I realize there are more simply wired people who don't care about such things and will get rigid with the drop of a dime, but I think in general, death is a big Debbie Downer in fiction just like in real life.
I realize this was a first effort but couldn’t get through it. A couple of constructive thoughts. The author spent excruciating detail on superfluous and inane dialogue and minor details. Then skirted over the meaningful or gave precious little attention to it.
There were far too many clichés. The story became scattered and difficult to follow the flow. Good idea but failed in the delivery.
Thanks for all the comments. I did intend to write a fitting ending for Janet and George. Janet was a last minute addition to the story and I didn't come back to her. I apologize. George was based off an a55hole I really had to deal with (not in the same context) but I was afraid I'd try to have him die as well, so I left that open.
What a stupid plot device. I guess after fucking a strange white guy she'd have to try out a black guy, then a midget, then a threesome, then a woman, etc. All the mother had to say is that I'm going to tell your husband, so you should start planning on being a single parent. End of fuckfest but probably end of marriage anyway. The stupid whore definitely did Not love him. Dead is better than divorced.
5 stars! It's always convenient when the spouse dies just after having crossed the line. It makes grieving and being comforted by the deceased's best friend so much easier. The MC was relatable and this reader felt empathy for him. The story was well paced, and loose ends were all tied up. Well done!
I just wrote a comment; then I read a huge number of 5 or near grade 5 comments.
My math (the odds) hints to me strongly that this isn't a first story but maybe written by a experienced writer using a different name. I hope that's not True.
I didn't rate your story because:
The story left me in a mental (sad) condition.
My thought is; how could a woman who wanted to get pregnant by her husband think for even a second about a another man taking her for a weekend sex adventure.
The writing was good the event-s left me cold.
A really, really great story. I agree with KRD12954 that Janet and the asshole's brother did not receive the comeuppence they deserved. Had you dealt with them appropriately, it would have been a 5 star masterpiece rated in the 95th or higher percentile.
Are you sure you couldn't squeeze a couple of more cheating wife tropes in there?
Too neat and tidy. The MC has a lot of trauma that probably did not get processed, but he went and got married, tying it all up in a bundle for the next wife. And the alienation of affection idea is a serious LW cliche.
Good story. One glaring faux pas “ I told Mom the facts about Cindy's death”. Cindy hadn’t died.
Have you noticed? Anonymous is always an AH and never has the courage to use a real name?
Keep writing. So what if it has many cliche. As long as it is well written, people would enjoy it.
I do wonder what happen to the superintendent who abused his position to help his brother's evil plan.
Yeah, just couldn't really buy it. Too many influencial friends that conveniently allowed the story to work. The death of a LW is just a waste and an easy way out. Sure kill the evil coniving hateful wife, if you really must, but killing off a wife that actually believes she's a LW is just giving her an easy way out. Having to live a life as a single mum forever regretting her poor decisions would have been far more painful.
The speed at which the MC moved on, and his behaviour was a little bit of an eye opener to the kind of person he was. He was no hero, and it just made me think that Sharon had a deeper reason to cheat, and it wasn't just to experience some strange.
I don't even want to go into the levels of weak will someone would need to be turned into a cheater just because some idiot work colleague liked to talk crap. Nah, there was a lot more going on there than we were being told, and I'd really wonder what part Cindy played in persuading Sharon to cheat. Especially considering how quickly Cindy was to grass on Sharon and then the speed at which she moved into Tom's life. Cindy really was playing the long game.
Sharon was gonna get hers. Cindy did get hers, and has children by the man she really loves and loves her!
Not bad, but it felt like 2 separate stories. Also, the Mom knew and didn't try hard enough to stop it.
Good and bad in this story, but having the MC tell his daughter, in substance, that he was “eternally grateful” his first wife was killed in a train wreck was a bit much.
Pro tip, the only people the read the LW section for sex are freak cucks who like the thought of their wife having sex with better men
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Everyone else is here for the emotional carnage
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Spend more naritive time on either how he fucked up everyones lives or the sex she had outside of marriage if you want a higher score
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neither LW demographic cares about sex between committed adult who dont hate each other
One of the best first offerings by a new author in a long time. Both the plot AND the writing were very high quality. Hopefully this author will treat us to additional stories.
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The plot, of course, relies on yet another crazy female who claims that she just MUST see what fucking another man is lie, as she has only been with her husband. To make this insanity ever crazier, she is off to do it for a weekend shortly after finding out she is pregnant with her husband’s child 🤗. Can the premise for a story be any more unbelievable? Of course not! This is LW at Literotica!
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But given the premise, the story was well told and satisfying. A quibble with the ending: so he never told his kids that he was married before marrying their mother?
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5 *****
Well written but just a bit too contrived for me.
I would think that it would be near impossible for a superintendent to hold a 3 hr workshop on a Friday afternoon (Teachers Union and all), at least without having to explain why. And even if he could, would he really tie up an entire district of faculty just so he could cover for his brother could fuck one of the teacher's wives?? What was in it for him to take a risk like that? And then he was stupid enough to talk about it and be recorded. And then he was stupid enough to try to convince the police that this teacher somehow had control of a speeding train, and used it as a murder weapon - to be at the exact place and time where the cheaters would cross. I would really hope that no one this dumb would have influence over future generations.
These stories that have one bad influencer convincing an otherwise faithful wife that she has to cheat really bother me. It assumes the wife is stupid, gullible, or shallow (or all three). I just don't buy that any somewhat intelligent woman would be swayed by that.
I know the story had to be set up but try to imagine a more realistic scenario.
The romance with Cindy, as others have pointed out, far too fast. Interesting how the Mom, who lived in a different part of the country, had pull with an arena official in Raleigh. Everything was a bit too Hallmark at the end for me.
The story is technically well written and is quite an achievement for a first time author of fiction. Hopefully, the author will become a frequent contributor to LW. Anything is possible in a fictional world, but the most impactful of the genre reflects the reality the reader inhabits. Here, the story falls a bit short. The rapidity with which the MC recovers from so many devastating events in his life is beyond the resilience displayed by any human one would meet in daily life. The actions of the intended paramour's brother are wildly impulsive and seem highly unlikely to reflect the behavior of someone who had the judgement and self control to rise to a senior position in an educational system. Cindy comes across as opportunistic in the way she burrows into the MC' s life immediately following the death of the ill fated adultress, her supposed best friend of many years. The likelihood such a person would prove to be a loving and stable companion over many years seems low.
Well done on your first try. I don't have much to say other than the pacing was good. The new romance was telegraphed but the story carried me along. 4 stars for the story and 1 more to say well done for taking the leap. 5 stars in total.
Janet should’ve gotten burned big time in the massive fallout, if it weren’t for her consistently badgering Sharon to have an affair then she wouldn’t have ended up dead.
A most impressive debut. Splendid. Five stars. Navigated what could have been familiar territory (wife who was a virgin at marriage wants to try another man) with original twists. Having the cheating wife die before she could consummate her infidelity is definitely a Hooked move. Even though the man himself never made that move. So this new author manages to thread through the tropes to find something new. Yes, definitely a five.
Great story! Any emotions for Sharon disappeared pretty quickly and the person who did alot of damage, Janet, got off Scott free, but it covered alot of ground in a short time. Well done.
A bit rambling, and disconnected in places, and it hit most of the LW cliches. Lovers killed in a wreck? Still worth four stars. Try to not include so many cliches...
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JPB NOT BOB
"The doctor that had spoken to me earlier came out and told me that she had passed.
I was numb"
Don't know why he goes into shock because of this, he lost nothing of actual value that day.
Excellent story. Something tells me that even though this was your first fiction you have written other works. *****
"Sharon had been complaining about him being an egotistical asshole" - So of course she cheated with him.
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"Sharon and I had met in college" - What does this have to do wit the story?
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"you can file suit against the bank for not enforcing the morals clause" - Can we put this plot point to bed? No, he can't.
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"I'm sure that the school system might want to settle to keep that kind of information out of the news." - That's not on the schools system, unless they fail to punish Bullock.
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"I'm glad Sharon has released you from your vows." - She's dead, their vows are meaningless.
Doesn’t need long and self serving comments….
Definitely a great first (hopefully not last) story…
Made my early morning
The idea that a normal person would jump into a sexual relationship under these circumstances, so very quickly, defies common sense, not to mention common decency. Ick.
Good story but a couple quibles. How many happily married virgin brides decide to run off to get some strange just after learning their preggers? Plus tell both their best friend and mother beforehand? Seems very unlikely to me.
Brentjw
Pretty solid first story, overall. A bit over the top in places, a bit too breathless in others, but a promising start.
1. Writing was fine, needed a little editing.
2. Events happening in such a compacted time frame lessened my connection to the story.
3. So many happy endings, love, $, child soon, I became less involved with the story.
4. Definitely a 5
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The story was a bit, well more than a bit, all over the place.
But good basics.
WOW, DAMN!!! First story?? You nailed it! Please continue writing, new writers are always needed. KUDOS on your first story!