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Egg Money

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At that moment, Donna said, "I'm going to be forward here and ask this excellent gentleman to dance."

That's how I came to first hold Donna Miller in my arms. A woman who from that moment seemed to perfectly fill the space between my arms and the emptiness in my life. I drove Donna home that night, leaving my wife to find her own way back to the house we sometimes shared.

Donna lived in a small saltbox house on a side street. She invited me in for coffee. I watched her lovingly check on her children asleep in their beds. Then she paid the young girl who babysat for her, pulling the cash from a small purse in her pocketbook. The little she paid the girl left the purse empty. Once again, my attention was drawn to how often there was a distinction between domestic happiness and financial wealth.

We sat in her kitchen drinking coffee until the early hours of the morning. I pushed her to tell me about her life. She told me about her childhood and attending nursing school, and then about meeting her husband and falling in love. She spoke of giving birth to first her son and then her daughter. All this flowed out of her like a spring-flooded river racing to the sea. Then it hit a dam, and she slowly told me of her husband's tragic death. She and the children were in the car with him, traveling to visit his elderly mother when a truck jackknifed and killed him and injured her.

"Fortunately, the kids were safe in the back, but Jason died, and I was three weeks in the hospital. The truck was in some corporate thing that had little insurance. Jason's settlement was soon exhausted on our living expenses that first year." She tried to gloss over the hardship she faced on the death of her husband, but I wouldn't let her. I made her tell me it all, knowing that the telling was relieving the burden of it.

"I don't know what I would do without the reduced daycare I was granted by the center where you work," she said. "I wonder how they manage it?"

"Oh, you know," I said, "People like me donate some time, and parents like you help out. Plus, we have benefactors."

"Yes, I'm very grateful to you," she said, covering my hand with hers and giving it a squeeze. "And I'm very grateful to that Ovum Foundation. I should write them and tell them how much they have helped me and how grateful I am."

"Oh, I'm sure they know."

"Well, I'd still like to tell them," she said. "Could you get their address for me?"

"I'll work on that," I said. "But it's very late, and I should be going."

"I think you're wrong," she smiled. "In fact, it's very early. But I'll let you go if you promise to come back and tell me all about yourself, and not let me do all the talking, as I did last night."

I made that promise, and I intended to come back. At home that night, I found my wife waiting for me. She was furious and bent on a fight, but I had no reason to give her what she wanted.

"Look, I'm tired, and whatever your problem is, I'm going to bed."

"Oh no you don't! You can't just leave me without a word at a public affair. How did you expect me to get home?"

"I expected your boyfriend to drive you home," I said, giving her a look that I hoped conveyed that I knew about her extramarital involvements.

"How dare you make such an accusation!"

"As I said, I'm tired, and it's not an accusation, but a fact known by most if not all of your coworkers. You and—I believe his name is Dr. Anthony Vincent—have been carrying on very publicly for several months. Tonight you were flaunting it in front of your colleagues."

"Tony is a friend, and that's all!"

"Well, I'm assuming your friend gave you a ride home."

"If you knew anything, you would know that Tony rides a motorcycle, and I wasn't dressed for that."

"Nancy," I sighed, "can't you understand that I just don't care anymore?"

"Why? I suppose you have something going with that slut you left with tonight."

With that, I turned abruptly. She nearly fell down the stairs, not expecting me to confront her.

"Donna Miller is no slut. She's a widow and a mother. The kind of decent woman someone like you can't understand."

She wasn't expecting a defense of Donna, and as she grabbed the banister to keep herself from falling, I could see something cross her face, a mixture of fear and loss. But then she regained her anger and as we reached the top of the stairs, she said, "You hate me because of my success."

At the door to our bedroom I turned on her again, out of curiosity, not anger.

"Why would you think I hate you?" I asked.

"Because I'm a prominent surgeon, and you are an unimportant grade-school teacher."

I could only shake my head as I entered the bedroom and prepared for bed.

Apparently, she thought she had scored a point with her last statement. "All this is mine, you know," she asserted. "The house and everything in it. The Mercedes and the SUV, the money in the bank accounts, and our 401(k) are all from my earnings."

But not the money in the Egg Fund. Not a dollar came from her of the tens of millions that earned more in a week than she earned in a year. Nor could she claim full ownership of the rest of our possessions purchased with the aid of my teaching salary. However, I felt only disappointment that she had placed things before love in our marriage.

"Why, Nancy?" I asked. "How can you be so fixated on material things?"

As I said this, I thanked Uncle Ned for his advice. I had kept the egg money my secret because I could not be sure of my bride. I entered the bathroom in the master suite and locked the door behind me. Nancy first tried the door and then yelled through it, "In a divorce, I'll see that you don't keep anything!"

Then, thank goodness, she went quiet. She wasn't there when I finished in the bathroom and reentered the bedroom. I shrugged and went to bed.

****

The day after Thanksgiving, Nancy effectively put a knife into our marriage. We had spent the holiday at her parents' with my Nancy pretending we were the loving couple. When the food was served and her mother finally sat down at the table, the first words out of her mother's mouth, with all the family listening, were, "Silas, when can I expect to see some grandchildren?"

"Ask your daughter," I replied.

Nancy gave me an angry look and then launched into her standard response about how we had to wait until her career was more established. At the end of this, her mother gave her standard advice that we should not wait too long. The following day, Nancy assured that we had waited too long.

"I'm going away for Christmas break," she informed me.

"Where is it you propose we go?" I asked.

"Not we," she said. "I'm going with a friend."

"This is a male friend, I assume."

"None of your business!" she hissed.

"Well, it's not Tony Vincent, because I heard he dumped you for a younger model."

She became incensed at this and stormed out of the house. I sat for a while and then decided to call a travel agent. "Yes, I can book that trip," the woman informed me, "but I have to warn you that it can come at a steep price over Christmas week, and that's without the park admission and ride fees."

"Just make the reservation, but hold the final commitment until the lady says yes," I told her.

I had been seeing Donna fairly frequently over the past year. I had often taken her and her kids to dinner when she came to pick them up from daycare on the weekends. The children had become familiar with me. There was Darrel, six, and Cheyenne, four. Darrel was named after his paternal grandfather, and Cheyenne was named after Donna's mother. Although Donna and I had become close, there was no physical relationship. It wasn't that I was holding back out of some misguided morality. As far as I was concerned, I owed nothing to Nancy or our marriage. But I could sense the conflict within Donna; the good wife still trying to recover from the death of her husband.

It was in this vein that I asked Donna and her children to accompany me to Disney World in Florida over Christmas week. I first broached this to Donna out of hearing of the kids. She was immediately reluctant. "Do you think it wise?" she asked.

"If you're worried about my wife, don't be. She informed me she'll be vacationing with a friend."

"No, that wasn't my concern," Donna said. "I was considering the expense."

"Well, don't concern yourself. I have money set aside for just such occasions."

When we told the kids, they were thrilled, but it occurred to me that Donna already knew my wife would be no problem. What she knew was something I would have to explore.

I did one other thing. I called and hired a private investigative firm, a large firm, and one with the resources to follow my wife on her trip. Again, someone reminded me of the expense, and I assured them it would be no problem. "How about I send you a twenty-five-thousand-dollar deposit, and you bill me weekly?"

With my wife being followed, I prepared for the end of the school term and my vacation. For the first time in years, I was looking forward to Christmas.

****

We flew to Orlando on Christmas Eve. The trip with two small children was exhausting. The suite I had booked had two large bedrooms, and Donna took one with the children. I slept alone in a king-size bed. The kids woke us early on Christmas day, raring to go. We spent a day on the rides and wandering the park. However, by late afternoon, we were all worn out. It was a hectic day in the park, but I hoped for fewer crowds for the rest of the trip.

Not long after an early dinner, first Cheyenne and then Darrel fell fast asleep. I opened a bottle of wine from room service and Donna and I settled in on the couch. Donna took a sip of wine and then excused herself. I figured she was tired and heading for bed.

Donna returned in a sheer, baby doll nightie. I was stunned, and barely managed to stutter a "What the hell?"

"Oh, you don't like?" she teased, holding the hem out from her sides and doing a little twirl.

When I first saw her, I thought she looked a bit like a classic sex nymph, but seeing her this way, I knew she was the sexiest nymph there ever was. As she came to the end of her little turn, I jumped up and grabbed her. The sex that followed cannot be described. There seemed no material end to our passion, and that was because it wasn't just passion. We each knew the other had fallen in love without sex. We now advanced to a state of physical intimacy that many aspire to, but few achieve.

Exhausted in the early hours of the morning, we lay holding each other and I asked her, "Why now, Donna?"

"Because," she said, "I love you, and I've wanted you for some time and knew you wanted me. But you respected him and me enough to wait."

I knew the him of which she spoke was her dead husband. We slept then, and it was not until almost the last day, sitting at a small café drinking overpriced coffee, that I asked her what she knew of my wife's new friend. Her children were playing nearby and she was watching them and not looking at me while she spoke.

"It's Dr. Sherman, and it's a bit of a scandal, I'm afraid."

"Not Thomas Sherman, surely. He's the hospital's chief of medicine."

"Yes," she replied. "That Thomas Sherman."

"But he's happily married, and he must be at least fifteen years older than Nancy," I argued.

"More like twenty, and rumor has it that he was just having a fling with a younger woman until his wife caught him with her in bed and threw him out. Now they say he's trying to put a good face on it. However, no one believes he will last long with the hospital slut," she opined.

Then, realizing what she had said about my wife, she turned to me red-faced and apologized.

"Don't fret yourself. She's that and more," I admitted.

I didn't want to go home, but I knew we had to. We arrived home on New Year's Eve, just in time to celebrate the ball drop. I didn't go home that night but stayed at Donna's. My wife returned home the following afternoon, barely an hour after I arrived.

She looked well and tanned, clearly from a vacation in the sun. I think her own tan kept her from noticing mine. At any rate, we exchanged no welcome-home kiss. The cool atmosphere remained between us until February, when I came home from school to find her sitting in our living room.

I knew what her problem was. I had kept up the surveillance on her. The news of the affair between the chief medical officer and the surgeon had reached the hospital trustees, and one of the lovers had to go. They chose the slut. She wanted me to comfort her, but I found that hard to do. She also tried to get back into my good graces. However, as the saying goes, that ship had sailed.

In April, my marriage to Nancy came to an abrupt conclusion. I waited for her to get back on her professional feet before I demanded a divorce. Her return to her vocation didn't come easily. The hospitals in our region were aware of her reputation and wanted nothing to do with her. Finally, she found a place at a small hospital that had taken on bariatric weight-loss surgery as a specialty to survive in the current health care environment. The chief surgeon was a woman, and Nancy was her assistant. I assumed it was a substantial comedown in prestige, but perhaps not in salary.

At any rate, things blew up over something on my end. Donna and I had been careful at first to take precautions. When we got back from Florida, Donna went on the pill or, more precisely, a patch of some kind. I am not knowledgeable enough to know what went wrong, but she was pregnant, and I couldn't have been happier.

With her working in a hospital, the news quickly got out. I came home one afternoon from school, intent on changing and departing for Donna's residence. I found Nancy waiting for me.

"Well, you got your little tart pregnant," she accused.

I merely shrugged and said, "Yes, we're very pleased."

This set Nancy off, as I knew it would, and she began cursing Donna and me. When she came down off the ceiling, I said as calmly as I could, "This has to be humiliating for you; as your notable slut status is for me. But if you want to mitigate the pain, I suggest you divorce me as quickly as possible."

"You bastard," she swore. "You're not even ashamed."

"As far as I'm concerned, I have nothing to be ashamed of."

"I'll claim adultery and name the little mother as your paramour."

"No, you won't," I laughed. "You see, I have pictures. I've had you followed since before last Christmas. I'm particularly fond of a set of you and Tom Sherman on a nude beach in St. Martin. If those hit the Internet, what little reputation you have left will evaporate."

"You wouldn't dare," she said.

"Try me!"

I left then and headed straight for Jack Anderson's office. He had been expecting me for some time.

Seated in his office, he said, "You know she's going to ask for everything."

"She can have it all except the egg money, but I want it done quickly, obviously," I said.

"She can't reach the Egg Trust. It's irrevocable, and you took my advice on transferring your financial profits into it slowly over time," Jack told me.

"Good, let's get it done."

Donna was not so sanguine. "How can you give her everything? You need to fight this. I'll lend you money for the lawyers. I can take a second mortgage on this house. I don't care a fig about my reputation. But I won't let you destitute yourself on my account."

I brought a bottle of expensive champagne with me. "Here, let me pour you a glass of this. You will probably need it," I said.

She was seated at her kitchen table and rose to stop me. "No!" she demanded. "I'm pregnant, and we can't afford it!"

"It's just one glass," I said, gently pushing easing her into her seat.

When I had her seated and a bit of wine in her, I took a knee and said, "Donna Miller, will you please agree to marry me? And then I will tell you about the egg money."

She frowned, but nodded her head yes to my proposal, muttering, "Egg money, indeed."

So I told her, "It began with my great-grandfather Silas...."

The End

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NitpicNitpic19 days ago
Why

Why would he invest 500,000 with a person he has never met?.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

The extra 5+ years was beyond pointless.

Should have divorced as soon as he found out.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal1969about 2 months ago

Very good but wanted more.

I agree, why wait so long to divorce, but I still enjoyed the story. Thanks

Pinto931Pinto931about 2 months ago

So he had proof of her cheating but waited over 5 years, why?

LoriRobinsonGaLoriRobinsonGa3 months ago

Ended about 3 paragraphs too quick.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

My grandparents lived on a farm, having been in the depression grandpa was cheap. He sent all 9 kids to college (if they wanted) but as late as 1970 they still had and used a privy and never a new car. All those years grandma saved her egg money! She bought a new car and a house in town. Grandpa had a choice - farm or town. Any wonder grandma was NEVER amused when anyone mentioned their anniversary, April 1st.

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Many think they are experts when judging others but can be clueless about their own lives (for the comment section). A good tale RG but my favorite remains 'Survived By'. Thank you.

somewhere east of Omaha

v_heartsv_hearts5 months ago

It's like reading about a bunch of emotionless robots. Neither your MC nor the cheating wife nor even the rebound gf read like real people.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

One of your worst.

MC knew and played wimpy cuck Way to long.

And egg money trust should have been set up so no problem in divorce etc ages ago

tsgtcapttsgtcapt5 months ago

Good; but could be better... need a chapter with the results - thevslut has a garage sale to get out from under bankruptcy, etc.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Meh. Ending seemed very rushed and abrupt.

NitpicNitpic6 months ago
Bit

Bit of an abrupt ending.Also,why didn't he divorce his cheating wife a lot earlier?.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

good story, would like to read about the wailing and gnashing of teeth when the slut finds shes not worth az much as she thought, her reputation is further in the gutter and hubby is wealthy beyond her wildest fantasies. i would have liked to read RG version of her gnashing of teeth, wailing and protestations of love during the divorce. Previous commenters have it right where they complain slut wasnt punished much being allowed to take everything but nest egg, thats not realistic even when one is done w/ everything to do w/ a wife to be x. Also knew she was cheating long before the xmas vaca tripw/ a lover, why was he not getting all the cheating facts together, again unrealistic. In general not close to RG's best. rk

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Meh

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

it was a very good story with nice twists but no emotional depth, no sense of a loved one lost even by accounting the time line.....keep trying still 5/5

inka2222inka22226 months ago

Meh. 3.5 stars. As others noted, this story had major problems: (1) he was effectively wasting his life married to her for no reason whatsoever (and the worry about losing the egg money was moot since the end of story clearly said it was protected in divorce). (2) he had clear and great blackmail material but let her steal ALL their marital assets he was entitled to in a divorce, (3) basically ZERO punishment for her (being fired from the hospital just to get another cushy well paid job isn't exactly "punishment".

AnotherChapterAnotherChapter6 months ago

I generally like RG’s stories, but this one is an exception. Why would any self respecting guy put up with her slutty behaviour for so long? He had nothing to lose by getting rid of the bitch so much sooner. Second problem is that he starts an affair of his own before getting quit of his marriage. If you want to move on, then do it in the right order!

ScaliaScalia8 months ago

In the USA, it is always the higher ranked employee that is let go, not the underling.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well that's certainly one way to stick a fork into your wife. Well done.

oldpantythiefoldpantythief10 months ago

While it wasn't the classic BTB, it did end well for the MC. Just think he should have dumped the cheating slut much sooner and let her divorce him before having sex with Donna. Just because his wife is cheating doesn't make it right for him to while he is still married. Liked the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

MC is a pushover. Too bad. **

HighBrowHighBrowabout 1 year ago

NEVER MARRY A MED STUDENT, ESP. A BLOODY SURGEON. Agree, disagree, you’ve been warned…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A good story,unfortunately You made your MC spinless.You made him lose respect and his integrity (obviously you gave him no pride) by making him put up with her affairs,especially with everybody knowing about her affairs for all the years. You also made him an idiot,he learned nothing. That egg money should never be disclosed to any wife,just discreetly used as needed.Something many men have learned the hard way. Also many have also learned 'love' guarantees nothing..In todays society a prenup is simply a wise choice for both parties.I know for myself,though I am happily married, the only reason I would get married now days is for the want of kids. Prenup mandatory...ARM

MountainMan1336MountainMan1336about 1 year ago

I enjoyed this story but only gave you three stars. As usual it seems like you rushed then conclusion, I believe you could get at least another chapter out of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Dammit, I wanted to read about her fainting when she found out he was worth forty million. Oh well, it was still a really good story, just about half a page too short.

Thanks, RG.

MyInspirationMyInspirationover 1 year ago

Another story that ends just as it's getting Juicy 3*

BSreaderBSreaderover 1 year ago
As always

A great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Abruptly truncated. There’s so much available for a complete ending that it’s a shame the author didn’t finish it. 4 stars for an otherwise fantastic story.

Bill S.

JimQ2JimQ2over 1 year ago

Took too long to put her out.

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirensover 1 year ago

Nice story! It ended on a hopeful note for the MC and Donna. Nothing more is needed, in my opinion. Five stars, and sorry I can't give it more stars.

nogravynogravyover 1 year ago

Interesting, but not up to this really good writer's usual offerings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story although I would have loved to have read that in the divorce, his wife had learned of the existence of the fund and her lack of entitlement to any portion of the proceeds. 5 Stars.

Thank you.

G

GillotineGillotinealmost 2 years ago

Almost one year later, and this story has taken on much more meaning...

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 2 years ago

As usual the anon's can't see a true artist and author when they are right in front of them. Still 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another cuckold story, no great surprise. 2 stars.

Helen1899Helen1899almost 2 years ago

Great story, happy ending, thank you

RePhilRePhilalmost 2 years ago

What a story teller!!!! 5&FAV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well structuered tale. Five stars.

ZippityDoDaDayZippityDoDaDayalmost 2 years ago

You are an excellent, albeit sometimes frustrating, author, but it is fairly obvious you threw this one together rather quickly. ⭐⭐⭐

Diecast1Diecast1about 2 years ago

Love the story. Wife is a bitch. AAAAAA++++++

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 2 years ago

I thought she would offer him a quick divorce on favorable terms

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Again, would it have killed you to continue the story to let us share in the rest of the story?

I really wanted to read about how the divorce panned out & just how the ex- found that he had control of over $10,000,000. The fun part after having to see him dissed by his wife.

Bill S.

xhristianjxhristianjabout 2 years ago

Oh that explains all of this authors cuckold ways he's a liberal but then why would he care she's fucking the entire Hospital afterall they're all about Female Empowerment?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story I love it Just wish my life could be a bit like that (jaybee186)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Years of living with a public slut? You've got to be kidding.

TrambakTrambakabout 2 years ago

I am surprised as to why there's always a clamour for an ending?

I mean, the basic story is about a faithless wife and the methodology of tackling it. That's fulfilled.

Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay foundation, but the story is patchy and ultimately incomplete.

dark2donut2dark2donut2about 2 years ago

B&W story, one-dimensional characters. Even worse, the characters are a typical cliche for B&W stories, no depth of any kind. Plot is OK. 2.5 stars.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 2 years ago

Great Story, enjoyed the read. Thanks for your writing.

Helen1899Helen1899about 2 years ago

I very nearly enjoyed, i was thinking 5* then i realised it had finished but had no ending so i gave it 2* i usually enjoy your stories, sadly this was a let down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A bit naïve but feel-good

orion2bear2orion2bear2over 2 years ago

He knew shewas cheating for years and did nothing

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Congrats. Your stories are very good. This one was a bit weak - but the ending was... much less disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A cuck writer and his cuck story of a cuck husband

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A rich cunt with his egg money who is a known cuck because everyone knows his skank wife is cheating on him

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyed your story. This is fiction not reality that people should remember

RimmerdalRimmerdalover 2 years ago

Bleeegh and FTDS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"... It's evident she is having an affair! But I'm not going to tolerate it!"

3 years later...

"Everybody knows she's the hospital slut! But I'm no cuckold, no siree!"

5 years later...

Etc, etc. Weak MC and weak story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lol, just a wimpy cuckold stupid man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ANOTHER WEAK WIMP MC SILAS....WHAT A STUPID CUCK.....CRAP STORY OF A STUPID BRAINLESS CUCK

bartholomewbrontebartholomewbronteover 2 years ago

For those of you complaining that he didn't divorce her right away, remember that the trust was "unofficial", i.e., probably just held in bank accounts, until the lawyer friend set up the irrevocable trust. Prior to moving the funds into the trust, she would have been entitled to half of the "unofficial" egg money. Thus, the wait.

Good story, 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Some background built that better explained why he didn't divorce her a lot sooner would have been nice . Overall enjoyed.

xhristianjxhristianjover 2 years ago

Wow knows his wife is having affairs for YEARS but does absolutely nothing? WTF how much sperm did this fucking cuckold slurp from his slut wife's fucking cunt seriously just a fucking tire fire of a piece of shit story!

GumpershnickalGumpershnickalover 2 years ago

I don't understand why he waited to divorce, he said he wanted to keep the egg money from her but his lawyer says don't worry she can't touch it at the end so surely he would have known that at the time so why be a cuck for so long?

TonyspencerTonyspencerover 2 years ago

Loved the result, egg on Nancy’s face when she finds out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
It Was Cute. Vapid, but Cute.

Thanks for the effort.

SorchakSorchakover 2 years ago

To the Anon who can't spell 'wimp', why should/would Silas want to sue Nancy for alimony, when the Egg Money he already *has* is worth in excess of ten million dollars? He doesn't need it, as he has FAR more than she would end up paying him. He's being nice and nasty at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another intelligent and witty offering from Mr Gerald.

LA

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Whimp haven... what the heck took Silas so looong to dump that skank... low self-esteem... he had both the reason and wherewithall... and the story ended way too fast with little resolve... also, Silas could have sued for alimony afterall, she made far more than him... just another mark of a whimp laying down for anything and everything... 1 star.

DoctimeDoctimeover 2 years ago

This was written in a hurry and it shows. I am not giving it a star rating out of respect for the author.

Mr_Sap24Mr_Sap24over 2 years ago

Its noticable how this was a rush job, there is a serious lack of comitment from the author in this story, his story tend to have more depth or investment in them, fine job fro a quick entertaining but lacking the usual quality.

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
Where

Where is the rest.Left like this it is a nothing story.

nixroxnixroxover 2 years ago

4 stars and just because you took sooooo long before letting the MC divorce the skanky, slut.

Otherwise, it would have been a solid 5 stars.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Excellent story! It wasn't a BTB ending but the Slut got her comeuppance! Damn straight Skippy! 5 BIG FAT FLUFFY STARS!

JacktacularJacktacularover 2 years ago

To the dumbass anon , yes he did burn her by letting her burn herself , keeping his "egg money" & trading up. Sometimes the best tool for BTB is karma!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes, thank you Richard for a calm, well paced story. If there was ever a story written with the exact number of words for a 5* story, this was it!

TeggeTeggeover 2 years ago

Thanks Richard!

SarahwithloveSarahwithloveover 2 years ago

"... a state of physical intimacy that many aspire to, but few achieve." Great line!

fritz51fritz51over 2 years ago

Nicely written tale and I enjoyed it, however I do agree with others that he should have slammed the door on Nancy when he first found the panties with semen in them. It should have been an easy manuver her into serving him divorce papers, as she believed he had nothing & didn't fit her station in society. A divorce offerring sign here, you get nothing, but freedom, and all of this is mine would have been probable from her. He had the resources to do battle, but sat back & let her shit on him... why?

WillowghbyWillowghbyover 2 years ago
Delightfully Well Written

Other commenters have already addressed the legal issues and plot shortcomings, so no need to repeat. Clearly, this one could have benefited from a longer "stew" on the back burner. However, RG writes with such a smooth flow, well paced plot, and such great technical skills that the reader simply glides through his story.

Thanks to RG for sharing his work.

Keep 'em comin'.

karasu_tengukarasu_tenguover 2 years ago

ThiIs this your worst story to date, or not your job at alls is your worst story to date...

SwordWielderSwordWielderover 2 years ago

Good, but 1) he should have been told by the lawyer that Nancy or any future wife would not have any rights to the trust fund when he first met them after Uncle Ned's death, and 2) he should have gone for a 50/50 split and maybe settled for 40/60 in Nancy's favor. Nancy really should have paid for all her cheating. At the very least he should have sent a letter (email?) with pictures to Nancy's parents explaining about Nancy's cheating. With Donna, I'm sure they will buy a decent house (not McManson) that will have enough rooms for everyone and a nice, big backyard for the kids to play in. They will be able to live a nice happy life. They won't need to buy and own the fanciest things, but they won't lack either and their home will be filled with love.

As another commenter stated - please finish the darn story

MormonJackMormonJackover 2 years ago

Awesome. I think I would have listened to Donna and gone after her money.

Thanks for writing awesome stories here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is your worst story to date, why would anyone waste a decade of their life with a partner they neither love nor trust? The main character must secretly like the fact that his wife is fucking around behind his back because there is no other explanation as to why he would stay in this loveless marriage.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Excellent set and basic idea, but Silas sure put up with more than most people would have! I suppose there was a strategy to it, which became clear once he hired the detective agency, but I couldn’t understand why he waited years and endured so much misery when he had a way out long before. Maybe he needed a real partner (that he finally found in Donna) to make it worth the effort? Despite that question, the conclusion wrapped it up nicely. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

FTDS

SeeingEyeSeeingEyeover 2 years ago

Makes no sense. Why did he wait? She couldn’t touch the egg money, he was in love with someone else, she was cheating and a bitch, no kids - there was absolutely no reason to stay with her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Okay. Three stars.

tizwickytizwickyover 2 years ago

As usual it was a very good and well written story. I would’ve like to have seen another chapter or two covering the divorce and all the fall out. After all with everything being all “no fault” he’s entitled to half of all the marital assets and property. Hell, he might be entitled to spousal support due to the income disparity of a successful surgeon and a elementary school teacher.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

He should have gone after her assets. As long as his trust couldn’t be touched.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Tell her now, later or not at all, the Egg Money is an inheritance not a martial asset, PLUS its tied up in a trust. As long as he doesn't deliberately co-mingle assets she can't lay a hand on it. How about you don't marry if you feel that strongly that secrets are necessary? Why the fuck wait 5 years, get publicly humiliated, hire a PI and then wait some more before dropping the hammer? All things acquired with joint (marital) assets are subject to a 50/50 split regardless of whose paycheck paid for them. That's part of the screwing LW dudes are always screaming about. It applies to the chicks too!

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 2 years ago

That was a good story. 5* all the way.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

Excellent. You do come up with some interesting MC's. 5*

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 2 years ago

The story outline is fine, but the execution was awkward and extended beyond plausibility. How is Sweetie’s Mom (and Dad) grandparent-expectations addressed? RG did NOT need to introduce them, but it helped put pressure on Sweetie. Surely, they will not be consoled by a baby from their ex-Son-in-Law, nor his new step-children!

The amount of time between Hubby’s first suspicions and the Christmas trips is inordinately prolonged. That does not generate much We-The-Readers respect for the MC. Nor, one would imagine, for the other ‘good-guy’ characters.

4* but mainly due to RG’s LIT history … otherwise 3*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very lacking in the romance area, also no revenge against the Dr.'s who were knowingly cuckolding him with impunity. That kept it at a 4 star level although your impeccable grammer was a big relief from most of the LW writers.

Regguy69Regguy69over 2 years ago

Very well written, as is your usual. A little light on the how he managed to keep the egg money secret from her lawyers. I know this is fiction, but I’m not sure the trust would be protected, but I’m not a lawyer. Also, why be a cuck for 5 years? Why not dump her and get on with his life?

georgelittle2000georgelittle2000over 2 years ago

He should have fought for the division of assets just to annoy her, then cash It all and ostentatiously Donate the money

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 2 years ago

u messed up with the egg money, it wasn't communal. just divorce her and have done with it why stay as long as he did. if u gave him a train of thought that maybe he was waiting to see if she changed or something but the only reason was bc of the egg money that she couldnt touch anyway

FredHuckFredHuckover 2 years ago

Very good story but it needs a chapter 2 with a more complete finish.

5 🌟s

FH

LT56linebackerLT56linebackerover 2 years ago

Cool. The Bear approves. It did take him a little longer than I would have, and no bloodshed. But at least he didn't break any eggs. 5 stars. More, please.

The BEAR

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

A nice story, enjoyable to read. Beats me why he waited to ditch the bitch. He had her bang to rights early in the story.

Oh well, got to pad the story out.

Scores 4/5

KRD19254KRD19254over 2 years ago

Dido, why did he wait so long. Dump the shank doc, ASAP - marry UP! The Trust was a last second relief, as I was wondering since it was secret why he did not slid it over seas. That is the reason why I thought he took so long. Then she can sue for his teachers salary and get no where except her paying him.

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5*, Hooyah, Salutes

YouamiYouamiover 2 years ago

Thank you RG for this terrific tale...I thought the egg money was a great plot device that dovetailed into the LW genre

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The idiot stayed married to a slut for over 5 years?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a waste of his life.

PowersworderPowersworderover 2 years ago

If the money was in a trust, it was always safe from the wife.

He supposedly loved Nancy until he discovered she was cheating, but he didn't seem particularly upset to find out that his wife was a slut. Why didn't he confront her immediately? What was the point of sitting around in a loveless marriage? She was humiliating him constantly with her appalling behaviour and total lack of discretion. What kind of pathetic wimp puts up with that kind of abuse for no reason? He couldn't even hide behind the pathetic excuse of "staying for the sake of the kids".

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

Often times here the endings on good stories seem rushed. Regardless, I loved the underlying premise. The tale was well told and I enjoyed the journey. 5*

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Great little story where the good guys won, and a cheating bitch was burned. A really great day in LW. The cucks will be back tomorrow, but today is for the real stories.

Hooked1957Hooked1957over 2 years ago

Nicely done. Home run.

Hooked

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not bad writing, but these pathetic tales about cheating wives are rather tiresome.

miket0422miket0422over 2 years ago

Nice story but, can anyone explain to me why he waited for so long to divorce the hospital slut? He gained absolutely nothing by staying married to her. She was never home and when she was she treated him like crap.

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

5 years? No possible way is he a sympathetic character. Total cuckold story and he's a closet millionaire from EGGS?

laptopwriterlaptopwriterover 2 years ago

Great story by a great writer. 5 stars.

mattenwmattenwover 2 years ago

Excellent, well told story. Too bad, I would also like to have "egg-money"!!

FD45FD45over 2 years ago

Good. I am unfamiliar with irrevocable trusts and how Activist Judge Resistant they are.

My one question is: the Egg Money was transferred before he was married, so should not be part of the marital assets.

It is easy for a non lawyer teacher to make that mistake so the story holds up anyway. And New York is a crazy place anyway. Their judges don’t believe in attorney client privilege or executive immunity, so what chance does a married schlub stand?

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

It’s a repost of a great story. Still love it. 5 stars

schulz777schulz777over 2 years ago

boooring,,....come on RG, ......we know you can do better

3starrs

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What took him so long to dump her?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Eggs. Who knew?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If the money was safe... and he had proof... then why wait to divorce? Especially since everyone NEW what was going on? Wait till she had a job? She was literally getting everything. Other then that good story.

FireFox59FireFox59over 2 years ago

Nice story. I have no idea how he put up with the bitch as long as he did but it all worked out well in the end. Thanks for posting.

LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 2 years ago

Hi Richard. Normally I enjoy your writing BUT... this time you got the legal situation all wrong regarding marital assets and, notably, the Silas Family Trust. Although you did try to recover in the last couple of paragraphs about the Trust. Re marital assets: Silas and Nancy jointly BOTH own the house and cars. They are not HERS.

Silas does NOT own the assets of the Family Trust. He is simply a beneficiary. So, it is not part of his personal asset base and not part of his marital assets. As Jack Anderson confirmed. Plus, the $500,000 Trust funds used to invest in Twitter share purchase means that the Trust owned the shares: not Silas. They were never at risk of Nancy getting her grubby paws on them. Anyway, thanks again for the story. Cheers..

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

sorry....it really needed the last part extended.....you left us hanging. Not cool.

DrtywrdsmithDrtywrdsmithover 2 years ago

Five stars! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dr. Nancy was one of the 5 smartest people in the world and Silas was only an educator. Now that he was a real wife and soon 3 children, he'll be super happy, as will his WIFE, and they will be better than fine. When Nancy finds out what she left, she won't be pleased...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It’s quite trite and the main character is unrealistically unemotional. He knew his wife was cheating for years and simply went along with it. Was he supposed to be a cuck in denial?

Mac_LapuMac_Lapuover 2 years ago

Very good.

But the story ended abruptly when I felt it was about to climax.

Oh well, if author ReichardGerald wants it that way, so be it.

Thanks author.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 2 years ago

Great read but ended too soon.

AngelRiderAngelRiderover 2 years ago

Awww come on. I wanted to read about a pregnant woman passing out from shock.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 2 years ago

"You're a wonderful man. Your wife is a very fortunate woman, although she doesn't seem to know it." - I realize we're in LW, so are predisposed to be suspicious, but I'm surprised that he didn't ask her what she meant by that.

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I would think that if the money was in a trust that it was untouchable?

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Tony rides a motorcycle in his formal (I assume tux) clothes?

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"Because I'm a prominent surgeon, and you are an unimportant grade-school teacher." - Why should that make him hate her? If she was a normal true loving wife, he'd be proud of her.

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"All this is mine, you know," - Um, no, no more than when the husband is the big earner, it's not "all his."

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"Nor could she claim full ownership of the rest of our possessions purchased with the aid of my teaching salary." - Again, it doesn't matter whose money anything was purchased with, they're all marital assets.

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I still wouldn't have given her anything, just on general principles! How many times do we see the cheating wife marry the multi-millionaire lover and still insist on her "fair" share of the marital assets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why did he wait so long to just get rid of the slut? A cheating spouse is like a cancer. you can't just wait and see if the cancer will get better or go away on its, own if you just ignore it a little longer. The longer you wait the worse the cancer gets. it will start attaching itself to important vessels and organs--- until it's too late to cut the cancer out. That's what this guy did with his whore wife. He sat on his ass and waited to see if the cancer would get better or go away. In the end the cancer just got worse. I think when he 1st found her cum crusted panties he should've got proof and just divorce her. When she was flaunting her lovers in his and her coworkers face, he should've divorced her than. Why wait? What was he waiting on? She didn't know about the money. He could've even done things to make her want a divorce. We all know the whore was just trying to fuck her way to to a rich Dr husband. She was just waiting until she caught a big fish to dump his sorry ass. She didn't love him. He didn't fit the image of a surgeons husband. She had no respect for him. That's why she didn't try to hide her cum crusted panties, didn't try to hide her affairs, flaunted her lovers in a event for her work, where all of her Co workers and husband will be. This marriage was over a long time ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellent story. The ending was priceless.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyover 2 years ago

Love of money is the root of all evil!

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