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Click hereWe're drenched. The bed's soaked. Juice coming from her, with a little pink tint, is running off my body.
We rolled over so we were face to face.
"Do you think Julie will come to our wedding?"
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- COMMENTS
I'm with Grumpy. Writing was fine but the plot itself was unfulfilling. I was mildly sadden when they broke apart, that sadness was never indemnified :(
Not sure I like this story. I can't really fathom how a brother and sister who are twins and best friends completely fall apart from each other for no real reason. No fight, no embarrassing situation, no drama and the sister just cuts the brother she is incredibly close to right out of her life? Doesn't make sense in any world. It also doesn't make sense that the sister who at the point of the reunion, who you made into pretty much a self-centered bitch at that point, would sleep with her brother who she obviously didn't care for in that way. Again it didn't make sense. Then finally, Cheri, she waits 10 years with this guy she knows she will never have. They repeatedly tell each other they'll never love the other. And when he comes back from the trip saying he had sex with his sister but realized she didn't love him. Cheri now is somehow fine with having never being considered, his having had sex with his sister, and now all of a sudden wants to and apparently always had wanted to be his lover. So much so that she saved her virginity for him? I realize it's an erotic fantasy, but it goes way beyond the suspension of disbelief.
Glad there was a happy ending.
I'm glad he came too his senses and realized who is his best friend. They are always together.
They even bought a house together.
That pretty much says I love you
This is a tragic story with happy ending. We've all loved (or I have) where it has not been returned so i felt for him. I am chuffed it worked out in the end in the story. Well done.
Not your typical Twincest story. But even so, Joel ended up being kissing cousins with Cheri. I really enjoyed it. ☺️ I suspected that Cheri had fallen for Joel because she stayed close to him after college. But I wasn't certain if she was doing it out of convenience or not until she and Joel bought the house together. Even if you ARE close family, that's a big commitment to make. Nice job! 5/5
The build up and story were great, but all sex scenes seemed rushed after the build. Please find an editor or proof reader as the little errors or typos detract from the story. 5 stars for a good start.
okay from what I read here: julie traded in a soulmate, twin and best friend for meaningless sex and fun in the short run and became unable to truly commit fully to any relationship in the long term she never made new friends she wanted to meet who she fully trusted and her long time boyfriends probably dumped her because of it. And she became a work-a-holic from what it seems.
Probably she felt more than sisterly love for him at some point and that scared her into putting distance between them... and than she became so estranged from her brother - that she escaped into meaningless sex again - with her brother this time... and that finally drove him away completely...
I hope there is a second part because I wanna know Julia's inner workings... and she hasn't open up why she acted how she acted...
jealousy can be a strong thing if she see true happiness and love and trust between Cheri and Joel... maybe she finally realizes her feelings...
It seems as though there’s a hole in the story. I rated it 5 stars for what was there, but think something is missing. Oh well, I enjoyed reading it.
Bill S.
Nope, didn't feel like any romance and the incest felt forced for the sake of the story. No affection.
Is an also just as curious to know more of the story. Seems too good to end on that revelation.