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Click here"Oh God, don't stop angel, don't you fucking stop. Suck me harder, fuck me harder, make me cum, Ari," Vivian babbled as Ari's ministrations pushed her closer and closer to nirvana.
Ari then did the one thing she knew would truly blow Vivian's mind, she pressed deeper and stimulated Vivian's sweet spot. She was forced to stop sucking the dildo as Vivian hips began to thrash wildly at the new sensations.
"Oh fuck, fuck, fuck," Vivian screamed as her body stiffened and she squirted, which is what Ari was trying to make her do.
A few minutes after the pulsating pleasure finally receded, Vivian spoke, her voice raspy and thick. "My god angel, you almost killed me, but what a death it would be darling. I love you my angel, my Ari." She barely had the energy to talk, didn't have enough to move, and motioned for Ari to come to her, which Ari did.
They kissed, softly and sweetly. Ari removed Vivian's harness and cuddled with her as they napped. Soon they would both need to wake and shower. Vivian would go down to the club for most of the night and Ari would stay and study for her next exam. Just three to go and then she would be going home to talk to her parents. She wondered just how much that conversation would change her life forever.
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- COMMENTS
The writing style and how the words are woven together to paint a vivid picture and elicit feelings is great. But if I'm honest with myself, I still can't fully get into Vivian and Ari. Yes, it worked out well for the four of them in the end, but Vivian and Ari were foul! Sometimes it's not what you do but how you do it and those two were a shitty mess. That's all I got to say about that along with the fact, I skim past most of the parts that have to do with them. I take my scarf (and hat) off to all the Kate's of the world who endure(d) such pain and betrayal. Yeah yeah, I know, if Kate can get over it so can I. It just takes some of us longer than others, and trust, I do understand the "logic." Well on to part 7.
But I refuse to read the parts about Viv and Ari, I just want them to go away - and take Brenda with them!
All i can say to Brenda is Grrrr. The slow burn to Kate and Meg's lovemaking, is torturing ME! (LoL) Kate is so patient.... V and A on the other hand...... sigh!
** GREAT CHAPTER **
I don't agree that Kate didn't see what Viv saw, just that she was too kind to take advantage of a traumatized girl. If Ari had ever come to Kate and said she needed a stronger hand Kate would have been glad to do it.
Viv and Ari still disgust me, I can't even read their sex scenes, can't stand seeing them happy! Keep hoping that Ari will knuckle under to her parents, or that Viv had rejected the idea of kids, ANYTHING that would through a monkey wrench into their relationship.
I hope that I am not going to seem offensive or bigoted myself. When I watch ostensibly lesbian porn, the scenes with one of the women using a strap-on just make me giggle. And giving a plastic cock a blowjob just makes me break out laughing.
I remember some years ago, a small dinner party my wife and I had for some of the other board members of the local NOW chapter. At least a couple of the women were lesbians and the other women including my wife were curious but then so was I.
The straight? women were asking the lesbians about some of their sexual methods.
Several of the straight women admitted using vibrators or dildos, one of the lesbian women claimed she would never used a penile substitute. She openly scoffed at the use of strap-ons, she claimed that was only done in porn movies for male droolers.
This had to be between fifteen to twenty years ago, maybe things have changed since then. How the hell would I know?
So, I would be interested if any one would want to respond to my curiosity. Either here in commentaries or email my fanfare account. I'd be more interested in a statistical accounting then any explicit descriptions. Thank you.
LOVE Kate.... She is such a love able character and her and Meg are wonderful... I can't wait to read about Kate showing Meg the ropes... I am sooooo gonna live vicariously through them!!!!
Viv and Ari... I still have an issue with how they came to be... But they are very much made for each other. Kate has forgiven them so I am trying. :)
Another wonderful chapter... Hope there are many more to come!!!
PS I hope Brenda gets hit by a TRUCK!!! I would be willing to drive it even. ;)
Another brilliant chapter. Thank you. One of the signs of a great writer is her/his ability to make the characters believable. When the readership is still arguing and expressing their various opinions in a story this long then the author is truly gifted and can take pride in her work. Has any one considered, that by segueing between Kate and Meg and Viv and Ari, Dru is trying is trying to show different types of lovers ( Lesbian/Straight and Dom/Sub) face similar problems within a relationship and how they deal with the broad spectrum of attitudes from the community affect and reflect us all? I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. ChristieP
Am so addicted to this series, I'm just imaging how Meg's first lezzy sex will be. Waiting for the next part. Good story
I love meg and kates story line. I wanna know what happens between them so bad! Continue to write please!! Looking forward to it
I just love it, wudn't it be funny to if Brenda was a little bi-curious hehe, as far is the storyline goes I'm addicted!
So kidding aside, in this chapter I was half-expecting a drama in Meg's side of family. Turned out to be on the contrary! (That bitc... I mean Brenda!) hehe.. But I know we'll get there hopefully soon on the next chapter; though, I have no idea how Meg's family is gonna take her revelation. ;)
Here's to hoping we get Kate and Meg's storyline up to speed again on the next episode. I'm a bit biased because honestly, Vivian and Ari's story gives me the slightest interest. hehehe... But I also have to remind myself that they are the reason why Kate and Meg are not blinded anymore, and are now together. So yay! Dru, great chapter as always. Thank you! :D
I love this series! Kate and Meg's storyline is my favorite, but I'm enjoying Vivian and Ari's line too.
Your characters are very believable and you really get invested in them.
(So invested and believable that I want to see that Brenda woman either disappear, be abandoned and divorced, or skinned)
I hope you keep this going for quite some time to come and I hope the next chapter will come soon.
As mush a dislike Vivian ...but I do want to know what happen to her and Ari they make great couple too.... But I love to know more about meg and Kate ... And if meg can really date Kate or chicken out when she tell her folks and leave her cuz of it ... Oh god I hope that doesn't happen :/
LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Brilliantly & Beautifully written
I'm addicted to Kate lol
Please keep writing!
I see you guys point it just. I love meg and Kate story more and yeah happen but they didn't need to go about the getting together. I just want more of Kate and meg
More of kate and meg!! I love theyre relationship and cant wait for them to take it.further..dont keep us waiting for too long
That was a great installment ! I don't understand why you would want to mad at Viv and Ari , but to me they are a great couple. Remember now , when Ari was in the store and the way the girl spoke to her , she's a sub and Kate wasn't seeing what Viv saw from the start . They just clicked and besides from this story began Kate had the hots for Meg so I say all's fair in love and war. Again Awesome piece.
Viv and Ari are cool together, and so are Kate and Meg. Thanks for writing and sharing, I'm enjoying this story, thanks :-)
Sheesh! There's still a whole lot of hate out there for Vivian and Ari. Yes, it was pretty shitty of Ari to ditch Kate so quickly... but isn't that possible in real life.
Kate's already come to realize that Ari is better off with Viv. And she's head over heels in love with Meg. They're very cute together.
Can't we all just enjoy a very interesting story? I am!!! You rock Dru Druthers.