All Comments on 'Amber from Marketing, Free Gravy'
by WaxPhilosophic
- 18 Comments
...busty, bubbly blondes with begging bowls---love 'em or hate 'em, there's no middle ground. In this instance it rightly turned into love 'em. I do enjoy these amusing little slices-of-life of yours, Wax. Sandy is right, Amber's too good a character to abandon and I can see potential in more adventures for her and Dani. "More! More!" was the shout from all the fans.
............... even THINK about leaving this as a one off story!!!!!
Everyone should have an "Amber" in their life, even just as a friend.
The "airhead" like quality of Amber is (as it should be) infectious and fun.
A really sweet and slightly unusual START to what hopefully becomes another firm favourite :)
Pretty good, I really like your short but sweet stories, not all stories have to be about jumping into bed and having sex within the first page some of the best stories have no sex at all
This is a sweet story. Amber is definitely a keeper. I hope she appears in more stories.
Where is the "to be continued"? Did you forget to put that on at the end? You can't just leave it there Wax, we need to hear more about these two. Did bubbly Amber from marketing get tall dark and handsome Daniii to help with the next food drive? Inquiring minds want to know.
I would like to add my two pennith to the chorus of more please.
Brilliant short story, I really like Danni and Amber, they would make a cute couple
Amber's enthusiasm made smile
Thank you Wax a stonking tale of blossoming romance
Jc
🍾Bubbly Amber
😋 Mmm I like gravy
🐈Who can resist those kittens
🎥Roll camera, action
🌈Pride prom
Just a beautiful short and sweet story, with an "awesomely delicious Amber" as the sweetener. The Free Gravy definitely "tastes like more!!!
I probably never laughed about a Literotica text like here. Sweet, nice, witty.
But I think it stands for itself - it is good and doesn't need a continuation. But then ... it also could become a series about not too expensive meals ...
What a great short story! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Oh Wax! (Can I call you Wax?) Charming, witty and sharp as always. But with this fab little sketch it's the dialogue that stands out: great writing!
DL. I too loved it Dani is the 'straight man' in this duo. Pardon the choice of words. I had to read all the comments to see if I had left one the first time I read it last year. 5* for sure and the Sade' joke was not lost on me. Clever girl ;)
Awesome as always!
Very nice story! What I like are Dani's snide remarks about Ambers overdose of enthusiasm and charitableness at first and how she gradually comes around.
K -I voted what happened? IT glitch! I f my prev. comment shows up - good. But I said yes - Amber is definitely a keeper. Lets see what happens: -
You Make Lovin' Fun. Maybe the lyrics don't fit (jury's out) but it's the thought that counts. the repartee is great.