All Comments on 'Having Jasmine Pt. 03'
by GirlieUltra
- 12 Comments
just another slut story with a cuck husband who would want a wife like that poor
And you think that the way you developed the story is a good one? For me it clearly shows that here a wife became a whore and a husband an idiotic cuckold! Idiotic because he doesn't remove the bastard of the whore and her lover! Or the husband is no longer interested in the whore and only sees her as a commodity! The best ending in my eyes would have been if she had contracted HIV and suffered a slow and agonizing death. I call that compensatory justice! How an author can make unprotected sex a topic in our times is inexplicable to me. But it's your imagination!
Sure brings out strong feelings from readers, stories like this. And yet they keep reading them ....
This is going to be difficult to beat out for worst LW story series of the year. It has all the essential LW cliches with the whore, the cuck, the asshole bad, the biracial bastard child, for starters. You’ve reached the bottom of the barrel, so where do you go next?
The scores started good, then went straight into the shithole. Learn from it.
my God,!!!
I hope this is all literary imagination.
The human being has developed for thousands of years compared to its initial state to reach this point ??
Poor child, he will grow up in a great psychology and family environment, and foreshadows the future development of our species.
In the end, we will be the most intelligent dominant species ever seen on earth and the one with the shortest reign.
I can believe this story and would set the same situation up. Filipina women make great natural sluts. I would do the same thing to her and would love seeing a black guy force her down on her knees to suck his huge dick before stretching and ruining her pussy. Love hearing how good he fucked her, breaking her down turning her into a hot sexy blackcock whore. Just wish he would have shown her off to his friends letting them know she was married to a white guy but hooked on BBC. Having her suck as other black men watch and humiliate her talking about what a good married slut she is.
1* - wrong category - would have been better if Josh made her put it up for adoption and Adrian wouldn't know who had the baby and have the tattoo erased. Have Adrian beat to an inch of his life.
The child to the other guy ruined the story. The suspension of belief that they can stay together after that is too much now. Scrap chapter 3 for a rewrite perhaps... ?
Wow what a fucked up pathetic story. If this is your lifestyle you need serious help. If you fuck up someone you love like this what would you do to someone you hate?