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Click hereLucy stood on the bed, her feet planted either side of Amy's waist and she slowly lowered herself to a comfortable kneeling position where the cock could be standing proud, but not inside her. Slowly and carefully, she grabbed it and lined it up with her dripping opening before lowering herself further, the head of Amy's cock piercing her tight cunt.
Both of them moaned loudly, as if it was a competition to out-moan the other, but in reality, Amy was moaning at her friend's tight pussy and Lucy from being filled so much (even with only two inches of it inside her).
When she'd gotten used to the girth of Amy's cock, Lucy pushed down more, until it hit her cervix. As she did, she came from being penetrated so deeply with such a thick cock. She didn't stop there; she pushed even further and harder, and the head of Amy's cock pierced Lucy's tight cervix, penetrating her deeper than she'd ever been penetrated before. Lucy screamed with a mix of extreme pleasure and pain, while Amy moaned at such a tight grip on her cock.
Lucy started to move her hips slowly fucking her best friend and both moaned in tandem, a symphony of pleasure and pain that seemed to go perfectly with such an intimate act, and having nothing to so with the size of the cock or depth of penetration.
Amy couldn't help herself, she rolled over, putting Lucy underneath her with her legs up and she held them where they were as she started to fuck her friend hard and fast. Lucy started swearing incoherently as she was pounded deeply and hard by Amy's horse-cock, and Amy's balls slapped hard against her ass.
Both of them screamed as their orgasms peaked, Lucy squirting cum around Amy's cock, and Amy emptying her big balls directly into Lucy's womb. The amount of cum Amy expelled was so large that it squirted out of Lucy and onto the bed covers.
As they both came down from their first orgasms, they hugged and kissed, all inhibitions on the lesbian act gone before drifting off quickly into the post-orgasmic bliss of deep, contented sleep.
- COMMENTS
Cum on authors! Some youngsters (& older) actually believe what they read here because it’s repeated over and over. The cervix is just the lowest part of the womb. During birth it takes sometimes hours & pain to dilate the cervix to 5 cm. No man can penetrate the cervix unless it’s malformed. Once when fingering my wife I tried to penetrate with just one finger. She yelled at me that it hurt! Don’t try this at home boys & girls.
Bill S.
Wish I was Amys girlfriend. Or even her boyfriend if I could suck her cock and her fuck me like b that.
Amy I was going to tell how to handle hard and uncomfortable, like us you found out what to do. Now about the mess
Really wished you put more effort into describing the appearances of the characters and the areas surrounding them. Mostly the characters
When i saw the title i imagined her being bitten by a radioactive horse...
Suspension of disbelief is a challenge, in the best of situations; when you get too carried away with certain aspects, it becomes impossible to engender in your readers, and without it, success suffers.
You have a high percentage of positive comments, but with some slight changes, you would still have them, and convert the negatives, as well.
The guy raving about inaccurate scientific procedures? A lost cause. The "Horse Cock? Horse shit...", as well.
But, make the ridiculous effing size plausible, which also dumps the cervical penetration absurdity, as well, and you convert a number of negatives to positives, or neutrals. (Also, remember, only a small fraction of readers comment, and they can't be taken as a accurate sample. People positive about the story will comment in higher numbers, while people who bail out, mid story, or think it's shite, you'll never hear from.
The cervical penetration is a real dead end, for me. Not only would it be physically impossible, (a cock of ANY kind cannot get hard enough to penetrate a cervix. End of story. We're talking a 1/8 - 1/4" opening, of an undilated cervix, whether chemically or naturally occurring, (naturally = pre-child birth).
But the physical impossibility is not the breaking point, it is the extremely excrutiating pain an attempt at cervical penetration would cause. To dismiss it, or breeze over it, is shallow and callous; and is only ever done by ignorant male writers.
Any sexually mature woman is going to KNOW how sensitive the cervix is, either from sexual experience, or from going to the effing gynecologist.
If a man is going to write about such things, they should have enough respect for women to do five gawd damn minutes of research on the Internet. Perpetuating the fallacy of cervical penetration, or dismissing it as merely painful is another atep away from where we should be going, as a society, and towards continued male insensitivity.
In other words,
"Git yur head outcha ass." Anonymous.
GeoD
"Horse-cock Girl Ch.01:" - Wild!!, Weird!! Wonderment?? Wow! Thank God that the human brain has the ability to imagine--and even visualize--events such as a horse-cock of momentous proportions on an adolescent teenage girl. As with many other reader's comments, one of my first thoughts is, what happened to the pussy of Amy? Otherwise we envious porn sex-gluttons would be spending more of our time masturbating, wishing someone would write such as our story's female-cock of epic size as we have just had the pleasure to read.
Though awed by concepts of a "horse-cock" on a young, virgin female is awesome to imagine, I still would like some degree of rationality and normalcy to the theme, character(s), and covert message.....as much as is possible. I imagine Amy's fuck-buddy Lucy is extremely bow-legged the next day! I'm curious as to the makeup of Amy, and Lucy's, off-spring that evidently should occur!
My message to "joshy029" is to keep writing; you'll find fertile field's of warped minds such as mine, in the audience reading with us, eager to read, soaking up future "dream-world" human possibilities," but yet many eons in the future.
Now i am a trans female i never have been with a trans female but would love to meet one for fun.I met one at the adult theater one night.We talked and went in to a large booth wear we kissed and felt each other up.I soon had her dress off and mine as well.She had a monster cock i have never seen one that big before.Soon i found my self down on my knees red lips wide open swallowing as much of that lovely cock in my mouth.Her cock grew bigger as i sucked it deeper down my throat.I felt her hands on my head fourcing her cock deeper down my throat until her balls rested on my chine.I felt her cock stiffen and it started to fill me with her cum.Soon after she fucked me filling my ass with more cum.
It's strange how Amy never think's about her own pussy, I don't know if she still has it or not. Did she never question her existence as a woman, having a family or kids?
The story is good, sexy some word are repeated to often but it is still a nice story, but what me confuses is Amy is upset only about the horse cock and not about her missing womanhood.
I thought the story was on the wild side. It started good then it got a little far out. To the comments about realism, think hentai. Sure a young woman can't get 18 thick inches inside her, but I bet many try. Just the feeling of being impaled is enough to send orgasms throughout the body. Even though the topic got a bit wild, I was extremely excited reading it to the end. Very good detail and the fantasy part at the end, was very erotic. Picturing a young woman with a horse cock and balls was hot. Then her masturbating and spitting big loads on the mirror followed by her girlfriend sucking the fucking it brought me over the top. Very wild but well executed. It might have added to the story if you would have described the girlfriend enjoyment and enthusiasm of having sex with a horse cock a bit more. But if the idea was to keep the reader interested and reading more while keeping a hand free for …, you successfully did your job. Please write more.
Seriously man, it's an erotic fanfic, who fucking cares about whether the science is plausible in real life or not?
I'm really, really sorry but the two other comments with quibbles are just the tip of the iceberg. Honestly, did you even do a modicum of research into how genetic recombinant re-writing might ever be possible? First off, no lab would have not have researched what their method of transmission would be. Cloning does not include the type of infection platforms necessary to rewrite existing DNA. Cloning is accomplished with stem cells carefully nurtured from a host organism, then implanted in a recipient womb. Dolly the sheep was not "grown in a lab", she was grown in a uterus similar to invitro fertilization.
In order to change an existing DNA strand, the lab in question would have to develop an auto-immune virus to carry the genetic material into the body, where it would insert itself into cells and begin its damage to the genetic structure. The likely result would be similar to cancer, only with an effect other than death. The process would take weeks, if not months to accomplish. Doing so overnight would take so much of the body's available anabolic potential that the person afflicted would probably suffer severe catabolic reactions in other locations (muscle gets broken down into fuel to be used for the "growth" project). More to the point, the lab would have carefully crafted the method of transmission because accidents like the one Amy suffered could release a global pandemic if biologic research facilities were as lazy as this one seems to be.
Anyway, my suggestion would be to avoid any more forays into "science" during the story because it's obvious you have no clue what lab procedures or gene research entail.