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Click hereI whispered into her ear, "Tori, get on your hands and knees."
Mom said, "No Cody we can't fuck. It's not right. Nothing we've done so far has been right but please Cody. Lets not make things worse."
Since she was not moving I picked her off me and flipped her onto her knees. Kneeling behind me I said, "Tori put my cock in."
She groaned, "Please don't!!". But I knew that her protestations rang hollow. I knew she wanted my cock buried deep inside her pussy.
"Do as you're told!"I commanded. Protesting again but to no avail, Tori reached down and grabbed my thick cock guiding it to her moist pussy.
I felt the tickle of her pussy hair on the head of my cock as I pushed forward into the creamy folds of her swollen pussy. As my cock penetrated Tori's fiery pussy she cried, "God No! No! Please don't!"
I grabbed her waist and started to thrust up into her. Her pussy expanded almost to its limit as my thick slab pushed deeper inside. She moaned softly, "Please Cody stop. We can't do this. It's not right."
I let Tori feel the entirety of my cock buried deep into her pussy. I reached down with both hands and squeezed her breasts as I growled, "Feel my cock Tori. Does Tori like her son's cock? Do you Tori?"
I didn't wait for a response instead I started pounding her pussy with my cock. My hands grabbed her hips as I thrust faster and faster into her pussy. Mom's head dropped to the mattress as she started to savor the fullness of my cock. All her protestations were gone as her taboo desires had taken over.
I reached down and rubbed her clit swirling my tongue in her ear and whispered, "Is Tori my slut? Cum for me Tori. Cum on your big boy's cock."
"Oh. Oh. Oh. It's so deep in me." I grabbed her hair and pulled her head back off the couch and started to fuck her really fast and hard. Tori moaned, "Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh shit yes. Feels so good baby. Fuck your mommy."
Mom's body lurched forward as she exploded in waves of pure pleasure. "Oh. Fuck. Oh yes baby. Mommy is cumming. Oh shit shit shit. I love your cock. Feels so good don't stop."
Mom let out long wail as her body rocked back and forth her legs spasmed uncontrollably and her mouth opened wide. She moaned, "Fuck me harder baby." while bucking wildly on my cock her body convulsing in the throes of her orgasm.
As she was calming down I gripped her ass and started to piston my cock in an out of her pussy with an unmatched ferocity. Exhausted she once again dropped her head onto the bed but I could tell her body was once again responding to the hard fucking I was giving her.
TORI
I can't believe I just fucked my son in his own bed. My god what the hell am I doing. This is so wrong yet my body was betraying me as I was already starting to feel more wisps of the forbidden pleasures. I reached underneath and slowly teased my clit as I savored the fullness I was feeling inside of me.
He was fucking me hard and fast as my quivering body tried to move in unison with his cock. The wisps of another orgasm began to swell deep inside me as my openly spread pussy began to accustom itself to his hard cock that was so deeply embedded in me.
His fingers embedded on the soft flesh of my ass and he began to establish a slow rhythmic in and out tempo that was much different from the pounding he had been giving me. He pulled his cock completely out and in the same smooth movement as before he slowly shoved his cock back in. He teased me like this for several thrusts driving me wild with desire as my body continued to respond. I moaned, "Oh yes Cody. Yes do me, yes yes oh it feels so good baby."
I dropped my chest onto the bed so that I could caress his balls with my other hand. His balls felt so tight and ready to explode. Moaning in delight I shouted, "Fuck your mommy Cody. Fuck mommy. Mommy wants your cum baby. Give it to me."
I continued to moan and squirm in passion screaming, "Yes, Yes, fuck me harder, fuck me harder! Fuck me, Fuck Me!!! I want it! I want it so much! Keep Fucking Me!! Harder! Just a little more and I'll cum again. Fuck me Cody. I want you to give me your cock, Oh god I love your cock."
Cody groaned, "I'm getting close Tori. Do you want me to cum in your pussy?" I felt his cock swell inside me. Oh my fucking god. His cock is getting bigger. Oh shit.
I frantically rubbed my clit wanting to hurry my orgasm. I groaned, "Oh baby cum inside mommy. Mommy is going to cum on your big fat cock. Cum for mommy baby. Cum for me."
Cody groaned, "Here it comes Tori. I'm cumming so good. Your such a hot little slut. So fucking good!"
Cody slammed into me and shot blast after blast of his hot cum inside my pussy. As soon as I felt his hot cum inside me I immediately started to cum on his cock. "Oh yes baby. Mommy is cumming. Oh yes I can feel your hot cum inside me. Oh yes baby."
My body convulsed and spasmed as my orgasm ripped through me. I lost all control as I lewdly splayed flat on the bed unable to control anything. Moments later my orgasm subsided and I found myself collapsed on his bed exhausted and satisfied from the number of orgasms that tore through me tonight,
CODY
I kept fucking Tori like the hot little slut she was as she convulsed under me from another orgasm. Her hot body beneath me was twisting and writhing in reckless abandon. Animalistic moans emanating from deep down her throat. She was mine now. Her pussy would crave and want my cock.
Once she finished cumming I pulled out of her and moved up next to her. Slowly caressing her back and butt she turned towards me and said, "That was amazing baby. I love you." I pulled her into my arms and kissed her lips softly and lovingly, my tongue teasing her as we savored what we just shared. I said, "Tori, you will never again feel lonely, unloved, or unattractive. I will always be here to satisfy you Tori. I love you too."
Our kiss escalated with a passion and lust for each other's touch. My hands continued to caress the softness of her butt as she pressed into me moaning over and over. I held her close to me until we both fell asleep content in our taboo decadence.
- COMMENTS
While cageysea might have a point about the need for editing and proofreading, his phrasing could perhaps use a bit more tact. Calling the writing dog shit isn't very constructive criticism.
Texasmaddog, while not an author here, is a prolific reader and commenter (1157 comments as of this date!), and overall I have agreed with most of his story ratings and criticisms. And, his criticisms here are valid.
As another (anonymous) commenter pointed out, why should the writing and editing matter if the storyline is good? Well, if you're going to do a job, why not do it well? If you're going to publish stories on a public website, especially one that has 10s (100s?) of thousands of competing stories vying for readers' attentions, why not take some pride in your work? There are free editors available on this site, which is prominently mentioned when you submit a story for publication, and most decent editors have built-in spell check, so there is no excuse for blatant misspellings. Grammar is a bit tougher, as the available programs aren't infallible. But anyone who has at least a high school education should be able to maintain the same tense throughout a story, which Tmony1 fails to do. Also, sentence fragments are such a basic error that it's inexcusable in a story if you've made any attempt at proofreading. Homonyms and poor word choice are more acceptable, as most programs won't catch them, but that's why we have dictionaries! And, there are plenty of free ones available online.
Ironically, the writing practice that I thought Tmony1 used very effectively was the alternating perspectives, which some commenters complained about. I guess some readers just have very short attention spans.
Finally, to those commenters who downvote a story because it has themes they don't like, or goes in a direction they wouldn't have chosen: if you don't like the theme, why are you even reading stories in that category? And, if you don't like the direction the story takes, write your own story, instead of whining about it in the comments! How selfish do you have to be to downvote a free story because you don't like the ending? No one's forcing you to read them (hmm...that would make an interesting humor/satire take on the nonconsent/reluctance theme!).
That brings me to a point I've brought up before in other story comments: I think we need to revamp the story categories and story rosa-blanca.ru into one streamlined system. A huge problem occurs when a story falls under multiple categories; which category should be prioritized varies between stories, authors & readers, and there's no consistent way to subcategories. Also "trigger" warnings could be implemented in the story rosa-blanca.ru, or brought up Ina preface to a story, but not every author or reader is going to see the same things as potentially triggering. (For example, not everyone likes anal, or impregnation, or drug use, or cuckolding, which are some of the most common themes I've seen complaints about in the comments.)
I propose a new category/tag system that uses something like hashtags. Then, every category that fits can be labeled, and any themes that are potentially triggering can be listed as well. So, the next time someone wants to write a BDSM lesbian incest story with non-consent, anal & drug use, every reader will know what they're getting into, without the author having to provide potential spoilers to those who, for example, don't care if there is anal or drug use in their story. And, if those themes are exactly what a reader is looking for, they can more easily find the story. Also, cuckold and BTB stories could be separated out from "true" loving wives stories, since that's probably the most complicated, and complained-about, category. And, the hardcore rape stories could be separated from the rape fantasy/roleplay and reluctance stories, as that's another very thorny category. And, if a story series varies in theme from one story to another, that will be more visible, if a reader cares to actually check the rosa-blanca.ru.
Anyway, lots of food for thought here. This story had a good premise and an interesting presentation, but lacked polish, and suffered from a lack of or poor editing. It'll be interesting to see where the story goes from here.
Cageysea9725 has a real point about the craft of writing, usage, etc.
But, you have more than enough imagination to generate a really good, involving, erotic story, with at least decent characters.
Keep doing that, but also work on the craft of writing, get an editor, etc.
Enjoyed it!
Great storie it kept me going & wanting more the whole storie so exciting & such a turn on can’t wait for more
Ooooh I’m so wet , can’t wait for my 19 old hung son to get off work , he still love to suck my 36DDD’s , when he crawls into bed with me that’s the first thing he does , we’ve started fucking kind if by accident he was sucking my tits one night , I look over and saw his big 9 inch rock hard black cock , I couldn’t resist I had to have it my mouth and pussy , we fuck all the time , he loves calling me dirty nasty names while he’s fucking me I love it , last night he and his buddy both fucked me I was a cum dump , I love it !!
Ooooo....such a "great/hot" story...not really. The author is living up to his self-proclaimed disinterest in what his readers think (from his biography page...go take a gander at his comments).
Run-on commentary/dialogue, grammar issues that are easily edited with a bit of proof-reading!! And, they are in Cody's bedroom, on the bed, and 'mysteriously' end up on a couch??!! Attention to detail, yo!!
Story premise really is hot, I will give author that; BUT...just, BUT...
Three**3**Stars here...hoping next chapters will be better!! (Yes, IAM going to read them...comment??? We will see.)
Also, notice I am not "anonymous"...
Wasn't a fan of her slutting it up in the club with some guy who was quite obviously feeding her lines from the Bullshit Lines to Say to Girls Playbook (honestly if women are dumb enough to fall for this shit they deserve to get taken advantage of and fucked by these assholes). I mean I can understand it to an extent with her husband not showing her any attention, but still, it was a bit much. At least Bryan got cockblocked, so there's some justice. Let's see where this goes. I'm fine with her being a slut as long as she's a slut for only her son - no sharing! I hope she get preggers at some point. Gotta claim your slut by breeding her after all. It's like a rule or something.
Great Story. I love the fact that she was, first, making out with his friend. I would love the friend to fuck Tori.
Excellent, hot and well written. What more can we want? Five stars, more if they were available.
One of the hottest stories I've read! I will try to pace myself, however, really looking forward to reading all the chapters.
This was a beautiful story. Truly the role that mothers should have for their sons. Any wait to read more.
Many thanks, TMONY1for a well written and thoroughly enjoyable story. IMHO, the way you have alternated POVs works very well. This is a fantasy, and, as such, the shots “slabs” of dialogue from both Tori and Cody are very effective, allowing your reader to better get inside the minds of your characters. Well done, and thank you. Well worth all of five stars, more if they were available.
IGood story, but i guess that saying fuck 50 or 75 times makes it better. It doesn't.
Two perspectives is one thing - but you do it way too quickly often. This could have been a 5 - gave it a 4. Choose a character, play it all out, and then the other character's perspective. Quite frankly, the other character's perspective could easily be a stand-alone.
I liked it very much. Well written! I liked the different perspectives of what was going on.
Ignore cageysea comments. Anybody who reads these stories for correct English is a moron. Keep writing. I love your stories. Ignore the haters who get off on criticism. They are the ones that need to get a new hobby
Good story. I enjoy incestuous love stories when the two mature lover recognize and accept the fact they can satisfy each other's unmet needs and wants. The husbad/father deserves the respect he has earned, if any. The chemistry and sensual sensitivity between mother and son is not forced nor contrived. The love the mother and son express to/for each other is not forced, expected nor contrived. It flows naturally between the two. Would like to see this story continued.
You have a knack for using the wrong verb tenses, failing to muster up an actual sentence, and putting just plain boring shit everywhere to fill out a story. All of that ruins it, and makes it boring as dog shit.
Learn English or find a new hobby -- one that you can actually do.
Lost me at her being married, right in the first paragraph. A skank wife, and a son that has zero respect for his father? Adios.
wow that was a fantastic sexy story i live in sw florida also and id love to get to know you in every way beautiufl sexy lady Im Bob in Rotonda west thank you Toti dear
Good hot story. Need another chapter or two while her son explores her submissive side.
He cant always satisfy and protect her, unless he takes her back to school with him. If he does, then his buddies will find out who she really is!
Nice start, now hopefully you will write more of Tori's adventures as a HOT MILF.
Not just with her son but with other 18+ hopefuls, particularly when Cody returns to University.
A great story! I hope you will continue with the story of Cody and Tori! We need to what happens next! Please continue!