All Comments on 'Hypnosis Everafter Ch. 02'
by Jom8999
- 3 Comments
You made the dude super inteligent yet only now does he realise that "get more submissive to the person you're most ATTRACTED TO" suggestion was stupid? Like, the moment I read it in the previous chapter, I knew it would go this way. Why would he just assume his friends are most attracted to their partners/other friends? One more thing:
He asked her, "Was she still obedient to all suggestions?" - this is wrong
He asked her, "Are you still obedient to all suggestions?" - this is correct
He asked her if she was still obedient to all suggestions. - this is correct
me reely like how Kim is growing naturally in her sexual evolving. Maryjane needs to be slowly eberyones little toy. me like what you have done so far.
I'm enjoying your stories, thank you!
I think about how Dave conditioned Tim and Bob to climax when they see each other without a shirt. Funny. But they (Tim and Bob) would have been unable to stop climaxing for the time they were in the pool together, right? With that in mind, I "read" your story to say that Tim and Bob would climax when they saw the other take of his shirt. That made sense to me. Just a thought.