All Comments on 'Jack and Toby Ch. 06'

I picked this up on the last chapter. The story is about an abusive relationship and how to get out of it? Because I hate to see such a decent guy waste his life away. Will he at least leave Jack for good at some point?

I wish the author would end this Shit story! Wrap it up already. Let Tobias realize that he needs professional help to get free from this sick relationship. Jack is the Scum of the earth, let him find someone else to use! Like anybody else would ever put up with his cheating and his selfishness!!! I want Toby to find a guy that will sweep him off his feet, so he can tell Jack to go Fuck himself! After each chapter I read I promise myself its the last time. What a complete waste of time reading this Garbage!

I'm with the first respond-er... Let him go man. You know he's cheating on you now he has a crappy attitude. Let him go!

I have 2 chapters left, One will be coming out in the next few days and the last, the wrap up will be in a week or so. This story again was a story that never should have been (but was asked for, Jake "The Doc's" prequel will NEVER be written). I hope everyone enjoys Chapter 7.

I am going silent once more. Thank you for reading. kmillerk1

I am looking forward for Toby to tell Jack to fuck off....he is a selfish little dickl

If readers asked for a history of Toby before Jake (I haven’t read that one yet since it wanted to read them chronologically), that doesn’t mean the backstory has to be an absolute shit show! And one of abuse that went on for over 10 years. No one would have asked for this story as it was written - it is absolutely horrible. Jack is a hateful asshole and Toby’s willingness to put up with his constant infidelity and disrespect makes Toby seem weak and totally unlikeable. End this story before Toby himself is unredeemable.