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Click hereWith her arms already bound, it was easy to tie Sarah up into a neat package. Dominique re-strapped her legs at the ankles and knees and added some cord to tie the toes of the boots together. Before continuing, she took revenge for Sarah biting her pussy by roughly pulling off the nipple clamps, loving the way Sarah writhed and moaned as the blood rushed back to the tortured buds, causing more pain than when they were originally clipped in place. When she was sure that the pain had subsided she unbuckled the studded straps on the punished breasts and pulled them free eliciting a similar response. Satisfied, Dominique decided to leave the vibrator and butt plug in place. There was no point in spoiling the slut after all, and using a short strap, affixed Sarah's collar to her knees. Another strap ran from her wrists to her ankles, and so, Sarah was secured into a neat ball of trussed up feminine flesh.
As a finishing touch, Dominique pushed her discarded panties into the unresisting mouth and wrapped three turns of two-inch wide adhesive tape around Sarah's head to completely gag her. She was grinning in triumph into Sarah's face as she held out her hand to Megan. "Pass me the sedative will you?" she asked her partner.
Megan looked at the hypodermic needle in her hand; she crouched down beside Dominique as she knelt before Sarah's bound form. Dominique's attention was focused on her slave as Sarah stared wide-eyed with fear at the needle.
ooOoo
Asif drove his white van through the commercial district. It was early evening and there were very few people about as he pulled into the only open unit and stopped the engine. The shutters rolled down behind him as he climbed from the vehicle. Two men, both wearing jeans and black T-shirts, met him, while another man in a suit watched from the back of the small warehouse. Opening the rear doors of the van, Asif climbed inside and pulled a large brown leather packing case from the back of the van. With the help of the two bruisers, they carried the case to a point before the suited man. He nodded slowly and rested his hand on the case. Asif climbed back into the van and reversed from the building. Not one word had been spoken but Asif didn't mind: he was paid a nice sum of cash each time he delivered one of the cases. He didn't know what was inside, and he didn't want to know. He had no doubt the whole thing was illegal, but ignorance was bliss, or so they said.
ooOoo
At the same time that Asif was leaving the warehouse, Megan was pulling into her drive. She stopped her car and studied the cottage. 'Not many girls of twenty owned their own house and a brand new 4 x4,' she thought. She pushed down on the accelerator and crept into the open garage. Inside the house she called out, "Cassie, Cassie are you here?" A rumble of footsteps sounded from above and a slim woman with flowing blond hair came bounding down the stairs, her cotton summer dress floating behind her. She threw herself at Megan, wrapping herself around the redhead, and pressing her lips to Megan's mouth. They kissed passionately for half a minute, and then the blond spoke breathlessly, "You're late."
"I know, I'm sorry, but I've brought us a present."
"Ooh, I like presents," Cassie purred.
Megan took her lover's hand and led her into the garage. They stood behind the car and Megan lifted the tailgate, and then reached inside and pulled free the blanket covering her surprise. She smiled in pleasure at the rapt expression on Cassie's face. Reaching down, she cupped Sarah's breast, thumbing the nipple. She loved the way it grew erect regardless of the situation its owner was in. She wondered briefly where that bitch, Dominique was right now. Her dislike of the woman had grown to hatred in the past few months, and now she was finally rid of her. Where would she end up and what would she think when she woke up to find she was about to be sold to the highest bidder? She smiled again; delighted that she would no longer have to work with her and what became of her was no longer her concern. Pushing the thought from her mind, she looked into the big blue eyes and the bemused expression on Sarah's face. She leant into her partner and kissed her cheek fondly. "The three of us are going to have so much fun!"
- COMMENTS
So absolutely decadent and desirable! Great ending I am soaking wet and fucking myself silly while twisting my nipples! WELL DONE❤️❤️❤️
I really enjoyed the story but the Dominique section was a bit too much, given Sarah seemed very inexperienced. The plug would have done serious damage based on the description. However I enjoyed the foreshadowing of the betrayal and would live to read a follow up chapter, specifically due to the introduction of Cassie. A solid 4 for me, wish I could do 4.5.
This was one of the best written story's I have read in a long time thank you! I loved the twist at the end!
More please ! Much more!!
This should not be in the BDSM category. It is purely in Non-Consensual territory. And as those elements mostly appear near the middle of the story, it was a very negative surprise to find out at that point. Had it been properly categorized, I’d have skipped it and you’d have avoided the negative.
Glad Dominique got her just reward... please continue with Sarah... I think Sarah has found her paradise with her two mistresses... I love Sarah! More about Sarah!
V.S. It appears you've read and commented on a few of my stories recently and almost all of your critiques have been favourable and appreciated. But as you are commenting under 'Anonymous ' I'm unable to express my gratitude personally. Therefore I'm leaving this message on the chance that you might see it.
I'd like to thank you, and of course everyone else who takes the time and effort to comment, whether positively or not. I, like many others write for pleasure, hoping merely to entertain and my pleasure is surely multiplied when somebody makes the effort to let me know I've succeeded in some small way. I also want to say that, much as I enjoy praise, constructive criticism and the odd suggestion are very much taken on board.
So thank you V.S. and all those who comment, we writers really wouldn't know if we're doing things right or wrong without you.
Great! The story has a beginning, a delicious middle and an ending (with a tantalising twist). If only more authors wrote so well,
V.S.
The story is well written and wonderfully told. Where Sarah is curious, then fascinated, then enraptured with her bondage, and when her submissive self identifies her captors as her mistresses you show an attractuve range of the BDSM experience. I love hearing the thoughts & feelings of characters, and you've given that generously. Hearing Dominique's wild pleasure made her sadism more bearable for me. Hearing Sarah converting her agony into her ecstasy was simply splendid.
One correction: this story clearly belongs in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. This was no seduction-abduction, but non-con torture - of a nascent pain slut, it seems - still non-con.
I see excellent potential for a sequel. Of course, it could go N-C/R or BDSM or along the jagged edge of the pre-Dominique section of this lovely story.
Oh, I really appreciated the twist at the end which landed Dominique on the ride of her own device, and I resonated with Megan's satisfaction to be rid of her. Verrrry nice touch, indeed.
well written , interesting concept , well driven plot ,
engaging & entertaining storyline.
very naughty , lots of unexpected surprises
so many topics covered within the story , it's impossible really to categorise it.
personaly bdsm seems to have the nearest fit .placing it in non-con. or Les. or erotic horror or anywhere else would spoil the unexpected twists & turns of the tale.
agree with some other commentators some aspects of the situation are really shocking , but hey , its fiction right ?
xxxhugsxxx
5 stars , after all the intensity of the story is what causes the readers extreme reactions , and really the real nasty stuff is only ever implied , not described , so the readers reaction is really testament to the quality of the Authors writing
I hate to be negative, as the early parts of this story are *super fucking hot* but I have to agree with all the earlier comments about this needing a tag change.
At risk of being an ass, I find it kind of like an ambush. I mean, I'm totally into bondage and all that sort of stuff, but slavery is really squickish for me. The fact that the story has both the consensual and non-consensual in the same story seems kind of deceptive.
As much as I hate to say it, sorry guy, but it's sort of a boner killer. I mean, I'd give an arm and a leg for a consentual Sarah/Megan BDSM story (And that's where I thought it was going) kind of lost the excitement when Dominique came in.
Not to be harsh. It was very well written. Very hot. Would do well under Non-Con. Just sort of disappointing with where it went.
Would have been fine in noncon. I hope you have learned more about BDSM since writing this. And reading stories here doesn't count, dude. You have a dark, seathing mind. I came over from another of your stories and now see the strong noncon thread in your work. Sometimes noncon works for me, sometimes squicks me and sometimes enrages me. I would have loved if the story went from Sarah trussed up to a suduction into being the girls' sub. This was squicky and pissed me off. At least the head bitch in charge got hers. Points for that. Keep writing and watch the category. Also, consider author notes at the start regarding fetish elements in your story. They are much appreciated.
It got a little harsh, but the early parts before Dominique showed up were fun and sexy. It cries out for a sequel, the idea of Sarah a sub/slave of Megan has a lot of possibilities.
Despite needing a tag change, everything else was amazing. Please write a sequel!
REALLY needs a tag change. I totally wasn't expecting this. Skipped to the end to see if happiness or pleasure entered - doesn't seem to have. The slave was "bemused" at the end? I would have thought any number of other adjectives would be more likely and appropriate!
Really love it, though I dont' like non-consentual, but in this case Sarah seems Ok with it...the FF/f aspect is really hot! Well written.
I agree with the comments about needing a tag change, but this story is definately one of the best I have read here lately..
Thank you for writing it
Great story!!!! Very well written. I hope Sarah with an H finds happiness and true submission (not forced) with Megan and cassie.
Very well written, but this is absolutely a NonConsent story. The hardware and techniques alone don't make a BDSM relationship. Other than that, it's really excellent. Plot, dialogue, descriptions, all first class.
thanks for the great comments, point taken and I will attempt to change the tag.
Good story, Well Written, but should have been posted under NonConsent/Reluctance, as it may have been a nasty surprise for someone who likes stories of consensual BDSNM, but doesn't like stories of abduction and forced slavery. I like it when the villain get what she deserves and "Dominique" certainly deserved what she got!. Now what happens to Sarah?
This story has the potential to be an all-out winner - I loved it. Please write more and post for us - soon, if you possibly can!
Excellent story my friend! I might throw a few ideas around with you, but it's you who crafts the stories so well. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful tales and throwing around more ideas.