by SyPhigh
Great story. 5 stars . written really well and easy flo to read. I would like to hear more of this new piece for Stella that Mary caught for her, and maybe more ladies from the retirement lunch.
This was great. Write more about them but slow it down and tell us more of the story and their play.
Just a note to thank you for taking the time to comment. They are a form of encouragement from which I take a desire to write better and create still more stories. In its way, this story is an homage to Diedre - a .alt repository writer from back in the eighties and nineties. Acknowledged master of the four page story. Their works are still out there if you look. Appreciate your support.