- Incest/Taboo
- Martha, Dylan and Me
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All Comments on 'Martha, Dylan and Me'
by helenjensen2
- 6 Comments
Excellent beginning, please continue this story line. There are so many possibilities, mother-son, three-way and her continuing introduction to different sexual practices. Keep going!
Chapter 2 please. This story begs to be told and you tell it well. Helen needs to be fucked soon. We're all waiting.
Great idea for a story. Alas the quality of the writing was a disappointment. There were so many spelling and grammatical errors that it took from the erotic content of your work. I just never got into your narrative or found it persuasive in any way. Next time, get a more literate friend to take a look at your text before submitting it.
Little typos be damned, I think this has a great deal of potential and can't wait to see another chapter...or a whole lot of chapters. On to the next, Helen!
The slow buildup and introduction to properly engaging in eating pussy is beautiful and making you look forward to it makes it so much better. Thanks for your introduction to the rest of her life and further sexual education.