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mature_neophytemature_neophyteover 5 years ago
Brilliant as always

Today is not a good day for me, not many are lately, but this chapter had me in tears for many reasons. The writing was so inciteful, Alvin's words to Danni's father amazing in it's power, compassion and humanity. So well done, I love these characters. This is the first chapter for a while that feels unfinished however and I hope you'll return where you left off and fill in the blanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Apart from the first half dozen words about his or her bad times at this time mature-neophyte has summed up everything I could want to say. Thankyou for writing such a wonderful and moving story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

When I see a new chapter posted, I'm torn between wanting to read it right away or save the treat of reading it. I only lasted a day. I love your stories and they keep getting better with each one. Thank you.

GoldustwingGoldustwing8 months ago

A very moving chapter. I was so glad that Danni was able to reconcile with her family. Alvin’s honest, candid and open conversation with Bernardo was heartwarming. It was lovely to read that Rachel literary career had taken off. Thanks Mel, such a beautiful story.

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