by 7hells
He needs to fill her pussy with his cum. Maybe he can give her a baby bump
Fun story about a need who got a special reward. Enjoyed it. Good Job! I should get so lucky. Made MY tool stand up!
Seriously, check spelling & double read, so you catch missing words. Or words misused; spell check isn't always correct & will mess your meaning.
It seems everyone here thinks they're a literary critic...don't listen to negative...
....is what I used to think. Then it did, with a reversed age gap. She was 33 and divorced. I was 58 and a widower. We met in my professional capacity. Once my responsibility to her was done, we had hot sex for a year. This story reminded me of how much fun it was to suck her clit. She once climaxed six times in 15 minutes by riding my dick, like Shelley did with Kieran. My 59th birthday present was the best blowjob of my life, administered by my naked goddess on her knees. I'd like Shelley to suck Kieran's cock and swallow his cum in Chapter 2. Please?
Fun story and don't let the negative feedback bother you. I read through it twice and found very little wrong with your story. There seems to be a huge amount of anonymous people just dumping on stories lately. Can't wait to read more!
Hey, this was a fun story, screw the negative Anons. I wonder how many geek squad tales end like this? You may want to fix your spell check, and auto correct to delete SGelly, and some other non words. Five stars, just because I liked it. Hope there's another chapter.
Really well done, but yes...having a beta reader edit it will help with grammar and tense in a couple spots. ;)
Just need to work out what her name was meant to be. Haha
A short light hearted fast moving MILF story. Some typos but I can overlook these. Well done 5*
think she knows what she's doing/needs...young, not dumb, full of cum....tubes tied, or IUD...whatever....
LOVE women that work out/stay in shape...and libido '...to the moon, Alice...!'...
think not too many things hotter than young buck meeting horny milf...he'll never forget her...
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