All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law May I Ch. 01'
by iWriter4U
- 16 Comments
A good base to work with. Can’t wait to read more as the story progresses. Maybe even his mother feeling rejected and hurt because her mother was selected and wanting to be impregnated as well.
An interesting scenario. I hope there's more to come as I enjoyed reading this.
Your one and only story posted on this ID 'has legs' and deserves to continue. Why the long delay?
It looks like this is going to be a multi chapter story. This 1st chapter is not incest however.
Very sadly I found Chapter 2 first, I won't do a spoiler but I had a very different preconcieved idea of the route this chapter had taken.
I've given both chapters 5*, well built story although written in a way the interpretation of the words wandered at times.
My honest opinion of 1st chapter is , it was well written the plot line worked well , you seemed to spend the time researching the theory of this in great detail , and by doing that its made the story more believable , this kind of sex with MIL is as old as the hills and has been written about so many times , it has become boring , but by making the plan using all the decision making a shared conversation , i turns the story from a straight fuck-fest threesome , into a truly personal reason for Son in Law to make love to his MIL , as for the reader who went to great pains to tell you this is NOT incest ignore the knobhead , this is obviously someone who reads peoples work , and instead of congratulations decides to dish out petty statements , they either need to fuck off and stop annoying writers , or to read the story and accept it and move on .
Maybe you will be suprised to know this practice of conceiving children has been happening for years now , its not just a fantasy its real , and how do i know this well it happened in my family quite a few years ago and it never caused any problems you mentioned it was done with love care and total respect for all involved .
i'm now off the read chapter 2 and any others that follow in future .
Thank you for the time you give to us your readers
FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really exciting and very well written!!! 5 stars from here, tough even more are deserved!