All Comments on 'Movie Night Ch. 02'

The story has a great build up, approaching the sex scene and getting everything exciting. However, when it actually reaches that point, it pretty much glosses over it. It's a build up that disappoints because the readers don't get the full pay off. Just a quick mention of the fact that sex happened.

Where's the sex?

Need another chapter about who was doing what and a bit more info on sex that whent on. And did the guys dbl team the girls.

Please continue!