All Comments on 'My Widowed Mom and Me'
by Nayna
- 8 Comments
How many asses do these girls have as you need a proof reader to check your spelling as its ass not asses
This was very hard to read. If this was a translation then it was awful.
It could stand a good proof reader to to correct some errors in grammar and interpretation.
Its not bad because I understand which race have written it so a person on an Indian race might phrase their wording different from others. Most english speaking / reading people thing their language is the only correct language. But is a bad story because of content ... the other young woman was a dyke who prey on young girls for her male lover. Mr. Surya punk ass couldn't get a women for himself so he used a weak minded dyke to do it for him.
Though many seem to have disliked the story, I found this highly erotic and sexciting. Surely, many like me will add it to their favourite stories.