All Comments on 'Off Broadway Public Theater Pt. 01'

Looking forward to more.

great start

The plot is believable, and the interaction between Stacy and Bill is authentic, especially after she becomes aroused with her scenes with Keith. The conflict about the nudity and the requests of the bankers and supporters are appropriate. As the rehearsals continue the dialog between the direct and the actors is very good. The desire between Stacy and Keith and is shown well and leads to the arousal between the first and seconds of the plays. The "ending" is an excellent lead into the next chapter. The story is well written and should gain a high rating from The concluding questions are super.

cannot wait for chapter 2

part 2 soon i hope thx

...for yours truly, and just the right length too. Look forward to reading part 2.