All Comments on 'Our First Time'

The phase of the moon or something. Too many stories about wimp husbands having their balls cut off by slut wives. They're all sounding the same. But I guess authors who fantasize about limp dicks and how poorly they compare with other men have to use only a very narrow selection of words. Very sad these guys can't get it up any other way.

What is it nobody reads BDSM/submissive or Fetish so they put it in Loving Wives. Sad story of sad people.

I am SOOOO tired of reading comments from folks who are SOOO tired of stories that DON'T match their kinks. Hey, move on... find something you like and shaddup.

tAKE YOUR OWN ADVISE. DON'T READ THE COMMENTS IF YOU ARE SICK OF THEM

"Wimp! Cuckold!"

"Don't read it if it isn't your thing!"

"Don't tell me what to read!" etc., etc.

You people are like Serbs and the Croats, fighting the same moronic battle over and over and over. Isn't it time you all got a life?

I thought your story was pretty good. Had no problems with the theme but then thats why I come to this story site to begin with. I don't know how much if any truth was involved but it did sound believable which means if it was fiction then I guess thats a compliment. As for criticism abut the subject matter or catagory I can only say to the author, don't pay attention to those fucking idiots. I believe they have another agenda besides ligitimate commentary on your story. I, on the other hand, thought your story was good especially if it was a first attempt. Also, even though the characters claimed they would swear off further sex with others the story was entitled 'Our first time" leading one to assume there would be others. If so I'm looking forward to more episodes. Thanks for the story.

A fine story in a category that happens to interest me. I find that 95% of the readers know exactly what they are reading yet insist upong ragging about the category or theme. I say use your energy to give technical suggestions for improvement or go to stories you can appreciate.

used to be - maybe - at one time - drank some english water - got the cuckster virus - hated himself but loves watching beeg cocks - so he used his wife(?)whore as bait for the really beeg ones.

So, now and forever more the little weasel (no that can't be right weasels are fiesty proud little rodents) - hmm how bout cockaroach - close but cockawatch is much better! actually a cockawatch is a british hybrid of sorts - you gotcher english cuckster wimp and a cockaroach mating where the cockaroach takes the wimp forcibly ruining the cuckster for any other kind of partner except watching and servicing other cockaroaches.

Now thats exciting and appropriate eh writer! Where were we? Oh yah - we need to know more about you writer so we can clear your neighborhood of the weak ones and children if you aren't already registering each time they ask you to move. Now then reviewing your bio - it indicates you have been storing up these cuckster cockawatcher tails for 300 years or so. I am sorry you are a widower but she is in a much better place now.

But to your credit you are advertising for a replacement woman that you can offer in trade to watch again. You sly devil - no really - you were humiliating yourself and disrespecting maledoom and now want to begin anew. Great stuff sicko - the subhuman world has missed you - the jaded sicko's need new blood - if we can just find you some whore to pimp out for the cocks you want to watch - hmmm a problem as no self respecting whore wants a cockawatch to watch her as sick as it may seem and it is of course as you know.

Well waiting with baited roach bait for your next absurdly depraved attempt at erotic? nahh just sick below human convention scum bag slime from someone who should know better by now eh pathetic humiliated writer without mirrors in his hole. What a waste of talent cockawatch - sad!

A reasonable story. Perhaps you would have been better to put this one in the fetish section as opposed to the loving wifes section.

Cream filled pussy's are not to everyones taste. You story has some good points, however generally I did not find it believable as the wife went from a 'normal' wife to a creampie filled slut very quickly.

Perhaps in future you could add more tension and dialogue into your stories.

Generally it was an OK read if a little predicatable.

I don't understand the people that seek these stories out to complain about them. Don't you have something better to do with your time? Like reading your favorite incest stories, you lame fucks.

I'm not overly excited reading about rape or incest, but you don't see me seeking them out to complain about the subject matter. I don't see anyone else doing it either, and for god's sake, rapists and people that would fuck their own kids are the scum of the earth. And it's illegal! They could be sent to prison for it! Yet, nobody complains about that.

Why is it that this genre of story draws so much ire from so many people? My theory is that the people complaining are the little dicked fucks that know their wife would just dearly love to finally have a big dick, and reading this stuff brings out some kind of subconcious fear that they're not doin' it for the old lady.

Get a life people. If you don't like it, move the fuck on.

And btw... for the people that say over and over that this stuff should be in fetish.... Well, technically, it's not a fetish. Look up the word. Dumbasses.

The story was interesting though a bit quickly told.

What I don't get is if this so turns some of you guys off, and from what some of them say, it does, why read it? You knew from the start what this story was going to be about. Yet, you read the whole damn thing just so you could leave nasty comments.

If I find a story I don't like, I stop reading it if it doesn't appeal to me. Why can't some of you whiney babies use the same discretion and save yourself some misery.

Yes, this type of story appeals to me. If that makes you feel better about your sad little life, please feel free to mock me and degrade me all you like. It doesn't bother me. However, look in the mirror, there is something definitely wrong with you types that get your jollies by thinking you are better than others. I pity you, as we all should because you are just so damn pathetic.

Oh well, back to your sad little life and those of us that are happy with ours, well, never mind, you really wouldn't understand.

While the action is erotic, the story telling is sick, sick, sick. I could not understand this story hardly at all. Did you mean to say that Maria did not get fucked at all...all the time watching you two swap partners and fuck to the finish?

I had a hard time believing that any woman that looked like a starlet would marry a man named Claude. Check that. I have hard time believing that any woman who is able to walk erect would marry, kiss or even say hello to a man named Claude. Most men named Claude would not want the cream in a pie, but would take it directly from the spout. Outside of that, it was creampie-rific in almost all respects, except for the Claude part. Maybe if the name was spelled Claud, or Klawd or even Clawed, it would have had more impact. Something about a lead character named Claude that rubs me the wrong way. The only name that would be worse would be Dick Cheney. Actually Claude Cheney would be the ultimate bad name. Please do not write any story with a character by the name of Claude Cheney and I will be your fan for life. Wait. Maybe if a character by the name of Claude Cheney had sex and he got a disease that made his Dick fall off. That would be okay.

Great cuckold story!

I am very happy for you! I wish my wife would be a slut and would let my lick another man's cum from her hole. I cannot imagine anything that is hotter than that. I don't give a fuck what other people think - I think it would feel great if I let my wife be fucked whenever she wants, and then clean her hole and taste her mixed juices. That would be the BEST. Haters, go fuck yourselves. And you know what? If the guy grabs me and makes me lick his cock clean, I'll do that too. Hopefully that will also piss off all the people who hate bisexuals. Fuck you guys too. Live and let live. Licking sloppy pussy and tasting another man's cum is hot. If you weren't so narrow minded, maybe you would eat her pussy after you came in it and find out for yourself.

if you're gay say so.don't bullshit the readers.

so badly. The slut wife needs to be put to work in the circus fucking animals. The husband needs to slurp all the animal cum from her stinky cunt.Especially pig cum. Maria needs to find a life and Ron needs a mirror where he has to look at his ugly face all day

I gave it a 5

Thanks for the memories and flashbacks... Been there done that...

Love this story. It turned me on so much I came hard into my hand and ate it all up. YUMMY YUMMY !!! This is my dream fantasy. I truly want my wife to get fucked by another man (preferably one with a big thick cock) and I will lick up and eat all of the creampie. I want my wife to be satisfied sexually by another man (actually MEN) and make me a sissy faggot cuckold. I will even dress up for them if they want to humiliate them even more.

I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story.