All Comments on 'Out the Window Ch. 06'
by Mister_Shy
- 13 Comments
Hope you come back to continue.
He should get to cum in his daughter like she wants him to.
This author knows how to pitch & pick his words. Yes. As a matter of fact, it's playoff time.
I can't believe this story wasn't continued. I love it so much. Please think about a sequel!
What started off as rather hot turned into something dark and depressing. I really wanted to enjoy this story and thought I might but I just can't. Hopefully whatever's written next isn't so dark even if it's a new story completely.
We need to know how this finishes. Katie gives in and he impregnates her? Mary dies? Daddy & Kate live together and have lots of babies?
C'mon - finish this one! it has been so hot so far!
Sorry, was that blasphemy? I can feel how fucked in the head he is. You are a great author. You take me there. Going to the next chapter. Thanks
Your dialogue is perfect. I can't remember when I've read hotter scenes. You are one of my new favorites. Going to bookmark you and dive into your stories. Thanks!
I dunno. This daughter seems like a totally different girl from the one the story started with. She's now a borderline crazy unstable nymphomaniac. My warning senses would be screaming "get away from this one, she's guaranteed trouble!" For real. And she seems to be intent on bringing out the worst in him and driving him insane for her own little games. Still pretty hot, yet at the same time you can't tell whether to feel bad for the guy or to think "what a prick". Maybe that's what the author wants and they are just very skilled. But again, the daughter gives me bad vibes like "if I ever cross this one, she will make damn sure I end up in jail by setting me up for rape at he drop of a hat". I see her doing that easily. She seems like a self-absorbed nympho nutcase, not the girl who loved her daddy and wanted to give him what mom wouldn't at he start. I'll grant you aren't following the same old storyline everyone else did...but there's also a reason so many people use that storyline, because people enjoy reading it!
Great story! Although the bedroom scene between father and daughter repeats at the end, right after he finishes his business with his wife.