All Comments on 'Patience Pt. 05'

He needs to tell her how he really feels!

5

Friendzone sucker. It will stay that way unless `he does something about it.

A great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter

5stars

Absolutely zero plot movement on this one, but I still liked it - 5*

In some aspects blanks are getting filled in and fleshed out. But other parts of the story are endlessly dragging on and on. Take teasing for instance. A little bit is fun. Too much teasing leads to frustration which begets boredom. 😐

Telling a story is a lot like playing music. It sounds horrific if you're timing is off. 3/5

There is slow burn and then there is this molasses in winter story. Rob is an idiot and Bella is not much better

Not sure I can keep going with this