All Comments on 'Religious Wife Soaking with Old Man'

The idea is a little weird, but OK, however the writing makes this so difficult to read and enjoy. Maybe English isn’t your first language, in which case congratulations - difficult to write readable in another language. If you can’t find an editor, use Word or Google Docs grammar, then follow with Grammarly. The improvement will take your writing forward.

I was so eager to post that I forgot to edit or read through the story after writing and posted it without reading it again.

I like the concept, could have been more descriptive and yes, your grammar and English is atrocious in this story.

What a fun concept. I really enjoyed it.

Keep it up!

Excellent idea. More details would have made it perfect