All Comments on 'Santa Baby'
by nikkiesilk
- 11 Comments
Lumps of coal for you in your Xmas stocking. This was bad.
My Menorah is four nights full tonight but I swing both ways so I love Christmas too. I also love Nikkisilk stories because they tend to be warm, winning, and full of emotion. This one filled the bill nicely and then some, building wonderfully to the climax (or climaxes in this case). You are a terrific writer and set the stage so very lovingly. Your stories are truly transforming. The Christmas mood and songs were expertly woven in. If you re-submit this for a prize - as well you should - have a friend help you proof-read to fix two or three minor typos and pronoun agreements. But, that's easy - your talent and execution are what is special. Just loved it.
Hugs & Kisses, Di
It's a great love story , nice for the Christmas season, love it
This was sweet and sensitively written. :) I enjoyed reading it. The only criticism I can think of is that the dialogue sometimes seemed a little awkward, but honestly I'm not really one to be listening to for feedback. I like Luke a lot.
A pleasant romantic story. Perhaps a tad too many references to Christmas music, unless the writer was making a point about them.
You write very well and it really touched me.... we all need more of just being kind and loving to each other and making our lives better but not at the expense of others
Lovely story with a nice flow. What made this particularly good for me was the music you kept throughout the whole story.
I have read everything you have posted on Literotica and love your writing and style. It is always interesting when one finds a kindred soul. I love writing too, But mostly in the ScFi grene. Please keep up your writing!