by Prizmatic
Very nicely writen. I thought it was great. I read both of the stories. Sorry I didn't comment on the first one, but when you get hooked into a story you just want to read the next chapter.
Keep it going. I will read them all.
Baribrother
This was a great follow up to the first chapter! Can't wait for more..
it seems we have another turkey writer that get us hooked then drops the story and moves on to another one what a waste
To all those who asked for more:
What can I tell you? The muse sings what she wants, when she wants. I can only go with the flow. Sorry to anyone who thinks I'm leaving you hanging, not my intention at all.
Please write more like its a good story but its pointless without finishing it right?
This is about the worst I have ever read,, I am not a writer and would be embarrassed to put some useless crud like this for anyone to read ,,
what a load of shit, f _ _ _ing awful
Another rushed page. . fuck her virgin pussy in 5 minutes firstime and wants to eat it second time. dumbass wimp story.
It was good, brother and sister fucking because it feels good and is convenient. Simple and easy!
The drama doesn’t get my Dick hard. Also, bitching about it being to quick? Give me a break, these kids just unleashed the most powerful feeling a human can feel. Later on they can simmer down and enjoy it.