All Comments on 'Secret Kisses'
by stepjones
- 136 Comments (Page 2)
I was O. K. with the story until she treated her husband so poorly.
Straight or lesbian she certainly owed a lot more than she gave him. One star ⭐️ for the good writing.
Bill
this is the second or third time I read this super great story and I am even more thrilled. I LOVED IT
You are a good author, however why cheating ?I keep wonder really why?!!! I`d read three of your stories and they always involved cheating wife, it`s easily can work with a widow or divorced. I believed that love and cheating couldn`t combined, it is just a lust not love. I am sorry for the other readers they encourage cheating .
What a happy ending, just as long Kelly agrees and is all in. Steph is one happy puppy now. I guess a lot of women are missing out on the real action. Lesbian sex is stunningly awesome, unfortunately man wouldn't be able to climax like women, if they did they'd surely be hospitalized.
God that was sooooo hot! Made my panties all wet. Best story on literotica.
I came several times reading this hot story!! Especially the part where their clits make contact. That really kicked off the strongest orgasm of my life. Wishing I can feel another hot clit rub against mine and feel another woman’s touch and mouth.
A bit too predictable and too naive to think the husband would just at pack up and go. Sadly that is not realistic. Grammar and editing could do with a bit of feather dusting to tidy it up.
For your first story it was a great way to go! Really good! This story needs a new chapter, what happens next, with the school, with David finding out the truth, what twists and turns follow?
A good story!
Thank you
Ok not bad but duke player's get pumped for every game but more pumped for there match up against unc
I loved it all. It started so well with the instant attraction between Kelly and Stephanie. I knew they would be together but you made their getting there so enjoyable. The scene with Steph under Kelly's desk was incredible. I liked there was no true D/s relationship; they each liked being under the control of the other. Loved the way they used the double dildo; it was so stimulating picturing them going at it. How could Stephanie be so lucky when her husband asked for a divorce, He gets what he wants and so does she, though he does not know it. 5 stars all the way
Great story. Sorry for my English (Denmark)
The ending of the sttory, something is missing, what happened with the family, school and son when Stephanie jumped out as lesbian
What a wretched, rushed, cop-out ending. Stepjones' other stories are far better.
David and Stephanie both did cheated each other, therefore they deserved to divorce…
Wasn't bad I would like to know how she knows that Kelly would move in with her when they never discussed it plus you got 1 thing wrong duke gets pumped up playing against north Carolina not wake forest while every team wants to win duke always plays there best against Carolina not wake a 2nd thing that could be wrong depending on things is size don't matter depends on how you use it but like I said not bad
U did an amazing job as I loved it as so romantic sexy! Cud U plz write morecasai'd like to know how these 2 love birds make out! I really really loved thevromantic part & I m a guy who loves reading omantic stories! 😇🥰💘💝💖💗💓💋
Absolutely epic. Really sexy and luscious. Reminds me of my daughters 7th grade teacher. Now, that was a fun semester!
5 stars all the way!
You are amazing at writing these stories please please right more . You had me engaged the whole time . I was so wet the entire time of the story . Don't ever stop writing these !!!!
Story was good until the end. She was cheating too and they should have come to a mutual agreement. Not where she makes him feel bad because she was a cheating slut also.
Please write more. I’d love another story continuing Kelly n Stephanie’s relationship n watch it grow. It was very beautiful n wish something like that would happen to me. I was constantly wet reading it.
Thank you again
Love Dawn
Well done.....very well done. Except for the stuff on page four, where no paragraphs showed up in the second half, and therefore reading it was quite difficult. You may change that.
But non the less, I like to read more of you, and I certainly will.
For some reason, I particularly like stories where seemingly straight discover their true sexuality. The way you describe the trhrill and excitement and self-denial at first… it’s all very erotic.
I really liked this story, especially the all sex play. “Are you ready to please me?” And then telling her to get under the desk; tying up and tearing and edging. Then there was the double dildo - almost seems like this should have been 2 or 3 shorter stories. 5 Stars
Ps. I always seem to hope for ‘reach around play’ for seduction purposes - woman behind woman, pressing her breasts into her back, kissing her neck and behind the ear as she reaches around to caress and arouse the front. Not sure of the circumstances but the sneaky seduction and surprise arousal
Please write another story on continuing this story. “Sweet Kisses” is beautifully written. Love how it developed into lesbian relationship. I hope you find the time to continue this relationship now n how they become closer n falling love. It makes me appreciate that love is still out there if a connection can be formed.
5 stars ⭐️ then some.
Love Dawn
Ignoring the exceedingly hot sex scenes (which are great!), the story progresses well, the mutual attraction / seduction happens gently at first and then rapidly moves through the gears, but the epilogue just doesn’t “fit” the rest of the story at all, there’s no lead in, or a hint of distrust on either partners part, just boom it’s divorce time! Yes, the story needs either a second chapter or an epilogue, but I felt that particular section needs a rewrite, making it more believable and realistic. As it stands for me it’s a 4⭐️, but making the divorce feel less contrived and purely a plot point and making it more a natural progression would make it an easy 5⭐️. Just my opinion tho.
Regards, Ppfzz.
Excellent story. I'm bi but love pussy too. I've experienced a lot of the feelings and desires you write about with my gay lover. I loved this story, gave me a lot of insights into a how a relationship between two women works. A lot of similarities in my relationship with my man
The epilogue felt abrupt, but otherwise I really like this story. I agree with those that think you need a second chapter to wrap everything up beautifully.
Chapter 2 - Stephanie called Kelly and the gorgeous young blonde, busty teacher was in bed with her in less than one hour. The two women were ecstatic as they fucked each other the rest of the weekend together. Stephanie's ex-husband gave her a huge divorce settlement of several million dollars. Their son Ben was incredibly happy to have Kelly as his "other mommy". As soon as her divorce with David was final, Stephanie and Kelly married. Their sex with each other was hot and steamy for many years to come.
Chapter 2 - Stephanie called Kelly and the gorgeous young blonde, busty teacher was in bed with her in less than one hour. The two women were ecstatic as they fucked each other the rest of the weekend together. Stephanie's ex-husband gave her a huge divorce settlement of several million dollars. Their son Ben was incredibly happy to have Kelly as his "other mommy". As soon as her divorce with David was final, Stephanie and Kelly married. Their sex with each other was hot and steamy for many years to come. (And they cured every disease in the world....ugh!) - Yes, Ben is happy his "moms" ruined lesbian porn that is unless he gets stroked to.