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The creature dropped his cookie and curled into a terrified ball in the chair as the pup approached. Chad was surprised for a moment, then realized that even the vargr puppy could probably do a great deal of damage to the little guy.

Chad took hold of the collar and gently pulled back on it. The pup looked up at Chad then reluctantly stepped down. Chad crouched down and pushed on the pup's hind quarters.

"Sit," he said softly but firmly. The pup sat. Chad picked up the cookie and set it aside.

"Hey, hey," he said, softly touching the trembling shoulder. "It's okay, he won't hurt you."

He carefully looked over to Chad. The pup was indeed sitting obediently next to the hunter. He uncurled cautiously, never taking his eyes of the vargr. When the pup didn't make an aggressive move towards him, the creature visibly relaxed. He took up another cookie and munched on it.

"Is he yours, hunter?"

"Looks that way."

"How is he called?"

Chad looked over to the pup. During the course of the evening he had considered and rejected dozens of names, from the standards of Rover, Rex, and Spot, to the dramatic like Spartacus and Brutus, to the mythological, such as Zeus. Nothing seemed to fit.

"He doesn't have a name yet."

The creature studied the pup, then offered him the rest of his cookie which the pup took gleefully.

"Mistweave," he said after some consideration.

Chad thought it over. "Not a bad suggestion. I'll keep it in mind. What's your name, by the way? I'm Chad."

The creature looked up at Chad with wide-eyed amazement. "Did you just ask my name?"

"Uh, yeah. Don't you have one?"

"Yes. But nobody asks a little unimportant nix like me anything."

Chad sighed. He didn't like where this was going. "Well, I just did. So what is it?"

He pulled himself upright. "Kith," he said. He tried to make it sound important, but Chad could see the case of hero worship that was building in his expression.

"Well, Kith, it's nice to meet you. Did you stop by for a reason?"

"Oh yes, hunter." Kith hurriedly finished the cookie he was eating and took another drink of the eggnog. He then gathered up his sack and made a "back up" motion with his hands. Chad took a few steps back while directing the pup back by the collar. Kith dumped the contents of his make-shift sack onto the floor. Syringes, baggies filled with white powder, pills, or weed, little jars with crystalline rocks and cash fell onto the floor. Chad kept a tight grip on the collar when the vargr tried to go over to investigate.

"No," he said giving a sharp tug. "Sit, stay." The vargr sat with a little whine. Chad crouched over the pile. "Fuck," he breathed, then looked up to Kith. "Where did you get all this?"

"From those humans you told me to make sport off." He smiled broadly. "And you were right, great sport they are. Oh so serious about their poisons and their positions. So easy to trip. So fun to watch fall. But I didn't know what to do with the spoils. I couldn't find you again until tonight." He looked down at the pile and back up to Chad. "So what's to be done with it?"

Chad shook his head, then sat on the floor and sorted drugs from cash. The cash he placed on the table and the drugs he shoved back into the bag. He then carried the bag into the bathroom, watched with great interest by both Kith and the pup. In the bathroom he sorted out the little baggies and flushed their contents down the toilet with the fervent hope that Sebastian wouldn't be too offended. Then, he stuffed the emptied baggies back into the pillow case and took it back into the main room, grabbing a trash bag from the kitchenette counter as he passed through.

Back in the main room, he proceeded to the corner where butcher paper was laid down. It had been used, but there wasn't much of a smell. Chad suspected whatever it was Qiang had done to minimize the vargr pup's presence. Chad folded the pillow case with the syringes, baggies, and vials of crystal as small as he could make it, set in the middle of the messed paper and rolled them up together then stuffed the entire mess into the garbage bag and tied it close.

"Well, that takes care of that," he said as he settled into another chair and started counting the cash. Kith continued munching the cookies until they were gone and finished his eggnog. The pup settled in next to Chad and dozed off. Chad counted twelve hundred dollars with nothing over a twenty.

"Now what do I do with all of this?" Chad asked to no one in particular. He considered keeping it, but that felt wrong from the outset. He decided to heed his feelings.

"Well," Kith said timorously, "I thought the money might go to the man with the cauldron collecting for those who have not."

Chad sat back in his chair. "You know, that's not a bad idea. There's way too much here to put in one kettle. But splitting it up over all of them in the city, that could work."

Chad worked over a plan; a path through the city to distribute the cash as surreptitiously as possible. He would need help. Chad looked at the clock. It was a quarter of five. He knew someone who would be more than willing to help, but didn't have the first idea how to contact him. He mulled over his options when an idea occurred to him. It was silly, but on a whim he decided to try it. Chad rose from his seat and opened the window.

"Yo, Ambrose," he shouted out the window. "When you got a second, I need to talk to you." He then shut the window and retook his seat.

Kith watched with confusion. "What was that?"

"Really fucking stupid. If it works, I'll be shocked. If he doesn't show by sun up, we'll start making rounds and hopefully run into him."

Kith perked up and leaned into the arm of his chair in Chad's direction. "We?" he asked, hopefully.

"Yes," Chad said with a tired sigh. "All three of us: you, me, and," he paused and looked over to the vargr pup. "Mistweave, I guess."

Ambrose arrived by five-thirty.

**************

Chad fixed a simple breakfast and the group set off. As their first stop Chad went to an all night Wal*Mart and purchased a leash for Mistweave. It took all of Ambrose's efforts to keep the pup from following Chad into the store and he whined until Chad's return. He accepted the leash from Chad with the same stoicism he accepted the collar.

The cash was split evenly between Ambrose and Chad and they canvassed the city, the malls, the stores, and just about every other place they could find Salvation Army collection stands. Kith rode on Chad's shoulders. There was a stop for lunch and dinner. It was well into the evening before Chad returned home.

He was exhausted, as was Mistweave. The pup immediately climbed into the bed and went to sleep. Chad sighed. It had never been his intention to permanently share his bed with the vargr. In the next few days he would have to find a proper bed for the pup. Convincing him to use it would be another matter.

Chad turned on the Christmas lights and grabbed some eggnog and cookies from the kitchenette. As he settled into the chair something caught his eye. A small wrapped package was set under the tiny Christmas Tree Ambrose had set up. Chad set the plate of cookies and mug down on the table and reached for the package. It was a book, he could tell, wrapped in bright Christmas paper with ribbons, a bow, but no gift tag. Chad looked it over curiously. He looked at the clock; nine o'clock.

He hefted the book, thinking. Well, it wasn't Christmas just yet, but still... He debated for a few more seconds, the removed the wrapping paper.

The book was a hardcover with no dust jacket. The white linen cover was dusted with metallic blue snowflakes. Chad looked at the front,Collected Christmas Stories and Essays of Charles Dickens it read. There was a blue ribbon book mark sewn into the binding and it was marking a section about a quarter of the way into the book. Chad opened the book to where the marker was placed.

A Christmas Carol In Prose, being a Ghost Story of Christmas. Chad smiled in spite of himself and settled in with an old friend. His eye went to the beginning of the story, though he found he still remembered the words.

Marley was dead, to begin with...

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PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 years ago

I read “The Pearl” before coming here and found the continuation of that story, I felt the earlier story, although longer than this one, showed our Authors development very well; this story however, is of a significantly higher quality, just the way it’s built and the associated characters that are full of colour, shade and life, the fact that the “hero” is actually an anti-hero just adds to the quality of this piece! The darkness within it reminds me of several books, not least parts of the LoR trio, but this is screaming out to be published as a graphic novel, although I suspect the fact it’s a sequel would complicate matters. Best dark fantasy I’ve read here on Lit in ages, 5⭐️, sorry that you aren’t posting here anymore , but many thanks for what you have posted, cheers Ppfzz.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

The story is not yet finished, I would very much like to read the rest and drown you in currency as a result.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The beginning

I haven't read the stories about Sebastian and the pearl, but this one about Chad felt more like an introduction than a complete story, like the first 2-3 chapters of a book where you acquaint yourself with the characters and the world. Regardless i enjoyed it and i can say it is well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful

You don’t disappoint, lovely story it was nice to see Chad again as well as the rest of the crew. I was so happy to revisit your wonderful universe. I hope you continue to write maybe even a full book one day I’d definitely buy it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More

Please develop this story further. What you have written so far is just a teaser; I feel that a significant series could follow.

Absinth3Absinth3over 8 years ago
It's a perfect

"and they lived happily ever after" ending... Or a perfect ending "to be continued" ... Either way, it was a great story. Thanks Thistlethorn for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More?

Absolutely loving it. And the name Mistweave or using of Guan dao ... Just perfect. Lovely to read, Thank you.

CharonStyxCharonStyxover 9 years ago
This Series is Too Good To End

I agree with Drotenon. The series felt as though there was more to the story. And as Drotenon stated, because it is your story you have the right to end it here or make more stories. The story that woven here and in Pearl were amazing. I would love to see more of Sebastian, Chad . Chang and Qiang.

DrotenonDrotenonabout 10 years ago
Would like more

I liked the story it by no means was bad, but I agree with previous comments for me it seems incomplete as an author you have the right to not continue with the story line but from from my perspective there's still a lot of areas I would like explored for instance the significance of the stag and chads dreams, what happens with the rest of the goblins and the two survivors of the bridge keep pack, what happens with the relationship between rin and chad, Qiangs training of Chad, the relationship between Chad and the growth of the vargr pup as it grows, and is there any significance to Qiangs fears about the chess play between two unknown forces. At the very least I think you have enough areas you could cover in future instalments if (as I hope you do) continue with the series

rohit7785rohit7785about 10 years ago
a very good one

a very good story... Loved it....

But.... is it only me or someone else too feels as if the story is incomplete????

What about those goblins and the ones who planned and the concern the dragons were having and all such things????

Tentacle_BeastTentacle_Beastabout 10 years ago
Fantastic

A very well-crafted piece. The fantasy was really enticing. This is the first of your works that I've read, but I've definitely been hooked into going through your library. Keep writing; you have great talent for storytelling.

superfeluously_esuperfeluously_eover 10 years ago
I really lked this story!

I found this story to be thoroughly enjoyable. Bravo!

LavonyaLavonyaover 11 years ago
this deserves a 10!!!!!!!!!!

I don't particularly care for Christmas stories (don't judge me please I just was never into that kind of stuff) but THIS... is like let's say... you never liked a particular food and some one made it totally different yet still had the some of the same stuff in it and you tried it... and loved it, THAT is what this is like!!!

I really do hope you continue to write about these characters and keep going, because your writing is some of thee best writing in a long LONG time!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
5 of 5

i would love to see this story be contuinued i enjoyed reading it. please keep us updated, and hopefully you contuinue on with this story :D

yours truely: chain.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Five out of five, definitely.

Five out of five, no problem. I agree with the others. There's a lot more potential to this story, and it'd be great to see that potential realised.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
continue?

Like others, i also believe u should continue writing these stories..i didn't realize this was the last chapter, but even if i did read the 2 before this..id still think you could easily continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Doesn't quite feel complete

I agree with Kolrin. It really feels like there's a lot left unsaid. There's a lot of reference to the characters moving in a larger plan, but no feeling that that plan was even shown, much less completed. I would very much look forward to more writing in this series.

redbaron69redbaron69over 12 years ago
Excellent Read!

That was a great story! Hope to see more in the same series! Winter in July reminds me of cooler times and is much appreciated!

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
As We End Another

of your wonderful storys I can only wonder what you have in mind. You introduced alot of new characters in this story just as Chad game from your previous story. So who could possibly be next? I should stop and say I liked this story. Although I still think Chad has more story in him, I get the need to end this book. This story was so much more intense than "Pearl". And Sebastian and Chad are like night and day. Reading the two different character I think I like Chad best, he's just more complex as a character. But that is only true until you write the next story and I find someone else to like better..hehe-he

rewski84rewski84over 12 years ago
Loved it!

As far as an imagery of Christmas goes, this story is way better than sipping spiked egg nog or hot mulled cider in front of a fireplace. Now that you've completed another wonderful story, the clamoring for more will only get stronger. Either an epilogue, another chapter or two to reveal more of the "mystery" characters (the stag, Rin, and the winter element), or a spinoff that involved any one, or all three characters mentioned, would definitely be a HUGE bonus to your readers (hint hint). lol Definitely worth reading over and over again! :-D

KolrinKolrinover 12 years ago
Very good, but ...

where to from here? There's still a lot to be said, i.e. who or what the white stag is, who Rin is and all the other high profile players in what seems to be a high stakes game, as Chad is sure to have attracted a lot of metaphysical attention with his involvement in the demise of the Jorogumo.

Even though I absolutely despised both of them at first, Chad and Quiang have become my favorites in your stories. Sebastian is likable, but is just a taste to self-righteous at times and doesn't really see how much he has to learn.

Please continue.

LG

Kolrin

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Really great

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