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Xavier ordered the betas to seize her. Two huge betas grabbed her on either side, easily lifting her off the ground, withholding her powers from being activated. Although she was a witch and had quite few abilities, she knew she knew these men outmatch her in their size and numbers.

When he stared into her normally black eyes, were raged flaming red. She spoke in a deep, dark tone.

"This will not be the last you hear or see of me, Russo. Believe me when I say we will come in contact again, you will drop to your knees in agony, with all the pain you caused me. Believe me when I say this whole fucking compound will fall with agony due to your atrocious ways. And you can bet your fucking life, career and well being will be turned upside down and inside out in front of the ones you mistreated the most. You will get tenfold the despair from those you harmed for your own specisim. Watch your back you cowardly bloodsucking excuse of a dog".

"Yeah, yeah, bullshit, witch. Your warning falls on deaf ears. You are such a joke. Get her the fuck out of here."

"You are a fool Russo."

And with those last words she was removed off the compound with a new found attitude.

)*(

"I seriously cannot believe this shit. How dare he do this to me after all the hard work I put into that compound, all the spells I made, all the potions I had to brew that took days to finish, and having to put up with the disrespect from those fucking bloodsucking dogs while doing it, just really makes it even worse." Sallie Mae stomped her way home shouting to no one but herself at the worse day she ever had. She was furious more so than upset. She could not believe she willing put up with their shit for the last three years and had nothing to show for but a bruised, beaten up self-esteem, and a scared knee.

"I should have listen to my coven sisters, and my mother but oh no, I had to listen High priestess Morgana and go to work like a fucking slave for those fucking assholes. Yep, that's what they are evil, no good assholes. All of them dogs can go to hell and get fucked by the devil himself for all I care."

"WHOOOOO."

Without thinking consciously she answered "The Salvatore Russo pack that's who."

"WHOOOO."snapping her head up, she felt a trail of fear running up her spine.

"What the hell?" she looked around frantic searching wildly for the terrifying wacko. Her heart pounded in her chest, as she tries to gather enough energy to summon a quick spell.

The moment she finally turned around to face whatever it was, her high level energy subsided when she saw a black and gray owl in her big tree. "WHOOOO."it said again while moving to it's left on a big branch. Still feeling that sickening fear, and a little silliness, she quickly stepped into her home and shut the door turning in for the night.

)*(

He sat in that very spot and waited for her to return home for at least thirty minutes. He was so mesmerized by her presences their first encounter that he had to see her again; he had to get a glimpse of his black beauty.

He didn't have to wait long when the sweet scent of flowers after a summer thunderstorm filled his senses. He could feel his need to make love to her wash over him as he saw stomping angrily on her way home.

He could tell that she was upset about something with the way she spoke at loud to herself. The moment she reached the door, he made his presences known.

"WHOOOOOO."She answered unknowingly. It was the second time that he caught her off guard. She looked around frantic trying to place the unseen noise. A small pang of satisfaction settles inside of him as she realizes he was nothing but owl setting in her big oak tree. She gave him one more glance before running into her home.

"Mmm, Sallie Mae, my black beauty."He repeated this over in his head as his thoughts ran rapid of her. But his thoughts were suddenly interrupted when the squeal of a hawk circling above him caught his attention.

"Goddamnit Regan. What the fuck are you doing following me?"he mentally said to his younger brother. Regan landed on a branch above him all in his golden feathered glory.

"I just came to here to be the nosy little brother you know and love. Who's the girl?"

"No one in particular regarding to you, now get the fuck away from me."

"OOOHHHhhooo this might be serious. I asked a simple question and you are already being a major dickwad."Roger knew he was being a little to sensitive at the moment. He always got like this whenever something he wanted really badly was just right in his grasp, and people always find ways to try and stop him.

"Look, she's just a girl that really interest's me, that's all. Why does it matter to you anyways, that you have followed me all the way here from the manor? You have plenty of sluts falling at your feet. Now go away and play with one of them"

"Well dear brother if you weren't so caught in some girl, watching her for the last these few days, or better yet this past hour you would have been at home when Red Hawk's Aviation called about your pilots license. Such a shame really they said you aced everything, but since you weren't present they had to reject you."

"WHAAAATTT!?!"that really ruffled Roger's feathers.

"Hahahaha I am only teasing brother, you are too easy sometimes. You were accepted thanks to me of course. After years of practice I finally nailed your voice down the max."Regan had always liked to poke fun at his brother, and the same can be said for Roger. Regan mood switched from playful to predator the minute they caught scent of a girl that smelled like fresh pine coming their way. Looking out onto the sidewalk they spotted a tall redheaded woman walking her dog.

"Catch you later brother, I am off to play for a while, and I hope you do the same."Spreading his wings Regan flew into the air, made sure the woman was a good distance away before landing and shifting into a little puggle. Both Roger and Regan had doubt that the woman would look behind her and see what happen due to the fact she was so engrossed in her phone conversation.

Roger turned back looking into the house where the beautiful woman reside, and was sad he had to leave. If he could he would stay the night sleep in her tree, but he decided he did enough witch watching, and he needed a nice warm bed.

"I shall see your beautiful face in the morning my sweet. Goodnight for now, my darling." And with no other words Roger took to the sky.

)*(

Meanwhile, Sallie Mae was in the mist of trying to magically take down her cornrows, when she heard the distinct cry of a hawk nearing her home. Stepping away from the spell book, and a small pot of potion she was trying brew, she walked over to the window and got a sneak peek.

Looking out the window she saw that the owl now had company in which came in as a hawk, a big golden hawk. The hawk was on a branch above the owl, and it looked liked they were almost communicating with each other by the way they stared at each other.

"I am just fucking paranoid is all. They are just two birds in a tree." Easing her way from the window, she made her way over to a mirror on a wall and took in her mess of a hair.

"What am I going to do with you?" she said grabbing a piece of her hair. On the left side of her head, was outdated cornrows that needed repair badly, and on the right side, was a big, bushy, kinky, nappy mess of hair. She mange to take half her hair down, until she got tired and decided to think of creative spells or potion to handle the rest.

"Hmmmmm I bet, if I could make a spell book on how to style and fix a black witches hair I would make a killing." She said staring back at her reflection. Turning away she went into her bedroom strip off her clothes rested her head on her pillow. "But tonight, I am bone tired."

)*(

'That fucking witch will pay for what she did. How dare she threaten the pack that brought her in, when everyone else refused?'

'That human will know her place, when I am done with her, all humans will. They are nothing but fucking prey to state our hunger for food, they are our food, so to think this witchy, skinny; bitch of a human think that she is better than us to threaten us with a stupid course is ridiculous. The Alpha would be proud that, I am willing to do what he suggested last night, when he came to my room and complain about that rotten human. Yep, I will rough her up real good. You will be so proud of me Xavier."Helen stalked through the woods hell bent of trying to get rid of the pack's thorn. Thanks to today's technology she was able to locate where the witch lives. When the witch's house came into view through the edge of the woods murderous thoughts ran through Helen's head."This ugly little bitch will regret the day she ever stepped foot on the Salvatore Russo pack lands."

)*(

Opening up her eyes to the morning sunrays, she could hear the morning birds chirping near her window. Slipping out the bed, she padded her way to the window, and threw back the curtains to get a better dose of sunshine.

She looked out her window to see little birds playing around in her flower bed just below her window. She got a closer look at her flower bed and realized how terrible it looked. She definitely had to do something about it.

Stepping away from the window she went to out on some raggedy work out clothes that she could easily get dirty in, and grabbed her garden tools to go to work in her garden.

)*(

Roger contemplated which form he should take on next the moment her footsteps and scent neared closer to him. Thinking quickly he shifted into the animal that whatever came to mind.

)*(

"Hey there Sallie Mae, how are you doing this morning?" her next door neighbor asked. The older woman looked at her strangely as she was getting into her car. "Umm, Sallie is everything ok, I mean your hair looks like.....are...feeling....fine?" the older white woman could not help but to ask and stare. Living in a predominately white area, and only handful of blacks living in her neighborhood Sallie knew why the woman looked at her so strangely. She couldn't help but to laugh.

"Hehehe, everything is fine Miss. Lent. Have a good day at work now."

"Ok, honey I was just trying to make sure, bye."

Walking over to her flower bed, she saw a cute little brown bunny in her daisies'. It was so darn cute that she couldn't send it away. "Hey there little guy what are you up too this morning?" she bent down to pet it and was amazed at how soft it was.

She began to work in her garden the normal way since she had nothing else better to do, and she liked planting and growing things with her own two hands. Working in her flower bed and garden gave her a peace of mind to herself, it relaxed her.

She was so preoccupied with her flower bed, she did not hear a vicious growl from a wolf and its claw slicing her arm until it was too late. Her screams sliced through the morning air of pain.

)*(

Pain, pain, pain, pain I am in so much pain it's unbearable. Tears of pain poured down my face as I turn to see a blond wolf staring at me, grinning. I did my best to collect my thoughts, I even tried to call on the great goddess Isis for help, but my head is clouded. I grabbed the nearest weapon I could to defend myself from this wolf the best I could, but the pain is searing through my arm and all over my body.

The canine reveled sharp fangs with salvia dripping from it, as it neared me. I waved my miniature pointed shovel at it as a weapon but all the wolf did was just grinned more as if, it knew I was as good as dead. and I was. I am going to die at the claws of a wolf and I don't know why.

Closing my eyes out of fear thinking this was the end of me, a very frightening growl of a large cat echoed through my ears before I opened up my eyes again seeing a large tiger hoping on the wolf and gave it a few good scratches. The wolf was easily outmatched by the tiger in so many ways, but it did try to put up a fight.

Taking it's large paw the tiger smacked the wolf across my lawn, leaving badly wounded. I wanted to run inside my house but my pain was too much for me, and I felt myself getting weaker by the moment. With heavy eye lids I glance over to the wolf, and was shock to see it turn into a pixie cut blond haired human named Helen. That bitch, and after all I did for that heifer why would she do this? Wait a minute, there's a tiger in my yard, what the hell?

"Sallie Mae are you ok, sweetie? Can you speak?"

Glancing up I saw a beautiful light brown skinned man with long straight jet black hair talking to me.

"Tiger"I said weakly.

"Among others. Just please let me help you, sweetling."He lifted me in his big arms and carried me into my home.

"But I---."

"Shhhh, I will take care of you. Just please let me."

)*(

Helen walked through the compound walls with shame; she was shamed that wasn't able to kill some little weak human. And was shamed that she couldn't sense the shifter that attacked her out of nowhere, she was one of the top Betas in her pack, and the mere fact that was defeated so easily by an unexpected shifter was very painful to mention.

She reached the office door of her Alpha to deliver the bad news of her shameful attack, and let him know that shifters are in the area. When she opened the door Xavier was right in the middle of a conversation with a pretty Asian she-wolf.

He abruptly stop the moment she walked through the door all bloodied and beaten. He sniffed the aromas, and was instantly by her side. His eyes glowed a blazing amber as his wolf came to surface. A look of concern swept over his face.

Helen couldn't help but to feel the pain he was going through as he took in her condition. He grabbed her bloody right hand and held it up to his face as silent tears leaked from his eyes.

Lifting her other hand to his face she swiped away the tears. She looked at him with caring loving eyes as she felt tears of her own slipped from her eyes. She had a feeling that Xavier always loved her, had always wanted her to be by his side as Alpha Bitch. She just never thought it had come to the point where she bloody and scared up to do it.

"Xavier I know what happen to me was awful, and I know looking at me in this condition is going to make you do crazy things to get revenge. But you should know something. I was-

"My mate."

"Yes I might be your other ha—." His voice now was filled with anger; she felt her bones being crushed under her Alpha's hand.

"Oww ahh."

"You have attacked my mate."

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AMHJ89AMHJ89about 11 years ago

So much crazy going on but I love that you brought in a shifter beyond a were.. definitely needs some editing but still pretty good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

FUCK you NEED an editor! Even your own comments are full of errors! Its just too painful to keep reading, 1*

BronzeaphroditeBronzeaphroditeover 11 years ago
Intriguing...

I can't wait to read the rest, I hope it's finished :)

black_maestrablack_maestraover 11 years ago
somewhat confused

to jazz 1190... 'his's old black ass'? I thought the witch was a young black female and he was white.

To author, unique shifter love. Wolf shifter is jerk doesn't like his mate unknowingly, different.

stubborn_dreamerstubborn_dreamerabout 12 years ago
Nice!

I love your concept. Your story telling is very good. Well done.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
An

Editor will make it pop!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You seriously NEED an editor!!!

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years agoAuthor
wrong

Ok something went wrong, so I riposted it. But in the mean time you guys can get an early viewing of it. Go to my twitter page which is Queen_Vicki05 or Vicki Sundai, and click on the links to my blog in my tweets.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years agoAuthor
thanks

I posted chapter on Tuesday, and it says it's still pending. If it does not post today, I might have to post it again. or put it on my blog.

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsover 12 years ago
can't wait

So excited for chapter 2!!!! I hope Sallie Mae chooses Xavier so she can make him WORK for her and prove to her that he deserves her and that they belong together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
cool story

i think this is a really cool story cant wait for next chapter im officially hooked please update soon.

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years ago
Thank you for the update!

Now I can finally rest easy & get set to enjoy new developments for this dick of an alpha. I love this intro & I'm looking forward to more in the series.

BTW: Will you be following up on Dark Serenity? Thanks!

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years agoAuthor
submitted

To anyone that is reading this message, I just submitted chapter two of Shifting Hearts. I really hope it lives up to everyone's expectations, and I hope everyone enjoys it. I really worked hard on it, and might have rushed it a little, so there might be some mistakes, but please gentle. until then you can follow me on twittter.

MimiRoseMimiRoseover 12 years ago
Don't mind me....

.... I'm just stalking your story. Just carry on.

:)

I've already read this story 26 times. Yes, 26. I know. I know.

When it comes to picturing Xavier in my mind's eye, I keep thinking of the really hot dude from "True Blood". The actor who plays Alcide. And I sometimes think of the man who played the brother in the show "Prison Break" and he played Dracula in the third "Blade" movie (the crappy one with Ryan Reynolds and Jessica Biel).

For Helen, I see Michelle Williams, thanks to her new haircut.

For Sallie Mae, I see Anika Noni Rose, but she has cornrows in my imagination.

kitteh_katkitteh_katover 12 years ago
don't drop the story!!!

too many people get to your position, (i.e. they write a brilliant first chapter) then just drop the story and stop writing!

DON'T DO THAT!!!!

please continue the story, and please do it quickly, because i am a VERY impatient lady ;) and i want to know what happens next.

so get on with it!!! :)

k_k

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
go with the alpha

Personally I think that she should go with the alpha but you should make him work for her so that the plot is good and the tiger dude and the alpha should fight for her attention but let her get with the alpha coz I want to see him work for her and that stupid helen girl to feel shamed when the witch takes the alpha soooooooooooooo please make her get with the alpha

Thanx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
;..;

Chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loving alpha russo

please update...this story has me hooked. your style of writing is very intriguing. can't wait to read more.

sandangelsandangelover 12 years ago
more???

Next chapter???

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Chapter Two?

I'm eager to see what happens next. I check in everyday for it. I'm begging you!

Please update!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
holy crap did not see that coming

what a good ending for this chapter you got to right lots lots more and fast pleazzzz.!!!!!!!

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsover 12 years ago
Hoping

I really hope you post another chapter soon. I wonder who Sallie Mae is going choose to be with Alpha or Shifter. Ooohh it's gonna get good!!!! Lmao

But come on Vicki I need another update from you !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more!

please write more, i love the way you started this story. keep writing more

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Got it !!!!

Everything fell into place....please proceed with this tale....loving the cliffhanger with multiple options for outcomes in the next installment. Very nice.

You need a bit of tweaking as there were extraneous words that confused the flow at times.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
That was mad deep!!!

While reading this I thought I was in one of those topiairy maze gardens. Ok we get that he ain't diggin' witches or humans.............ok......You leave us with him being pissed his beta attacked his MATE?!?!?!?!?

Come on ....give us some clarity......fill us in on the real skinny...............

I'll stand in line with the other stalkers for the update on this one. I have to know....so

please don't tarry too long wit' it.

I'm going to do another read through to make sure I was following correctly...lol

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyover 12 years ago
Stop the Madness!!!

I need another fix and soon please.. I read this story almost everyday like some kind of stalker.. Which I am and I'm a proud stalker. But only for you my Queen...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You're killing me

Vicki,

I've been stalking your page for updates. Please, please, pretty please, update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love the story (go for the alpha)

I don't do reviews but, this story deserves one and more! I am so on team alpha Xavier. I disagree with some of the people that want her to end up with the shifter. Go for the alpha, he might be able to change.

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 12 years agoAuthor
Just a Reminder

I am busy away writing chapter two of Shifting Hearts, and I should be finish with it very soon. But in the mean time you can always follow me on twitter to get updates on what I am doing, and everything else.

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years ago
Good one!

That fucker! I so wanted him dead! I think I still want him dead - that douchebag of an Alpha!

Argh, the twist was awesome & you are a great writer to get me to hate that raging used tampon.

5 stars for an excellent start!

MagikalmonkeeMagikalmonkeeover 12 years ago
Go with the shifter!!

I hope she gets with the shifter! Hopefully he cares for her and nothing mean/ conspiring about him... I mean he did stalk her but still hope she goes for the shifter and the alpha begs... BEGS through humiliation to be denied! Muahaha!

Hope you update soon hehe :)

MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyover 12 years ago
Love It !!

This story is so fresh. its not wam bam i love u lets make babies like the other stories. It gets a little boring to always read the same stories just using different names and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh, so that's why...

I am one of those confused and asked a question, but I wouldn't have asked if I know. I knew somehow that ms. author would reply or post a comment so I checked. Since this is my first time reading about a witch, maybe the advise I could giveis to not assume that your others know everything about these magical creatures. Show us the characters ^0^ so that there won't be a need to explain or tell us readers what happened. This is the first chapter -the introductory chapter to lay out the setting, the characters and the conflict. One does not need to give us the resume or history of each character in the story in this part but at least, give us important details.

Even so, I still find the plot interesting :)

addictedto4inchesaddictedto4inchesover 12 years ago
amazing

I think this is my new favorite story of yours. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
fantastic

Please do not keep us waiting too long.......this story is great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more

i loved ur story cud updated it soon.reali soon am dying to knw wat to the alpha

divastar88divastar88over 12 years ago
MORE

MORE MORE MORE i cant wait for the next update

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I LOVE YOU

PLEAAASSEEE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER I JUST FOUND MY NEW ADDICTION

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

Interesting story so far. I would really like to see where it goes from here. Does Sallie Mae have two mates.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 13 years ago
intresting how youll handle this

He fires her and doesn't recognize till she is attacked that she. Is his mate. The pack hates her and she has been defended by a tiger...that's a reealy deep hole to start in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Make him pay

This is how she could make him pay. If she is his mate to hell with him she should go with Roger & crush him from the inside out. Yeah at this point I hate the alpha, but & I want to see him suffer for the way he allowed his pack to treat her & mostly the way he treated her. But it's ur story I'll love however it turns out, & I can't wait to see how he takes it know she is his mate. Please post again soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
o hell yea!!!

I am sooo ready 4 da nxt updated u have captured my interest completely great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
interesting....

I hope you can update this story soon along with your others as well.

Well done and by the way the Alpha seems like a nut and an asshole. I'm wondering how you will make him redeemable.

*****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
HECK YEA!!

Now this is a great story..cnt wait to read more :)

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127almost 13 years ago
Can't leave us hanging

I'm looking forward to what you have instored for the next chapter. I didn't expect him to hurt Helen, I thought the tears were for her. OMG wait til he finds out the blood he smells is of his unimportant magical human... That punk ass!

lisaisaleftylisaisaleftyalmost 13 years ago
Interesting start

Do you plan to post regularly/soon? I hope so!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more

helo i reali loved your story.could u pliz write more.thnk u

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickialmost 13 years agoAuthor
confused people post

Thank you sweetie for explaining her shields or barriers were down doing the attack. She was not expecting for someone to attack her in her own home so why would she put them up? lol.Also witches uses shields to protect themselves from being invading on mentally, and emotionally and for the wolves scent wise. While she was working for the wolves she would put up her shield, to avoid conflict with anyone,because she knows how they feel about human witches. So therefor the Alpha could not pick up her scent, until she did get attack.

I would like to send a huge THANK YOU, to everyone who read my story. I appreciate the feedback, and I will take your comments into consideration, and again Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Please update fast

great all around please !!!!!!!!!!! but whats gonna happen to roger ? and how is she he's mate all of a sudden

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Freakn Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

i love how this story went, its totally different from other stories that people write on here. Xavier has so much begging to do, and even that won't be enough for Sallie Mae to forgive his stubborn, rude, ass!! she deserves so much more than a guy that changes his feeling last minute just because he finds out that she is his mate. he has to actually feel bad for how he treated witches in general. the shifter is a much better mate for Sallie Mae than Xavier. =-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Confused People...

SHE'S A WITCH!!! She could've easily whipped up a potion or kept up a barrier that was able to conceal her "scent". The asshole Xavier probably couldn't catch it because of those said barriers. I believe that while at home, Sallies barriers were down during the attack and the scent mixed with the blood which then transferred on to the heffa Helen.

I'm just speculating. Maybe I'm wrong. Anyhooo...GREAT JOB!! I hope that because of his behavior toward Sallie she was released from being his "mate" and she gets with the shifter!! YESSS!! =)

lilwolfspiritlilwolfspiritalmost 13 years ago
confused

i think this could be a good story but i'm a bit confused on how the hell he couldn't understand that Sallie Mae was his mate. Plus i have to agree with the others Sallie needs a much better mate then that Asshole of a Alpha.

Donna

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WHAT THE F***K!

Huh? I'm confused. What the fuck?

MimiRoseMimiRosealmost 13 years ago
Please don't let this be one of those....

....dead-end stories that are so great but never gets updated and eventually finished.

This story has renewed my interest in reading Literotica's stories! So I really hope that story gets regularly updated and has a conclusion, despite havings things like a life or a case of writer's block interfering.

I love the characters: Sallie Mae, Xavier, Roger and even the villainous Helen.

Girl, can you please try to update this story on a regular basis? Cuz, I have already read this chapter three times already, as if I am a dope fiend and this story is my drug.

Don't make me harass you.

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 13 years ago
ah

yes, this alpha is a complete ass. Looks like this is going to be a good one. However, you need to edit carefully there were a few typos and minor spelling mistakes that could become a problem.

sirraliasirraliaalmost 13 years ago

Nothing like love to bring down a bastard Alpha like Xavier. Now lets hope he changes his evil ways for his witch. Cant wait for the next chapter.

pleasureseeker5pleasureseeker5almost 13 years ago
The alpha is an asshole

He's abusive and treats females like crap--how could he possibly make a good mate for Sallie, or anyone for that matter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Woah....

I was not expecting that...I was expecting the shifter to not like witches or somthing but Him?...wow...this is going to get interesting can't wait to hear more!!!

JikiaJikiaalmost 13 years ago
more plzz

Ahhh so great can't wait for nxt chap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
OH MY GOD

Can't wait for the next chapter love it hate and love is the best

jazz1190jazz1190almost 13 years ago

lol that was funny and good. he is in love with the person he dont like which is his's old black ass. that a witch. love it!!!! and i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Interesting

Interesting plot and characters. The ALPHA is so unreasonable though. How come Roger is attracted to her when she is the alpha's mate? And why didn't the alpha scent her before?

I noticed some spelling and grammar errors which can be easily fixed. I am looking forward to the next chapter ^0^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yummy

Thankyou...may I have some more...please..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
everytime he yells her name i think of

Ike turner and whats love got to do with it screaming anna may name

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

interesting!!! I love the twist. that alpha is an ASSHOLE! I hope he will not get near the witch. I hope she won't care about his mate b.s. Not sure how serious the shifter could be about her but he does care at least. I guess it was the witch's blood that told him she's his mate? I'm definitely intrigued by the story. keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
More Please!!!!!

O.K. you got me reeled into this story. Please get chapter two to us as soon as humanly possible. But don't forget to make the Alpha suffer alot, he is being such an asshole.

donaldedonaldealmost 13 years ago
interesting start

very interesting start i am looking forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
this is gonna be so good.

Great start and i like the direction this is headed. But it wasn't long enough. Update soon plz?

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