All Comments on 'Sissy Jess, Cuckolded by Mum Pt. 01'

I have given this a rating of three, please do not stop reading there.

You have set a well considered stage with tremendous developmental potential, precisely what good writers do.

Two, and a half, main characters are identified, the fourth has been teasingly introduced. Again well done.

All that remains are the chapters within your mind that i, and I am sure others, await.

little short hope gets better

Powerful stuff!