All Comments on 'Spring Break'

Concise, very descriptive and worth a good wank! Well done!👍

I had thought she had sent out some message to a 'let's get it on in the airport' dark web page especially designed for victims of delayed flights. At some point however I realized it was much more incestuous. Still, no question it was a fun read! And all in only a thousand words, too! Five stars, obviously. Kudos. -- JB

Was really hoping it was her brother!

From now on you get 1 star because of your nasty biography. If you dont want to talk to anyone, you dont have to be nasty. Just simply dont say a damn thing.

Five stars! I thought you might have hooked up with someone new while waiting at the airport. I should have known better! You got me! How about the same story from his perspective? I'd really like to know what happened between daddy and the mom waiting to feed her child! Too bad that anon cost you a better score.

Spring break will never be the same.

The coward who 1-bombs me anonymously because of my biography accuses ME of being nasty! I have no problem with constructive feedback if there are issues with my composition or text. The ironic thing is that biography is mainly for the guys I talk to on Lit Chat, where I spend far too much of my time! Thanks to everyone else who enjoyed this little didn’t. Writing a story in under 1,000 words is harder than it sounds!

Another exciting and erotic Father and Daughter adventure. Love the surprise ending. One of the best Spring Break episodes with the Lynch family. Now we need a Mile High Club one.

I loved it. I read it while sitting in my office and had a raging hard on the entire time. I’m also from the 518 & will play daddy whenever you’d like. 😘

Short, but really hot and loved the twist at the end!

POST A PICTURE OF YOUR PUSSY! PLEEEEEEEEEEASE?

Short and Hot! Poor Dad? , Lucky Dad!

... sweet and to the point. < 1000 words, hmmm, good job. Sorry about the coward. I don't submit stories for just that reason; oh well who is the coward now? 8-(

Very well written. Tantalizing and teasing. Great twist at the end.

Very sexy. I went into hoping for bro/sis, but I enjoyed this just as much. Great work, especially for less than 1k words.

Excellent!

So fucking sucking hot. Loved it. I absolutely adore cunt in every way. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

I've admired your stories for aongvtime. This one was short and to the point. Well worth the read. You're an amazingly talented writer. I look forward to each story of yours I read.5 stars

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