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... and it's two tons of fun. Thanks to our estimable draconian for coming up with the concept.

For someone who claims to have already published stories, this one is an editor's nightmare. Stuff misspelled, awkward phrasing etc. Although it all could be because you didn't bother to run it by a competent editor. On the other hand, as a role player i enjoyed the group dynamic.

I'm sorry that the quality of the editing didn't match your standards, but...I would like to point out that this is literally just me copying and pasting a Roll20 session, removing screen-names, and doing some minor editing to make it more readable and to reorganize comment orders so that dialog made sense.

My published novellas are actually edited by a professional (and fantastic) editor and are also narratives written by a single person (yours truly) and not a group of five, six people.

This is the literary equivalent of a Youtube lets play of a D&D session made into a readable format. The quality of the editing is likely going to remain as it is due to time constraints and my own editing skills. Not as much time is being spent editing entries of this size compared to my other work, this is at best a rough draft if it ever does get rewritten and edited into another format.

This project is in addition to my current schedule for production, I'm still going to be posting my standard short stories :)

I've gotta give you points for adapting Jade Regent for Starfinder. I may try that one with my own group.

OK, so the game is a disappointment, but it generated and amazingly fast paced and unpredictable romp through science fantasy. All 10 chapters are great fun, and for the first time for me, the fact that the series is unfinished won't stop me from reading it again.

The unedited game log at the end of ch 10 was educational. As for the criticism about editing, not what I know you can do, but still ahead of 80% of stories on Lit. Definitely worth reading.

Strand