All Comments on 'Stepmom'

Enjoyed the story very much. Time to work on a sequel, as I'm sure there is more to come.

Storyline is good. And did not find story hard to follow due to lack of quotation marks. Keep going.

Pretty good story but puncuation can be your friend.

this kid is kind of in a bind-hard sex to turn down, but lots of pitfalls in this relationship-good plot twist to moth-son incest-thanks

The Dad is 26 yrs older then his son

I enjoyed your story, but in your next one, please ad " " when you are writing what people are saying. It will help the story flow better when we understand when they start and end a conversation, and your narrative continues.

All in all, you conveyed your thoughts, and your story was pretty good. I would suggest that you allow somebody else to proofread your stories before you publish any more. Literotica offers to edit them for you if you don't feel comfortable having a friend reading your private thoughts.

Good luck, and please keep writing!

I'm going to get up and jerk off after reading this hot fuck story,that is one lucky son

Different incest story. There is no emotional chemistry/love anywhere. Father marries woman because he is lonely. Stepmother marries husband for reason unknown. Son - unknown quantity.