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Click here"Cup those titties, my slut," she ordered, as she began fucking me.
"Yes, Mistress," I immediately obeyed, already feeling my orgasm building.
"I want you to come on the count of ten, my pet," she said, after a few deep hard thrusts. She then added, "not before and not after, exactly at ten."
"Okayyyy," I agreed, even though at the rate my orgasm was rising, I wasn't sure I could control it for even a few more seconds.
"One," she began.
"Two," she continued, counting up.
Each number of the countdown felt like an eternity as her cock slammed into me with such deep penetration and force.
"Three," she groaned.
"Oh God, Mistress, I've never been fucked so well," I moaned, hoping talking would somehow slow down my orgasm.
"I knew you were the one, my slut, the moment you walked into the room," she revealed to me, before adding, "four and five."
"Whaaaaaaat?" I asked, confused by her declaration.
"Your innocent, ridiculously conservative attire, yet mixed with your confident demeanor and I knew you were the perfect submissive," she explained, even as she both continued fucking me and kept counting towards the moment of euphoria. "Six."
"You could really see that?" I asked.
"In a heartbeat," she replied. "Seven."
"So close," I moaned, my head spinning with the revelation, trying to fathom how I gave such an impression. Before I met her I didn't remotely see myself in such a light.
"Not yet, my fuck slut," she cautioned, as she began fucking me so hard I wasn't sure I could last another second. "Eight."
"Okaaaaay," I whimpered, squeezing my breasts hard enough to leave bruises on myself as I tried to resist the orgasm that was definitely inevitable.
"Nine," she counted, so close to the crescendo of eruption.
"Yes, oh God, please Mistressssss," I begged in delirium.
"Nine and a quarter," she teased.
"Mistressssss, nooo," I whined, clenching my teeth together in a lame attempt not to come.
"Nine and a half," she again teased with a wicked smile, keeping me on the cusp of heaven and yet unable to touch it.
"Oh, can't hold baaaaaack," I whimpered.
"Ten!" she announced.
"Oh fuuuuuuuuuck," I screamed, through clenched teeth to avoid alerting the entire building to the most intense orgasm of my entire life.
"That's it, my slut," she purred, as she continued the rough fucking as my orgasm riddled me, usurping any energy I had left in me. "Come like a racehorse."
"Can't stop comiiiiiiiing," I weakly retorted.
For a couple minutes of pleasure indescribable in any remote sort of way, my mind went blank and I transcended to utopia, where pleasure was eternal and never ending, even as she continued fucking my trembling cunt.
Suddenly she pulled out and ordered, her own sense of urgency implying she was about to come herself, "Knees, my pet."
Although slightly dazed and confused, I quickly sat up, feeling wobbly and utterly weak as I stared at her pulsating cock.
She furiously pumped her cock and this time said, "Time for you to get a nice load on those pretty lips."
I opened my mouth, stared at her juicy cock and waited for her to coat my face with her cum.
Wanting to talk dirty, to get her off with my words, I demanded, "Coat my face with your cum, Mistress; cover your slut with your seed; mark your property with your white goo."
"Oh, fuck, you really are the one," she grunted, coming for the second time this afternoon.
Her cock aimed directly at my face and I felt her warm cum spray me with the force of a firehose.
I moaned, "That's it, Mistress, cum all over your fuck slut."
Calling myself names only enhanced my desire to please for some unfathomable reason.
Four more streams, each less than the one before, hit my chest before I leaned forward and took her cock back in my mouth.
"Retrieve every last drop, Lily," she moaned, saying my name for the first time since I can't even begin to remember when.
I hungrily bobbed on her cock, doing exactly that.
Finally, she pulled out and smiled, "You even look cute with cum all over your face."
"Next time I hope it's in my cunt," I said, hoping that next time may still be this afternoon.
"Oh don't you worry my little cum bucket, I still have two holes to deposit into," she answered.
I wasn't sure if she meant today or someday, but I understood that I was eventually, likely very soon, going to be taking her cock in my ass.
"Rub my cum all over those tits of yours, my sweet Lily."
"Yes, Mistress," I nodded, moving to my tits and rubbing the sticky seed all over my chest.
She said, watching me, as she collapsed into her chair, "You definitely passed your first test."
"Did I get a hundred percent?" I coyly asked, still on my knees in front of her.
"Well there is always room for improvement," she smiled back, moving her foot to my breasts.
"I'll work harder, Mistress," I promised, as I took her foot and moved it to my lips.
"I know you will," she nodded, before adding, "Get dressed, my pet. I have a meeting in fifteen minutes in this office."
"Can't I be under your desk, giving you a very lengthy blow job?" I asked, hungry for more.
"Oh, you really are an eager beaver," she smiled, standing up. "You will indeed be under my desk many times, my pet, but now I want you to return to work. We don't want your fellow employees to talk."
"Yes, Mistress," I nodded, feeling an undeniable sense of disappointment that this first training was over.
"Don't worry, my little slut, today was just an appetizer, wait until we have a weekend retreat," she smiled, as she got dressed.
"I can't wait," I admitted, already imagining all the naughty things I hoped she planned to do to me.
"I know you can't," she nodded, sliding back into her heels.
Finally dressed, my body weak, unsure how I was possibly going to work after this, I stood up, walked to the door, my heels in my hands, and said, "Thank you so much, Mistress Katherine, for seeing through my outer shell."
"You're welcome," she nodded, before adding, "You should probably put on your heels, we don't want the rest of the staff to know you're a submissive, cock pleasing, pet, do we?"
"No, likely not," I laughed, "At least not until you decide to have me pleasure every member here as a Christmas bonus."
She laughed, "You and I are going to get along very, very well, my kitty."
"Meow!" I replied, knowing life as I knew it had officially come to an end and I wouldn't have it any other way.
As I slipped on my heels and walked out the door, a thought suddenly popped into my head, 'what about her husband?'
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EPILOGUE...just in case you thought this was finally over:
Three month later, my private training with Mistress Katherine complete, including very thorough ass training, she told me she had a few surprises for me.
The first was that I was moving in with her so I could be her full-time pet.
The second was that we were going to be going on a week-long trip to some secluded island where apparently Mistresses and pets played.
The third was that it was time for me to begin my next level of training.
I was immediately curious what the next level could possibly entail after a full month of anal training.
It was after hours when she ordered me to get undressed and kneel in the middle of her office.
I, of course, obeyed.
She came behind me and put a blindfold on me.
A chill went up my spine. She had used handcuffs on me already on a few occasions, but this was a new development.
"Do you trust me, my pet?" she asked.
"With my life," I answered, meaning it completely.
Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
"And now begins part two of your training," she said, as I heard her heels head towards the door.
"Yes, Mistress," I whispered, wondering what my beautiful Mistress had in store for me next.
"Thanks for coming," Mistress Katherine greeted.
The voices, yes voices, which responded sent a chill up my spine....
THE END
Please, let me know if you liked having two endings and, if so, which one...
JASMINE MARCH 2015
- COMMENTS
Both were superbly told and enjoyable. But, as you are asking if i did have a preference, i do. The F/F version.
Great story and you should take her on a a trip so she could be under the boardroom table servicing your clients while you have your meeting sucking their cocks and cunts and yours as well. Great for new clients.
yours truly, Joe
Oh, what a glorious trading Lily had…which ended with miracle sex and complete submission.
Great story..loved every minute of it.
I need more…more ..more!
Thanks
I loved the surprise of the second ending. If anything I would have liked it drawn out a bit more. The addition of Miss Katherine in the epilogue is very promising
It was great. Both were good, but I liked the first ending better. I also liked the epilogue. Very hot story. Being a submissive male slut myself, I love stories of submission. Especially your stories.
They’re both wonderful. I think the pet’s character is realized more with the lesbian version. Although the shemale version might lead to the pet being bred over and over again with her boss or for alliances
My choice goes to the second part. Surrly becausrcas a crossdresser, i like pleasuring cocks
Both endings were great. Although I much preferred the first. The delayed gratification and teasing made it so much hotter.
I'm speechless - with pleasure! ALL great endings. Just when I thought we were done with the stap-on (always a winner for me!), Finding that she's packing a 9" member, sent me to the next level (yes, another of my perversions!). And you really left my on the edge of my seat - not only blindfolded, and I'm hopeful the voiced belong to several ladies with toys or other goodies?!
Sidenote - I've been a long time fan of reading erotica (nonono69 was/is one of my favorite authors who's subject matter still sends me to the stratosphere), back to the BBS days with no bandwidth or for that matter, hour-long downloads for one photo. I like something left to my imagination that starts with you painting the picture. To that end, your are one of three authors I follow - wonderful work and keep letting your imagination loose!
both endings were hot AF !!! i didnt seen the last ending at all but it was hot hot hot, what about the hubby though ??? hope there is more to this, also 5*
Liked the second ending better, though the first was good. The only. way to have made it better was with your illustrations
I wonder how many times you got yourself off while writing this wholly incomplete tale of submissive lust. I originally had the impression that our heroine was not experienced in sex, but you quickly altered that view. Hard for me to believe that she, being quite the whore, could throw those pleasures away so quickly, so if I had to choose I guess I would choose the second ending. I’m anxious for the rest of the story especially with the husband. You have an excellent imagination! Thanks.
Jazzy... loved the stories! I like them even better when illustrated like you frequently do
preference for the second ending as the epilogue leaves opportunities for more
I loved the first part for the dom/sub sex, but would like it to be me sucking and being fucked by that beautiful 9” cock!
First one was kinky enough for me! Second one- overkill. Overall great story!
Fabulous - I loved the first ending very much, didn't see the twist coming and it was awesome. very close decision probably the 2nd just wins, but maybe you could continue with both endings.
Amazing! I love it when a cunt can write such a dirty fantasy story. I wonder how close you came to actually being that Mistress? I liked the cunt ending. More erotic.
I loved both endings, but the second one was far more titillating and full of dripping lust! Now you obviously know that this can run and run! So I hope you will carry on with this story line, as it has endless spin-offs! Pretty please?
Liked just Mrs. Parks better as a real Woman. would have liked to hear about their first "business" trip and perhaps using her to seal a business deal with 2 Partners of a new firm.
i loved it all. The seduction - the torment, beautiful.
I also love both endings - what a surprise the T-Girl was, fabulous idea.
The Story was Vey Good: Having Two Endings is a good 'Innovation'. The Illustrated version Must Have been Stupendous. Submitted by Tijna
Would have given first ending a 5 but alternate version as disappointing 😞
I liked both endings as well but i don’t think they should end at that point. There is to much potential in them not to carry on. Jasmin Please try to take them further when you can. K london
I enjoyed the first ending more, but thought both endings worked well. Of course I prefer your writings about “pure” lesbians to those about “shemales” so factor that in. I did find the second ending more fun than I thought I might. Thank you for all your imagination and creativity!
I loved it. I especially liked the second ending. I did not you skipping her first anal, that would have been so hot
I liked the first ending better. And the epilogue. I do want to see a follow-up of her moving in with her mistress.
hermaphrodite. Then Lily could have had the best of both worlds. Great story even though I knew what the alternate was as son as you told us you had one. None the less, a great story! 5*
You write so well that I can't choose. You'll have to choose for me Mistress.GQ2BvR
I'll pass on what's in the box
Same with what's behind the curtain
I want to see what's coming through door #3
Think s is a tremendous piece, thank you very much. As she males aren’t my thing, I prefer the first ending. But I will admit the story was so good I read the second and it was hot.
S always 5 stars
You do such an excellent job of describing sex between a she-male and a woman or man( your 2018 story). Looking forward to more between Lily and Mistress Katherine!
The first ending was the best. Both good but the possibilities seem more with the first.
I truly appreciated your second ending. I didn’t see it coming until the bulge in the panties. Then I was like duh. But it still was the best. I’m really excited about the next section. A knock at the door and voices plural. Oh my goodness to be her. I’m jealous. Keep up the excellent writing that you do. Happy in California.
Wow just wow, generally I can’t get off on stories but both ending were so amazing I came to both.
I find the first ending much better, with the all lesbian theme being more exciting!.
Either ending works for me, I get off easily with most good sex stories. An d this was a good story...!
I enjoyed the ending where Lily said WOOF. Rather than MEOW. Will there be anymore of this story???
5🌟's
I liked the original ending more than the alternate. Loved the blind fold in the alternate ending.
I am hoping for a sequel?
The alternate ending made for an interesting twist but I liked the lesbian version best. Both endings work on a well told story! Loved the final note of the blindfold and trust. I can imagine myself in her position as she hears the knock on the door! Anticipation is a turn on for me so the unknown is overwhelming!
Any chance there could be a sequel? I liked the original ending more than the alternate. The whole story was written well, so easy to visualize
The alternate endings were well written and flowed with the story - each works well. Thank You.
I haven´t still read the story but it´s clear that it isn´t an illustrated story. Please, put it in other task
I typically gravitate to tranny stories, but your first ending was wonderful! It carried the story line through to its arousing and logical conclusion. Thanks for writing.
The alternate ending caught me offguard. I liked the shemale ending much better! Very erotic and hot.
Although I really love shemale stories, I preferred fhe first ending since it continued a great story of submission and desire.
I couldn't decide witch I like better either. Something in the demands she made.
first off this was way to long, when I started reading this I though maybe 3 or 4 pages, now I am not into all this kind of stuff, I believe a girl should be treated with respect and not be made to act like a dog, and as for the 2nd ending it was no different than the first the only reason I read it to the end is because you are a great writer, with that being said this is not one of your better stories in my opinion
I love your work! For me I pick the lesbian ending! It just made a better story and erotic lesbian experience! Thank you!
I love all your stories. Two endings are a good idea, I find difficulty in deciding which I prefer. I hope more are coming. No description of anal submission, which I found to be a pity. Keep up the good work.
I loved your story and enjoyed both endings. In fact when I was reading the first ending I was thinking how much fun it would be if Mistress Katherine had a cock.
This is a seductive, and a silk stocking lovers dream. I just could not stop reading once I started. The two different endings were quite a treat. The extra treat were the pictures and the sensual model Lily, loved her. Please keep these cumming.
At first I was turned off by the first photos. A bit too mundane for Literotica, and I almost went elsewhere, but I'm glad I "stuck it out" because it gave me an erection that lasted for hours. Both endings were fabulous. Your model is quite fetching and looks quite edible herself! I hope there is more to come and the office setting is perfect for my fantasies as I have been there myself. It brings back wet memories of when I was letting it all hang out as it were. We would have both been fired on the spot for what we did after hours, but would I do it again? You bet your ass!
I loved Lily and her being seduced willingly by her boss. I read the story in three parts, and imagined myself in Lily's place. I'm a 47 year old bi-male, and have had fantasies of being dominated like Lily at an interview or at a job. I didn't care for the trans-sex ending, it detracted from Lily's story of being dommed by her boss.
I love your writing, it's professional style. I'm looking for more about Lily and her boss. Although the photos are beautiful, your writing can stand on it's own. Please don't wait for photos of Lily to continue the story!
When I have a few free moments, I'll look for other stories you wrote.
Thanks again!
I liked both endings. The shemale ending added a special kink. Lily's photos are really appreciated. Loved seeing her. Hope there is more cumming for this pair. Great work !
I loved having 2 endings. I hope you and Lilly have a long partnership.
Like all of the stories you have written that I have read excellent work. So very well thought out, I loved it!
Very sexy! Beautiful girl (model)! Erotic and descriptive story! I love lesbian sex, so the alternative ending did nothing for me.
Really preferred the shemale ending! That lovely young lady in the story, with cum on her lips -- major turn on! She is lovely.
The story enhanced by Lily's photographs is excellent. Liked both endings. Please mention to Lily that if she can use off-camera flash, or have a large light source (like a big hotel window with a sheer curtain), illuminating one side of her body more than the other, the photos will be even more attractive than they are. It would also be super to see a photo of Lily with her hair covering her face as if she has whipped her head from side to side during a climax.
another awesome story. Thank you. Both endings were great. Are you going to pick one and build on it?
And thank you, Lily. You're beautiful.
I really love the development of the story. I do think that the references to her being a lesbian should not be there. If she is to service customers of both sexes and if she enjoys sex with both genders she is clearly bi-sexual. She refers to men as 'pigs' but her Mistress is training her to use the word 'cunt' for women. Both words are loaded to the gills with derogitory conitations. Cunt being the one word I could speak in my home that would instantly banish me to the dog house. The dog, of course, would as a result be welcome on my side of the bed for several days. I enjoy stories about Hermaphrodites and their largely unexplored sex lives. Mistress Katherine is not a Hermaphrodite. She is male, but has tits. This ending is confusing as the Boss's future purpose becomes unclear. A female Mistress would use her submissiveness wisely and allow clients access to her sparingly. She would train her pet well in the ways of pleasing a woman thouroughly by personal experience. A male would probably be less careful, more wasteful of her charms. He would use her submissiveness less to his advantage than her fear of failure and there is a difference. To strive to please because one Wishes to and to strive to please out of Fear of Failure are two different things. So I think the Alt. ending is destructive to the story.
I enjoyed the journey, was glad I stuck with it and am looking forward to future travels involving The lovely Lily and people she engages with.
I find much to like about the beautiful and well named Lily and her sensuous photos of which I would love to see more.
I liked both endings, but ultimately preferred the lesbian slant on things. I'm looking forward to seeing more of Lily and her beautifully sexy little tits and diamond tip nipples.
Loved the seduction of Lily by Mistress Katherine. Didn't know enough about Lily to judge if she wanted the the cock surprise. enjoyed the lesbian story much more. Your model is delicious.!
Lesbian ending by far the best. Would have loved more pics. She is simply gorgeous and I'm grateful to get to see her body. Are you two lovers? I did not like seeing cum on her face. While some women like it, I don't. My husband does not ask me to suck him although he loves eating me as much as he loves fucking me. I've blown him twice in 30 yrs.
You are one of my favorite writers. There are some gems here. If I ever get to live out my fantasy with another women, I'd like it to be with one of my fav writers or one of their characters.
Both endings are good but I prefered the lesbian ending .
Excellent story extremely well written. While I suspected what the alternate ending was, I would have revealed the cock to Lily while she was under the desk when the client came in. But it's your story and a great one at that.
Great story, as usual ;-) looking forward to cuming with the next one...
Fantastic story: especially the first ending.
I was disappointed to hear that Lily's main assets were her legs, without doubting for a moment that they are absolutely stunning.
I was completely over the moon when the magnificient titties got a well deserved outing. They were every bit as beautiful as I longed for them to be. Delighted they get Mistress Katherine's approval. Keep them on show!
A little over the top. The second ending was a surprise; I liked it best.
The story was great, especially the tranny part, but the pics put it over the edge.
She is smoking hot, and the cum on her mouth... What can be said.
Hope next story has anal and a nice leaky cream pie finish.
No one, but no one writes better than you. There are several great erotic writers out there, but I don't think any of them address the diversity of genres that you do. Gay, Lesbian, Interracial, Dom/Sub, Male/Female Bi, friend/family bringing other friends/family into the fun/degradation, etc. I've commented on this before. Great writing, story lines, characters, etc. You do it all very well and I always look forward to reading every new story. Great work Keep it up (pun intended).
I love your imagination . I prefer the second ending more , but both turned me on. thanks.
I liked it. The first ending was the better of the two. The second was interesting but doesn't seem to fit as well to me. A continuation of the first ending has so many possibilities. Carry on!
I'm STILL laughing at how silly this was. And the pictures combined with the ridiculous story just made me laugh harder! You should have posted this in Humor and satire. The syrup the model used as fake cum was particularly hilarious. I think that this is what 10 year olds think sex is. STILL laughing.........
What a fantastic story, I preferred the fist ending over the second. I found the phrase "her cock" awkward to read but I agree it was the correct phrase to use. Of all of the photos my favorite is the one where Lilly is sniffing the panties. It is the only one that you can see her beautiful eyes.
Loved the story, Lily is perfect, and I loved the second ending... Especially the facial photos!!!
Great story, lovely model, like both endings, but prefer the second option.
Ms. Jasmine, this has to be one of the most erotic stories that I've read on this site! Ms.Lily is extremely sexy and her posing in the hot lingerie is so satisfying for my horny lingerie fetish! I've had to change into a dry/clean thong three times.... Mmmm!!! You've made this pantyboi extremely excited!!!
Thanks, SissyCrissy.............xoxoxo
Thanks to all your stories I now want to be not only dommed, but dommed by a shemale as well. Your writings have pulled me in and made me frequently fantasize about BDSM and shemales/TS. Seriously, thanks.
Great story, beautiful model. Choose one of the endings? I'd be happy with either!
Loved both - you have a real gift and just might be my favourite writer on Literotica. You are definitely the best writer in Oakville
I liked both endings. I think the pictures helped sell the story great job looking forward to more.
Thought about this all night, cant say yet which ending I liked better. What I would like to see is some kind of plot twist that put the submissive in charge and turn the tables on Katherine or some co workers or maybe a client or two. Perhaps a combination of them. What would a submissive do if she found herself in power? Even if just for a moment, could be cool. Anyway, I loved the story as is. Thanks for the evening.
Just want.to say that this has been one of the best stories I have read and very tasteful pics too
I personally hope you continue both. The voices I'm a little ancy about because I personally dislike men in erotica but eh each their own. Thanks for the story.
I am not normally attract to lesbian stoys but I loved this one. I think I liked the first ending the best but both were super hot.
Loved the first ending and hope Katherine lets multiple male clients gang fuck her next
Ending #1 is perfectly fine, but #2 surprised me - was completely unexpected and so "raised" the story for me and made it memorable.
We've seen one hole full of cum.
Can we see the other two please.
When I thought a smart college student would have pulled out an edited copy of the video and gone to HR. In a company that size retire was the prize. And the Company would have paid through the nose to keep The idiot Mistress out of jail and the Company out of the news. That would have been a good twist and a decent ending. Your ending was lacking. It was just the same old stuff seen here everyday. No imagination.
Glad to see a great effort and a courageous contribution from Lily get the recognition that you both deserve.
hi
Thanks to all who voted ms read this story...as well as commented.
It was chosen as one of the three winners of the 2015 April Fools Day Contest which is an honour and a tribute to the beautiful Lily!!!
I hope to work with Lily again in a future story...not a sequel likely...but a brand new kinkier story...
So please leave comments if you liked this story and want to see more of my beautiful model Lily!
Jasmine March 2015
I good story, and a beautiful model. I wouldn't object to training Lily, myself. Gorgeous.
Best of luck in the contest. This deserves top placement.
I look forward to the many more adventures of Lily and Mistress Katherine
Thanks silkstockingslover for another great story. Keep them coming (no pun intended) Only wish you could show pussies in your stories. I ended up stoking myself and shot cum allover my hands and dripped onto my balls.
Thanks a lot and can't wait for your next submission.
Mike
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Pussy pics are not allowed unfortunately.
Ass pics I believe there was a couple in the story, although likely still with underwear on
This story was supposed to be the slowest strip tease ever...
The next ally story out thus summer likely will be a completely different story and, I think, a lot kinkier.
This one is a work of art. Loved the way you wrapped the story around the pictures so nicely. You two mesh pictures and words the way Rogers and Hammerstein meshed words and music. I actually loves both endings. I might give a slight edge to the first for no reason since I am a sucker for a good shemale twist in any story. Maybe just because the lovely Lilly was so anticipating her first taste of her mistress and I felt a bit denied on her behalf.
A word about Lilly. You are absolutely lights out sexy!!! I shot across the room looking at pictures of your gorgeous little figure and your absolutely PERFECT breasts. Don't ever apologize for them. They are amazing.
Jasmine- you own me.
I'm 50/50 with this one. The story premise is cliche for this type story, yet the writing and dialog are very good. The boss/employee-dom/sub is also stereotypical, yet you didn't get too over the top with it to make it approach silly levels. The Sub still had some backbone a few times. Showed that she could top from the bottom, as they say. Humm..yeah, not sure. ~flip~
"Heads?"
Critique; saw two things that always get to me when I read erotica. First is that police lineup description. 5' this, hair color that, bra cup 44 whatever. Don't do that. YOU, are better than that as a writer.
The second is almost worse; the run on letters. That "I'mmmmm cummming!!!!" Even when used sparingly it can be annoying to the reader, and when overused it's teeth setting in the extreme. Fork on a plate, fingernails on a blackboard. You can do as much with simple descriptions and very basic dialog...and have it be far hotter. That is a display of writing skill and true talent, which you have, and which using that run on lettering takes away from your story. It shows you skill as less than it is.
When it comes to the dialog between characters you are excellent. it is your strong point. Now, knowing that as you already did, work harder from your point of strength to develop your narrative to match your dialog's writing level.
My opinions, worth what they are worth.
MST
Excellent story yet again! I loved how you didn't just make it all about sex straight away. Like her outfit at first was unattractive and at the end all the photos were amazing!!
Yet again another unbelievable story!! However the 1st ending was defiently a lot better in my opinion. Make as many as possible :D
Always love your stories. Ending 2 was a wonderful surprise and great ending. I am a CD/TG and love those powerful women with something extra.
I am leaning toward the first ending of the story. The second ending was a surprise, but not as erotic as the fist.
very disappointed in you sorry you could have shown more of Lilly tenbears43
Lilly's pictures are breathtaking, I'm saddened that they are cropped, she looks lovely and I've filled in the missing face on my own. Lilly's pictures really embellish you story. I preferred the origonal ending, and think the blindfold and voices will make for a nice story. Why do I prefer the lesbian storys that I am excluded from, or participating in, so voyering it is.Again she is lovely !
Also the short stocking are not my favorite if anyone asked I would like them much higher, at least higher than the skirt hem.
Jasmine, this is, in my opinion, your best story ever! And Lily is such a beautiful model! I preferred the lesbian ending over the shemale ending. Can't wait for the sequel!
not only were the pics amazjng, the story was fantastic! Well done. I really enjoyed ending 1. Although two was fun also! No complaints here!
Lily... Beautiful!
as always. I haven't been commenting much lately. I preferred the first ending. The second was okay but it just left me cold.. Always like to read your works. <3
Once again my favorite author came up with another fantastic story. I love the 1st ending more. I love stories of complete submission. I so wish i were Lily
fantastic story. I personally liked the second ending. It caught me by surprise. Can't wait to read more.
great story liked both endings, good twist to story, great pics hope more to come had wet panties all time reading storyhrou
I really like this combination of 5-star models and your mix of storytelling a lot. Wish we could see 'more' of Lily since she is quite a hottie. :)
The story itself was very focused and fun read. I like that the character was developed a bit before losing too much of her personality in the submission. I think the build-up to the submission felt a bit contrived but still fun. I think it would be more interesting if Katherine had a more commanding presence than just a sexual one. Overall really liked the story and the first ending was absolutely superb. :)
+1 for all the desk/feet play. Totally look forward to more like it. Maybe you could try different things like some chastity device play or remote dildos. :)
Loved the story. Model beautiful. Hope Lily's mom gets the chance to meet Mistress Katherine soon.
Thank you SSL for yet another erotic tale. Lily is absolutely one sexy women. Both endings were equally well done, but I am slightly leaning toward the second one.
Many thanks for sharing.
Wonderful story as always. I hope to do an illustrated story for my 100th submission.
Just fucking WOW on the story and the beautiful Lily. 5*'s is all I'm allowed but deserves more.
Easily one of your best. Both endings were great, although the lesbian ending might have been more to my liking, slightly.
Well done. A story and photos to match I hope that you both had fun collaborating. Having two endings was interesting and will probably appeal to a wider audience. My preference is for the more traditional lesbian interaction. Lily was very photogenic, and you are correct, those lips are a joy to behold. I very much hope that we get to see more of them illustrating Katherine and Lily's further adventures.
That was the hottest teasing story i have ever read.
plus, what an amazing plot twist.
if you don't win i woykd be shocked
Wonderful story and the pics were too! Hats off to you, or should I say, "pants off to you"!