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- Summer Heat
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All Comments on 'Summer Heat'
by Smuttyandfun
- 23 Comments
Romantic, sexy, believable and fun. I'm new around here but I will certainly be catching up with some of your other works in the near future. Great read!
This is the first story I read on here and I wasn't expecting to end with little tears of joy lol! So sweet and fun. Thanks for writing this!
Great story. 5 stars.
But what’s the rush? I truly try to never tell an author how to write their story. I just know that I’d have lovingly read a six page version where they got to know each other better over the course of a few days before they finally couldn’t keep their hand off each other. I’d have loved to spend more time with these sweet characters, instead of the snapshot we got.
Well, they say it’s best to leave the audience wanting more. I certainly wanted more.
Auh, Smutty, another fun read. Really enjoyed the adventure. The outcome was pretty evident early on (not a problem) the surprise was how fast they progressed. I enjoyed meeting another of your vertural couples and look forward to the next. Say hi to Fun for me!
Cheers
SAGE
Hi, S&F, fun little story! I liked the hints that you dropped early in the story about the twist; it was enough to make me suspect but there was no proof until the call and Christopher’s confession on what he’d learned. If you’d had a little more time, I’d have liked to have seen them interact a little more before coming to grips with their feelings, but it was quite sexy and fun as it was and I really liked the outcome and the ending. Best wishes in the contest!
Very nice romance, although the ex's getting together wasn't really necessary. 5/5
I enjoyed the story, but I think it would have been more erotic if there had been a few days of will she, won't she, or would he or not, and both of them and us, knowing they would, eventually.
It was a nice, well-written story, though.
Enjoy reading about people who sound and act like real people, not imaginary characters. Well done.
A nice sweet story, but a little flat, due to a lack of any kind of conflict. Phone calls with the ex’s don’t really count. Yeah, sometimes life can be nice, but it doesn’t make for exciting reading.
Overall, good story but could have had more plot and development of the situations.... and several more parts instead of a rush to a happy ending.